Hey peeps, here's Chapter 3.
Tirion and Karandra talk to each other weirdly, don't they. lol. There's a trope (that I hate) where the 'love interest' character gets all "myuh" because the hero is keeping secrets.
I really, really dislike it. Reminds me of all the shitty CW shows I used to watch. Where writers needed conflict to happen in an episode so characters would just suddenly become really unreasonable narcissists.
Plus I'm not a trained or professional actor. So I do not have the ability to sell conversations that seem really bloody awkward and weird to me. But I don't wanna rewrite the dialogue too much either cos... that would be a bit arrogant. I'm not a writer either. lol. I don't actually know what I am. Just some random bloke.
Anywho - Thanks, as always, for your support. Tis much appreciated. And I'll see ya in the next Early Access post
Cheers mates!
Flying Buttress
2023-08-05 12:09:34 +0000 UTCSteve galea
2023-08-05 11:13:30 +0000 UTC