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fresh meat, page 7

Added 2018-06-29 06:59:47 +0000 UTC

1) while there was some ambiguity with the intentions of the nurses up to this point, the deliberate mind games start here.

2) i try to go out of my way to make sure i write kim like a teenager... a little immature, a little emotional, a little self-centered. i noticed that she's definitely been (rightfully) upset and pissy multiple times throughout the comic, but her depression has sort of been AFK, at least the classical idea of depression. she is definitely an angry depressed person, as i was, but i was frequently also enthusiastically self-piteous, and still sad a lot, so i wanted to give kim some breathing room to just... be a depressed teenager at the end of the page here.
(i also liked the enumeration on her general anger here -- she backs down if someone challenges her anger with reciprocal anger, which means that at least SOME of it, if not a lot of it, is bluffing.)

3) THE SHADING IS NOT DONE it was my fault i tried a different method of tackling the comic panels out of order it WILL be added but i at least wanted the writing part up if it was even presentable by midnight, SORRY AGAIN