Illicit Alliance Update 2-28
Added 2022-03-01 03:09:19 +0000 UTCKind of proud of this chapter. Let me know what you all think!
Many years of writing kind of coming together in this story, many of which were elements I'd intended as reveals for the main Red Lantern series. At least some of you in the know will be doing the 'pointing at the screen' meme XP
Comments
also, "That's like the Robert of Huudari names" LOL
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 22:01:52 +0000 UTCI love the whole thing where he talks about his noble intentions but admits that he's just one man and no matter what he does, the biggest way he could EVER effect the status quo would be to inspire others
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 17:09:33 +0000 UTCLoved it! It must be so challenging not wanting to write Grayson and Luther immediately connecting and being friendly. Gotta built up to it.
Connor Laleff
2022-03-01 16:08:01 +0000 UTCThe threads of this Tapestry are endless and yet wonderous. Where will they lead us in their weaving.
Marcwolf
2022-03-01 15:18:02 +0000 UTCLoved this.. And the name drops too. I think that Reed is continually having to re-evaluate Luther, and each time the bar moves higher. I'm also sensing the instinct to comfortably work under a more capable, stronger canine that Reed is putting off. I doubt that he's really mean anyone of Luther's caliber yet.
Marcwolf
2022-03-01 15:16:45 +0000 UTCYou have an amazing way of writing stories. It's extremely hard to stop reading and always has me guessing to what might happen next. As someone who's been reading this series since Heretic, I see what you mean about "pointing at the screen meme". It's like every individual story is a small piece of a masterly crafted puzzle that of which portrays a living, breathing world. This is "Lord of the Rings" Good. Thank you for the Amazing content.
Kentendo1
2022-03-01 12:48:04 +0000 UTCI was going to send this to you as a letter, but you'd just complained you didn't get as many comments on Patreon as on FA... I hope this helps ;)
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 06:52:57 +0000 UTCvery powerful ending to the chapter! Love some of the things this one is setting up!
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 06:51:48 +0000 UTCscared fox is scared
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 06:51:19 +0000 UTCalso interesting that he'd been quick to analyze the mechanics... not the reason... probably didn't need to wonder since he knew Luther is gay
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 06:51:04 +0000 UTCcaught looking at Luther's scars... nice that he could recognize that there'd been more than one flogging involved.
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 06:50:15 +0000 UTCit's spelled 'recuperation' BTW
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 06:49:35 +0000 UTCWe'd just had to kill someone. (love that he has such trouble getting over that)
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 06:49:06 +0000 UTCOMG! THERE'S the namedrop! a loris!!! ( I know... it's Ahsan, but still...)
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 06:48:52 +0000 UTC“Don’t mistake my wanting to keep a clear head for having a weak constitution,” he muttered. LOL
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 06:48:36 +0000 UTC“That is the most Amurescan thing you’ve ever said,” I laughed at him. (it WAS such an imperial thing to say)
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 06:48:08 +0000 UTCwatching a fish trying to flee... a very nice and unexpected metaphor... gives an insight into some of the enigma of the cattle dog
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 06:47:35 +0000 UTC"And I wanted so badly to meet him." love that
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 06:47:17 +0000 UTCum... maybe because she IS asking him to choose?
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 06:46:58 +0000 UTC"The name I’d leave scrawled in my wake in the history books would be a mess for cleverer men and women to sort out." nice to see he's still 'progressive' enough to think of women as being capable of being historians... a rarity in his time ;)
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 06:46:33 +0000 UTChe has a bottom alright
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 06:46:10 +0000 UTCGrayson is feeling sus of Lotus
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 06:45:51 +0000 UTCa lot
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 06:45:23 +0000 UTCrunning commentary as I read follows: OK, let's see... It's raining
Trejaan Cavelion
2022-03-01 06:45:05 +0000 UTCVery nice to see a certain hyena is keeping up his good work. A excellent new chapter.
Glassan
2022-03-01 03:31:56 +0000 UTC
