No Lunch Break! Page 206
Added 2019-03-13 13:26:26 +0000 UTCSyd can't let the rat out of the bag
Sorry if this page is a bit tough to read. I try to cram as much dialogue in one page as possible so conversations don't take multiple weeks of pages to finish.
Comments
By that, I mean just a little "2 weeks later" or so.
Berry's Bakery
2019-03-14 00:56:08 +0000 UTCHey Kip, maybe you want to go back to the pages that don't really explain the time jump? I think it might be a small, but nice edit for future readers ^-^
Berry's Bakery
2019-03-14 00:52:25 +0000 UTCtop cuck
Kipteitei
2019-03-13 22:25:09 +0000 UTCThat last panel is so sweet ♥ Sydney is so strong
Kie Dough
2019-03-13 21:38:36 +0000 UTCThank you for the way you did dialogue, I found it easy to read and you're 100% right about conversation flow. I also loved the bottom right panel!
Ani-mam
2019-03-13 21:30:33 +0000 UTCNah that's just her Pork Shoulder... I mean fat shoulder.
Jo
2019-03-13 21:11:37 +0000 UTCWhy do I feel like I'm reading the start of an NTR doujin
Phat94
2019-03-13 19:05:44 +0000 UTCOh, rats!
Some Aigis
2019-03-13 18:05:29 +0000 UTCThey got together multiple times before the spa event. Page 124 was kind of a montage but thinking back I should have emphasized time skip more.
Kipteitei
2019-03-13 15:57:02 +0000 UTC;w;
Viro Veteruscy
2019-03-13 15:18:25 +0000 UTCIs that a titty grab in panel 4?
Belly219
2019-03-13 14:38:24 +0000 UTCYou cant just accuse the Meatball Queen like that, Tina! She'll make you dissappear!
Steve Pig
2019-03-13 13:40:18 +0000 UTCSandy's feelings? They got together twice for dinner and never got specifically intimate. I guess she had a moment of sexual interest, she cray
Geb Baserr
2019-03-13 13:33:31 +0000 UTCSandy also knows about “the mouse” 👀
female protagonist
2019-03-13 13:32:33 +0000 UTC
