Drop-Out, page 98
Added 2017-05-18 04:00:03 +0000 UTCearlier iterations of this scene did not include another driver; sugar drifted all the way to the edge of the other side of the road and the grip from the dirt caused her to spin out.
i wanted to make the setting seem a little more believable (ie. less barren) and tried to see if adding a third party led to any ideas, ended up liking the dialog with him in better and that was the finalized version.
Comments
the lighting in this page and the blurred effect at the beginning are so good!! also "gonna end up killing someone" ouch...
malphym
2017-05-18 04:11:33 +0000 UTCmore double meanings..
Jordan
2017-05-18 04:11:07 +0000 UTC
