familial stranger, page 18
Added 2018-06-26 05:43:34 +0000 UTCfirst page - previous page - next page
such foul language, lola...
this was a tough page to figure out, because i wanted to wrap it up in 2 pages, but there are still several things i want to canonize. gonna see how well i can pull it together on the next page, maybe extend it into 2.
(also: no, 'i want to want to live' is not a typo!)
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big mood lola
Jordan
2018-06-26 19:53:21 +0000 UTCAlso Lola literally having to be like "defend yourself and step into this conflict" is...I have a lot of feelings about it, you can see how much they actually want it to be a Conversation imo
Khyle
2018-06-26 06:06:40 +0000 UTC"You seem unhappy" YEAH NO SHIT JASON LMAO...I always got the feeling that Lola really wants to like Jason, I wish he was making it a little easier here for both of their sakes lol. Idk I'm loving this conversation bc they clearly wanna both get along but u gotta get thru...A Lot before you get there, I really like how you're dealing with the dialogue pacing and how they're both bouncing off each other w their conflict approaches & how Jason is carrying his guilt. Also Lola's shiny ass hair...........is good
Khyle
2018-06-26 06:05:50 +0000 UTC
