Dream us page 1
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Guys help me out with English, grammar, typos etc my english is so bad..Thanks for your help! 8)
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I've only ever noticed a single mistake in spelling or grammar from you, and that's saying something as I'm a bit of a grammer nazi
Dragos
2017-03-07 13:11:08 +0000 UTCAs long as you have fun man. Its all good, your English for me is far from broken
0Blueaura Sebastian 0001
2017-02-16 21:15:26 +0000 UTCMust be playing Overwatch in the gold bracket
Colin
2017-02-16 06:12:52 +0000 UTCSome grammar stuff. Change "I can't even remember it..." to simply "I can't even remember..." Change "Why I can't win.." to "Why can't I win.." Could possibly change "Is there a curse on me?" to something like "Do I have some sort of curse?" but your original one still sounds fine. Overall good English though.
Hungy
2017-02-16 06:12:28 +0000 UTCMy problem is either Jg's or bottom lanes, the jg's don't see a clear dragon steal if everyone on the enemy team is getting tower, he'd rather get krugs or gromp, and adc's?, feed and blame the support for their feeding, specifically Draven's. ;p
Silvia Drachma
2017-02-16 06:02:01 +0000 UTCThe English seems fine. Some of it could be a little more proper but for the most part it's alright for the comic. Looks great so far can't believe this is happening. So ready to watch this come to life. Let's go Tofuu!
PeppermintBanana
2017-02-16 03:38:37 +0000 UTCLmao you basically nailed the bronze player mindset.
Shimmerhex
2017-02-16 03:30:12 +0000 UTC
