The Book Club. Chapter One. Page 16
Added 2016-11-06 02:36:14 +0000 UTCThe end of Chapter One.
I hope you all enjoyed it. Feedback is very welcome. Are there things you particularly liked about the comic? Things you didn't like? Things you want to see more of in Chapter Two? Let me know.
Comments
I fucking love Olivia! She really pushes limits. Love how she rips out one of Patty's assets and the expression of "OH SHIT" Who knows what the next chapter brings. Could be Patty trying to work her skills or any of the MILFS. You never disappoint. :D TY!
Loisishot
2016-11-08 18:49:02 +0000 UTCDefinitely sounds like a plan to me, and its a good one too. I'm looking forward to seeing how they play out. I don't know how you do it, I certainly don't have the talent for it so I'm glad you do. Keep up the great work and thanks for the art.
Robert B.
2016-11-07 22:56:42 +0000 UTCPatty will definitely have a big role in the next one.
Karmagik
2016-11-07 20:59:59 +0000 UTCMy current plan is to have each comic cover one month. It may not always be the actual book club meeting itself, and I don't think it will always have an even spread of each of the four ladies stories. It will just follow along with their lives and sort of hit some sexy highlights for what happened that month for the characters.
Karmagik
2016-11-07 20:59:37 +0000 UTCI agree. The set up, is, an integral part of the story. I wouldn't be opposed to having a whole chapter devoted to mostly one MILF's story at a time, in turn stretching one Book Club meeting out into 4 chapters. Just a thought. Either way, as far as I'm concerned, there can never be a bad story about your characters. Thanks again for the art.
Robert B.
2016-11-06 20:10:43 +0000 UTCI feel like The Book Club will always have more talk than some of my other comics. It's as much about the ladies and their personalities as the sex. The way they approach things and feel about things makes the sex scenes have more meaning, I think.
Karmagik
2016-11-06 18:55:15 +0000 UTCI love Patty!! i can't wait!
Devin Dickie
2016-11-06 18:50:01 +0000 UTCWell I for one liked Ch.1 very much and can't wait to see what Ch.2 brings. Of course there is always the less talk, more sex, point of view, but I think the lead-in of the story is just as important as the resulting sex part. So it will be interesting to see what Patty does. Keep up the good work, and thanks for the art.
Robert B.
2016-11-06 05:10:59 +0000 UTC
