Progress Report
Added 2022-03-25 18:57:51 +0000 UTCHowdy!
Just dropping in to say that the last two chapters of Day 18, Chapters 6 and 7, are both now in first pass state. Which is to say they're written and I'm mostly happy with their contents and what not. From here I'll be interating on them, polishing them up, expanding some sections, etc. Chapter 6 might get reorganized a bit, the conversation flow is kind of odd right now. I may also make some tweaks to Tobias' dialogue yet, just to make sure he's just right! Chapter 7 has already been reworked once and the new version resulting from that is much tighter than what I had. I suspect most of that will remain intact and will just see some good polish going forward.
With these two chapters out of the way in the next update, we'll finally be able to get cracking with Day 19! And it's about damn time too! Got some plot threads to wrap up! At least we finally got monke, right? Damn it took forever to get to monke.
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Xevvy
2022-03-26 00:11:38 +0000 UTCI was fully prepared for Day 18; Chapter 37: Tobias meets Adrian to discuss the secret of Tai's mother at the food court but can't when Beth and the Lady of The Buffet start eying each other up for a fight [insert dramatic soap opera music]
Eppy NWS
2022-03-25 22:01:55 +0000 UTC
