Drop-Out, page 95
Added 2017-04-30 04:00:38 +0000 UTCit was very tempting to make her say "closure for whom" instead of for who.
anyway, the tail-end of this page's conversation was originally in the night scene of the abandoned house, regarding "hurting everyone", where lola says she should be the one to decide if she was hurt or not.
i changed it for various reasons like the focus of the conversation in that scene, and a more assertive take toward personal autonomy fit lola's mentality at this point in the trip better.
Comments
When Lola's eyes line up they tell the truth, the whole truth, the emotional truth, and then immediately after sugar tears up/gets upset. Feel like that's foreshadowing?
Uncannysmuggler
2017-04-30 12:07:14 +0000 UTCfacial expressions perhaps even further off the chain than usual here
Kristaps Porzingis
2017-04-30 05:39:27 +0000 UTC
