The Interview 2 - Reward Preview
Added 2025-02-18 18:46:07 +0000 UTCPreview for our final reward.
- Hanada Yanochi
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Yeah, an evocative scenariois hard to make. It could take a lot of time but thanks for allowing me to do it. I already let you know the next idea I will do so let's look forward to it. If things get better, I can certainly make more like this if time allows. Thanks for sharing tips from experience. Practice makes mastery. I hope I can get used to it soon and make it smoother in the future. To be honest, I also have a lot of fun when making them. Like preparing some funny tricks and waiting for fan's reactions. That will be the way to do quickwork as well so I really hope to see more comments from fans when every dialogue work is done haha. Let's look forward to Calli's set. I already have some funny ideas that I can't wait to make. It will be an interesting one.
花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada
2025-02-19 09:23:19 +0000 UTCThank you for your feedback. I am a bit greedy when making conservation for this set so it's overcooked. I will try to be conciseand focus on conversation ideas rather than describe the situation. But I really don't know what is enough because writing is not my forte. Please keep giving me feedback and even if you have to repeat to remind me of the same flaws many times, please don't get annoyed with it. Hope I can improve it soon. P.s: Yeah, I thought the same thing. That workload is doable but I really hope other fan will allow me to do it.
花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada
2025-02-19 09:14:43 +0000 UTCThank you ! I am glad that you like it man. It has been a long time since I saw you be this excited when I post new work so I believe this direction was the right choice. To be honest, Those interactions were things I wanted to do on each set but the time limit didn't allow me to do it at all. The last time I did something this big was Calli's blowjob. It was very interesting to draw but time consuming is so high that we are 1 month late for the rest of 2023 haha. But well, at this point there is nothing to hold me back so I will go all out with main work. Let's look forward to it.
花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada
2025-02-19 09:09:05 +0000 UTCI love it. It's a very evocative scenario, and I like how this particular situation calls attention to her hands because you tend to draw them so well and in varied positions. I think the dialogue definitely adds a lot of spice and context to the piece, and I enjoy it a lot, as I enjoyed the last one. I think if you're struggling with time when it comes to dialogue, you can probably get away with shortening things in a few places without changing the overall meaning. I also think it's okay if a couple of panels are quieter, and she's just breathing or something like that. Just some ideas if you wanted to make it go a bit quicker. That being said, I think it definitely becomes a smoother process the more you do it. It's also probably going to be easier with some characters and situations compared to others, when you're more in the head of a specific character or something about the setting makes the dialogue come more naturally to you. That's how it is for me anyways. The more you write dialogue, the better you get at the whole thing. Their expressions are so wonderful, too. I love how naughty Liz looks and how absolutely crazy Nerissa looks when she catches her! You captured a lot of character with their faces here. Thank you as always for your hard work! I hope you rest well and get some good sleep, and I wish you luck with the rest!
Toastywafflz
2025-02-19 06:52:40 +0000 UTCgood work. you could use less dialogue for things such as her feeling hot and needing to strip. in cases like that mentioning it the first time and then showing it through the art that she is fully stripping works better. I would work on making the dialogue less wordy and more concise but that might be a language skill thing. Since these sets take more time i suggest doing only 2 sets a month instead of 3 and releasing 1 older set and some sketch sets to make things manageable
seenothing
2025-02-19 02:05:15 +0000 UTCAmazing work! The dialogue came out fantastic! I love the idea of Liz enjoying herself while Nerrisa was having fun in the interview making all sorts of sounds haha. Her body looks great too! The different hand variations you made to match with the scenes also adds a lot to the whole thing. I especially like the few last pages where she gets caught but still keep going haha. Exhibitionism is great! The last 2 sets from you have been nothing but perfect and some of my favorite work you've put out. Please take any break that you need considering the enormous work that goes into making these. Maybe make it an occasional thing? These last 2 sets were pretty big in scope but it would be hard to do this all the time. With all that said, thanks again for the stunning sets! Rest up and please stay safe!
Ultra
2025-02-18 21:08:57 +0000 UTC
