Illicit Alliance - Update 2/2/22
Added 2022-02-03 09:33:46 +0000 UTCCheck out that date. Pretty cool.
This is the update to IA for the Full Story tier folks. Eventually I'm going to start assigning chapters to this story, but thus far it's just never had them. Remember these are all beta drafts, so a lot could change.
The gang's misadventure continues!
There is a cameo in this chapter, if it isn't immediately obvious. I try to weave them in naturally, so feel free to let me know how I'm doing. It helps that most of my cameo donors design characters that fit effortlessly into the setting <3
Comments
I should have read this before I ate some ice cream. Unlike me, I am sure Luther would still look good if he gained a bit.
Alden
2022-02-06 05:32:15 +0000 UTCOh that's evil
Rukis
2022-02-03 23:13:57 +0000 UTCGrayson's new favorite way to annoy Luther: 4 simple words. "Have you gained weight?"
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-02-03 21:19:00 +0000 UTCAlso, I keep getting that vibe that Lotus is gonna betray them. I also chuckled about Grayson deciding that Cuthbert aimed wrong, being too sure he could hit the heart when he should have gone lower. He's got an interesting sense of tactics... and self-preservation!
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-02-03 17:28:12 +0000 UTCExcellent as always! A couple of things that stand out: Grayson is still really bothered by the casual bit of murder from last time. I like that. Luther being all uptight about his figure. Grayson not being able to help himself in digging into Luther's 'weak spot'. It's just protecting himself. right?
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-02-03 17:25:58 +0000 UTCLoving the series and the world building. I can almost smell the various flavors of the port.
Marcwolf
2022-02-03 14:06:49 +0000 UTC
