wasn't expecting to get this one done. and while i would prefer to have had more time to work on it... i would prefer to not work on friday more.
i was originally contemplating cutting the part where kim glances into the quiet room and sees sugar taking a little nap, and the hyena nurse would bring sugar into the room to replace kim as a head instead of tabitha, announcing that she fell asleep again, which would serve the same expositional purpose.
while there were a bunch of small little reasons for choosing not to axe it, but mainly, i preferred the seeping sense of dread imagining somebody like tabitha being pulled into a role playing group therapy session (sorry, tabs).
i'm pretty okay with most of the shot choices on this page, at least. it's mostly the little details or tweaks that didn't get put in, but the compositional strength is much more important to me for a story.
Plover
2019-07-21 08:22:07 +0000 UTCClaus
2019-07-20 05:32:25 +0000 UTC