BWS Suggestions
Added 2015-09-13 03:31:56 +0000 UTCThis is to all of you +10 patrons who are still pledging:
Dinner with Sister script is almost complete, I'm at the process of doing the base sketch for each page. However there are still some little holes here and there where I am able to include some themes or cameos or whatever.
Go ahead and write some suggestions on what you would like to see in Dinner with sister!
Comments
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Robert Palatchi
2015-09-17 06:17:15 +0000 UTCI want Grace to be as mean and feisty as ever. Personally I don't want her to be super nice now even if she's learned this may be her family. I like her when she acts like she's better than everyone else. But if that conflicts with the story you have written, I acquiesce. They're your characters, you know better than anyone what is coming.
Richtoffen
2015-09-15 17:01:56 +0000 UTCHow about some scenes that accentuate Grace's weight gain. BTW first time leaving a comment ever, I truly do enjoy work. Best wishes to whatever you may strive for.
RamiKunai
2015-09-15 01:22:48 +0000 UTCHonestly... I want to see Kat chunking up a little too... but I don't know if that works out with your story plan and I don't want said plan being broken for such a minor fantasy. I've loved the first two and the formula has been good so far.
Schattenjäger
2015-09-14 06:22:06 +0000 UTCMore trying on outfits would be great, as would be characters comparing their gains. Perhaps a shopping trip is in order, as well fitting clothing seems to be getting scarce, although I'm sure such a trip would necessarily involve trying on clothes in a size that used to fit :) I second Phat94's opinion on keeping things reasonable, perhaps even, dare I suggest it, some dieting or working out to stabilize if not lose weight. All in all it sounds like you've got it figured out and I'm excited to see where the story goes next!
Kestrel
2015-09-14 02:03:35 +0000 UTCTorn clothing is always my number one, so any of that would be amazing. Really looking forward to more BWS!
Prax
2015-09-13 22:39:35 +0000 UTC番
Kipteitei
2015-09-13 14:29:16 +0000 UTCSince I feel like it's expected of me at this point I'm gonna go ahead and say "Bigger" for a theme.
RaZor
2015-09-13 13:41:28 +0000 UTCHrrm, it's tough to suggest things without knowing the script. But the single most important thing I want to see is; your comic! Just because you have a patreon doesn't mean you have to go too far overboard with taking other peoples ideas. Don't feel like you have to rush to get to the lesbofat action if you want to have some pages of dialogue or whatever. I want to see how you want this story to go down! I'd also say I don't want Kip getting /too/ ridiculously big, but I think that's probably unavoidable given her size at the end of LWS, and her slimming down would probably be heretical. She'll look good at any size in your art, so it's not too big a deal. I-if Kip has another costume trying on parade like in LWS I think it would be funny and very amazingly good if one of them was Kip dressed as Shimakaze. Costume cameo! And now I'll finish off by being really dumb and saying I would LOVE it if there was a scene where Kip got wedged in a door, or a window, or anywhere, due to her size, and Grace has to push on her butt and Kat has to pull on her arms. I'd smile even if Kip just starts getting wary of tight entrances due to her increasingly tubby butt, like she started complaining about the chairs at the end of LWS. Probably too late to add in at this stage but I have to ask because I've wanted it to happen pretty much since BWS. Anything else that I could really think to add, that's not totally dumb, would be the stuff that's pretty much guaranteed to happen anyway. Sorry for the wall of text, I'm just too excited! Good luck!
Phat94
2015-09-13 13:31:46 +0000 UTCWell, if we're asking for Cameos... I could easily suggest my character Risa making a cameo. <a href="http://narsilcmorovja.deviantart.com/art/Com-Risa-550296873" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://narsilcmorovja.deviantart.com/art/Com-Risa-550296873</a>
Rhys Lawson
2015-09-13 11:48:10 +0000 UTCYeah, a weigh-off between Kip and Grace would be sweeeeet~!
Adorable Saucer
2015-09-13 09:58:34 +0000 UTCAny scene similar to this and I'd pledge $10 forever: <a href="http://kipteitei.deviantart.com/art/Clever-Girl-296293963" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://kipteitei.deviantart.com/art/Clever-Girl-296293963</a> Maybe a cameo of Lalia from Cracing Control? Might be too far out there, but it would be neat to see her done in your style.
Aftermath
2015-09-13 04:39:21 +0000 UTC- Kip and Kat's dad looking for that dough in the freezer and finding it missing - Maybe a scale scene showing their exact weights? - Oh god please show some tight clothing pulling at the seams - As probably planned, keep making them bigger OuO I look forward to seeing what you have planned, Kip!
Chrysana
2015-09-13 04:29:29 +0000 UTCOh god Picarto why you enter before I finish commenting, and mentioned Kip already drew Gina once and she looks amazing in his style: <a href="http://i.imgur.com/5rl39Qz.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://i.imgur.com/5rl39Qz.jpg</a>
BioYuGi
2015-09-13 04:14:13 +0000 UTCI would be so stoked to see my OC Gina make a cameo: <a href="http://i.imgur.com/i1jw55s.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://i.imgur.com/i1jw55s.jpg</a> <a href="http://i.imgur.com/8qthxOK.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://i.imgur.com/8qthxOK.jpg</a> <a href="http://i.imgur.com/waczzc9.png" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://i.imgur.com/waczzc9.png</a> <a href="http://i.imgur.com/cG1myzT.png" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://i.imgur.com/cG1myzT.png</a>
BioYuGi
2015-09-13 04:13:33 +0000 UTCI would be so stoked to see my OC Gina make a cameo: <a href="http://i.imgur.com/i1jw55s.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://i.imgur.com/i1jw55s.jpg</a> <a href="http://i.imgur.com/8qthxOK.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://i.imgur.com/8qthxOK.jpg</a> <a href="http://i.imgur.com/waczzc9.png" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://i.imgur.com/waczzc9.png</a> <a href="http://i.imgur.com/cG1myzT.png" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://i.imgur.com/cG1myzT.png</a>
BioYuGi
2015-09-13 04:13:33 +0000 UTC
