Dangerous Men Part... 5?
Added 2021-07-01 02:44:16 +0000 UTCI honestly don't know what part this is at this point, but it hardly matters. Ugh. My brain is overloaded. These two, woof.
So... you might be wondering why it cuts off before the main act. That would be because this part is already 5k words long and the final chunk needs more editing than I can finish tonight. I'll be uploading the whole thing in a few days, y'all can stagger your evenings appropriately.
And for anyone who's thinking these two would make a great couple, no. No they wouldn't. They would NEVER stop fighting.
As usual, let me know how I'm doing! To say this chapter is spicy is putting it mildly. But if you're here, you know what you're in for.
Comments
I mean Luther and Amon are 39/34 right? But Luther thinks he is a decade older than Amon. It give me the feeling that he always underestimates others' age, which is somehow funny for me XD
Yude
2021-07-03 18:03:21 +0000 UTCHe is a decade older than Amon. . . I'm confused. What does that have to do with the age gap between him and Finn? I'm lost : P
Rukis
2021-07-03 17:30:03 +0000 UTCLuther always feels himself older than he actually is. Still remember in RL he consider himself decade on Amon XD. For this story maybe 31/26 or 32/27 could be reasonable?
Yude
2021-07-02 07:57:28 +0000 UTCLOL
Rukis
2021-07-01 22:33:54 +0000 UTCShould be a 5 year difference, based on their canonical ages in Kindred - Finnegan at 30, Luther at say, 35. Working back from that, first off there's less of an age gap than I thought, but that honestly just makes Finnegan calling him an 'old man' funny, and VERY fitting for a twenty-something dealing with a thirty-something :P So, doing the math, Luther would be 28 here. Which I don't think is a problem, timeline-wise? I dunno, I'll have to check Heretic. The fact is, these short stories are kind of floating in the timeline regardless, I write first and consider semantics second :P Sorry if that shattered some illusion of competence on my part, haha
Rukis
2021-07-01 22:33:19 +0000 UTCI am sure Rukis has a big whiteboard somewhere with dates and timelines
Marcwolf
2021-07-01 13:26:39 +0000 UTCI'm not sure if I misunderstand. I think on FA you mentioned Kindred is roughly 4-5 years before the events of Red Lantern, which means at that point Luther is 34 or 35. If in Kindred Finn is 30, then he should be 4-5 years younger than Luther. But in this story Luther should be between 31 to 35 right? During his years in the fleet before Serwich. If given Finn 23 in this story, then Luther is almost a decade on him.
Yude
2021-07-01 09:27:05 +0000 UTCAND THEN I MADE EVERYONE SAD :p
Rukis
2021-07-01 08:26:45 +0000 UTCKindred is set before events in Red Lantern, all of my novels are. Remember, Grant is in it ; )
Rukis
2021-07-01 07:35:33 +0000 UTCI'm not sure if I said 'short', but Finn's exploits with Luther could only have taken place years before Kindred, due to Luther's voyage to Serwich. And this is set a few years before that, even. Luther has not even gotten orders to go to Serwich at this point.
Rukis
2021-07-01 07:35:01 +0000 UTCThis happens just before Luther went to Serwich on the Dark Continent. He spent four years there, fighting the Cathazra before he found a way to evacuate the colony and Kindred took place a few years after the story of Red Lantern. The timeline fits.
Trejaan Cavelion
2021-07-01 07:24:48 +0000 UTCA little question about Finn's age. I think it mentioned in Kindred Finn is thirty, and this story seems like happened a short time before Kindred. How could he be 23 at this point?
Yude
2021-07-01 06:49:30 +0000 UTCOr write something from Finn's point of view?
Marcwolf
2021-07-01 04:13:10 +0000 UTCDuran Duran - evil scientist has Barbarella strapped in to his 'Excessive Machine' and intends to kill via pleasure. I somehow had the vision Of Luther playing Duran Duran.. And Finn being Barberella. The battle of who will last the other. This is a wonderful campy movie from the late 60's. Yes - the band Duran Duran DID use this name. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Eu7GgZbCLsY&t=10s
Marcwolf
2021-07-01 04:12:26 +0000 UTCThat deep sniff
Toddly
2021-07-01 04:07:16 +0000 UTCno, I dunno that one
Rukis
2021-07-01 03:58:00 +0000 UTCExcellent work! I love how Luther isn't JUST interested in having a bit of fun. He's genuinely concerned that Finn enjoy himself too and doesn't have any regrets for trying the pleasures of male companionship. I can't wait for more! (I obviously will, as long as you need to finish it... but, I'll be pining!) ;)
Trejaan Cavelion
2021-07-01 03:46:45 +0000 UTCOn a side note.. ever see the film Barbarella.. where she is strapped to Duran Duran's organ...
Marcwolf
2021-07-01 03:42:04 +0000 UTCA brilliant chapter. I really love the slow burn of s sex scene rather than the fast and frantic 'bang. Finn is very lucky that Luther had Such an experienced and caring lover.
Marcwolf
2021-07-01 03:40:39 +0000 UTC"But it's cool to fight because you can have that makeup sex! You know what I’m saying? That angry sex. That sex with an attitude." -- Lamont, "American History X"
Jem
2021-07-01 03:11:05 +0000 UTCYeah this'd be the one. I mean this part's bad enough, but. . . just wait until I post all of it.
Rukis
2021-07-01 03:10:07 +0000 UTCSo is the one you mentioned on twitter as the thirstiest?
Alden
2021-07-01 03:00:55 +0000 UTC
