This is the last page of this version which i will upload...
I will abondon this version and not only redraw it but also rewrite the script.
On twitter i already posted the resons, but i will also do it here:
First of all, the 1st chapter looks horrible (and the 2nd actually too) and I already started to redraw it anyway~ Second, the "story" started without any structure/script and was created page after page without thinking.
Unfortunately some things do not correctly fit together anymore which makes it problematic to have a logical flow in the futher chapters... And the last important reason is that, since i made these OCs out of nothing without any script, I cannot give them a proper character development, which bothers me A LOT. (*cough* especially Ren'Zu)
Again, do not worry, I will not abandon it, I plan to make it better :D
I know there are not many fans of this comic, but to all those who enjoyed it and were always waiting for new pages... THANK YOU VERY MUCH. Your joy made it for me possible to get better at drawing ;u;
Shin Purple
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