The Rest of the Requests and 2 Bonuses!
Added 2020-12-17 04:56:46 +0000 UTCBut first, the first law chapter should be coming down very shortly. There was a bit of a hangup near the end as I was humming and hawwing over a scene but its in its last legs of editing right now.
Anyway, onto the rest of the updates.
1. The Invasion of The Bureaucrats.
Which came from Blade Tech who suggested.
The changing invasion never happened and chrysalis is actually holding negotiative peace treaty with Celestia... she’s still being completely villainous but in a way that’s not really doing any crimes so she’s just being an ass.
The actual story turned out nearly like they were requesting, but with a slight twist. I think you will enjoy it.
Which is from Corey Peters who suggested.
Starlight and Sunburst first days as parents after Luster Dawn is born
The actual story is exactly that suggestion and it turned out rather well I think. Though its not quite as joke filled as the others, its cute, and still pretty funny.
Which is from Venerable Ro who suggested.
"Once you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, no matter how improbable, must be the truth." Holmes is on the track of something, something *strange*. The trail suggests something supremely unlikely, and yet...
I wasnt totally confident about this one, but its pretty funny and turned out really well.
Which is from Facinus who suggested.
Twilight goes on a date with Moon Dancer, both act comically adorkable.
It turned out pretty funny, and I rather like the messege, even if it is a bit generic.
Which is from Nfreak who suggested.
how about a short follow up to The Other Side Of The Mirror, set farther in the future (like maybe a bit before the flash forward in the season finale since gallus would still be a castle guard in this universe) with glimmer scales now an adult. A short scene set after a date with gallus (who she wouldn't have met before the event in the first story) and she tells him she's trans, with gallus having no issues accepting her for who she is or something like that. Maybe light nudity and a bit of a sensual scene if possible but mostly just to fit into the feeling of acceptance, like light touching and kissing and stuff. Can be adjusted as need be for length, hope this is alright I can change it if you would prefer something else. Hopefully this idea isn't too long
This is another one that turned out well, cute and fairly fun. If you were a fan of the original you'll enjoy this sequel. I hope anyway. XD
Which is from Cyril Shadeclaw who suggested.
Twilight discovers Thorax is a Proto Queen hiding in disguise while visiting her family with Spike in the Crystal Empire, she brings Thorax home with her and Spike to "study" her, when in reality it is more to protect her, eventually leading to a threesome with Spike when he finds out both have feelings for him and that Thorax is female.\
Unfortuantly there wasnt quite enough words to really do everything they wanted. It took too long to establish everything. I tried to squeeze down the plot to fit it into the short suggestion but it didnt work out as planned. Thats not to say this is bad mind you. Its just all set up no smut. So romancey vibes only here. I'd encourage the requester to suggest this again another time when I have more time.
7. Remedial Learning. (Fixed!)
Which was suggested by Kyle Allen who said.
Starlight impregnates a mind controlled Chrysalis, with the mind control being intentional on Starlight's end and her plan goes off without anything bad happening to her.
This story turned out slightly different then requested but I managed to squeeze in plenty of smut despite its relatively short run time.
Bonus 1. Hey Twilight, What Happens When We Die?
Is a little thought experiment I considered awhile ago and which sat at 90% completion until I found it amidst my tabs and wrote the final page. I think its kind of cute, but dont expect anything more then a rather morose rumination on death.
Bonus 2. Do You Know What It Is Like To Kill?
Is something I wrote weeks ago and also got lost in my tabs. It was written while planning out the later chapters of First Law and I just had to write the idea down. Its also morbid and heavy though, so you've been warned.
Annnnnd thats all! This turned out to be a rather predictably huge project that occupied more time then I would have liked but hey. I really wanted to give back to you all for supporting me this year. :)
