Progress Report
Added 2021-10-23 18:52:06 +0000 UTCLet this be the end! I beg of ye, have mercy on poor Xev!
I've pushed the fourth version of Chapter 4 to the team for review. I've also made an adjustment based on a review of the adjusted version of chapter 3. In cutting what I was asked to cut, I also cut a scene said person liked which was part of it. So I've added a brief new section which reincorporates that specific element without all of the baggage it previously came with.
This version of Chapter 4 obviously attempts to make the sex scene less objectionable and adjusts the approach, much of the dialogue and the order of certain events. It changes up the artwork requirements a little bit too, and I've even added a nice little bonus CG to it because hell, why not. Aside from that, there was a small piece added later in the day which gives some important exposition that will become relevant in another route. All in all, the current version of Chapter 4 is 14996 words. The current version of Chapter 3 is 6532 words. So 21.5k words so far, assuming all of this stuff is approved by the team... god, please let it be approved this time.
ALL GOING WELL, I will be able to start on Chapter 5 very soon. Maybe even today. I've got some magic left in these fingers yet... wait, no don't take that the wrong way! I didn't mean-
aw, curses, take it however you like you animals
Comments
I knew what you meant Xevvy, be sure to take breaks too those are important!
Riley Fireheart
2021-10-23 21:34:42 +0000 UTC