Maid Next Table - Reward Preview
Added 2025-06-14 19:25:53 +0000 UTCPreview for our final reward.
- Hanada Yanochi
Comments
Thank you, I have just fixed all the dialogue that you mentioned. I am still working on the rest.This set is pretty interesting but It also leaves me with some trauma lol Anyway, I am finishing it. Finally, I am done with those grand sets, man. I am having some funny idea for quickworks, let me show you soon.
花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada
2025-06-15 09:44:06 +0000 UTCSeeing some of the dialogue in the preview alongside the variations, I can see how complicated things ended up getting for you. But the result is lovely! What's funny is that I can actually hear Calli in my head reading the dialogue. That "Deadbeat, come over here!" right after the cutesy teasing cracks me up and somehow seems totally like something she would do if she were in a situation like this. You really capture her gap moe well here and the surprise popup by Kiara adds to the fun. What a lewd domain to have... Dialogue notes: it's called the glans on page 10 instead of glan. It's a weird word. The only other thing is more of a writing style thing than like a grammar thing, but on page 2 you might want to use a different adjective than juicy. So maybe instead of "sweet, juicy holy juice" you could do something like "sweet, succulent holy juice" or something like that. Not really a big deal, it just sounds a little redundant. The dialogue is quite lovely though, I know you worked hard and I imagine adding Kiara in halfway made it harder but it's turning out really well so far. I like the reference to the previous sets and how Calli is sort of getting her turn to be a huge tease. The dynamic is a lot of fun! Also, Calli makes the cutest faces. Like with the dialogue, you really capture different sides of her well in this intimate encounter and it really brings her to life. To nobody's surprise, the set that has Calli in a maid outfit is going to be a favorite of mine. Good work! I hope you rest well, you're almost there!
Toastywafflz
2025-06-15 06:33:20 +0000 UTCThank you ! This set gave me a nightmare because of its complexity. There were so many parts that even I forgot which and where... Anyway, that Kiara variant is just the beginning of the second phase which I am working on right now. You will get the full reward in the next 24 hours ! I am back to my work then.
花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada
2025-06-15 02:54:08 +0000 UTCI love this! You went all out with the hand movements. I also really enjoyed the dialogue. The playful first half with the sudden and more serious second half. The Kiara cameo at the end was also very welcoming haha. Amazing work all around. The time and effort put into this is very apparent. I hope you're able to rest well before returning. Until then, I'll be looking forward to what you'll do next!
Ultra
2025-06-14 19:42:34 +0000 UTC
