RE: Trailer Trash 52, Moving On.
Added 2023-08-09 16:05:50 +0000 UTC/// The complete chapter 52!
It was high
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The more we hype the characters up about Amy Lee, the more I really hope it's just another arc, instead of some finale.
Zach
2023-10-27 12:33:52 +0000 UTCsome typos: It didn’t have a loud accompanying loud buzz or anything like it should have from movies loud accompanying loud -> loud accompanying which was worrying for Tabitha because her friend’s tone voice was difficult to read into now. read into now -> read now Even typed them into that Google web page you love you so much, didn’t get a thing back, just nonsense you love you -> you love the strange, possibly-satan cute friend of Elena’s had returned their Sandboro Hot Topic. returned their Sandboro -> returned to their Sandboro
Bilfdoffle
2023-09-02 03:55:27 +0000 UTCThat is one cute kitty
Bohigas Kevin
2023-08-12 15:34:36 +0000 UTC"trip could be big thing." a missing?
Gustav Bertram
2023-08-12 07:39:55 +0000 UTCAs an officer of the BOP I give this portrayal of a realistic prison my unofficial Correctional Officer's stamp of approval. Well done 👍.
Hawk
2023-08-12 01:16:59 +0000 UTCI honestly can't wait for April in story now. Evanescence is awesome.
Rakkis157
2023-08-11 17:16:35 +0000 UTCHanna "pretending to vomit"; not "pretending that she was hurling." Bothered me both times I read it. No slang in 3rd person narrative.
Chris Myers
2023-08-11 12:57:49 +0000 UTCI hated the goths like Ziggy. In highschool I was more a wannabe Mr Gary and in my friend circle was a few... friendly? no, welcoming goths. Sure they were angsty as all hell but they owned their angst and didn't throw at you like a monkey hurls crap. Also, nice place and cute kitten but take it from a guy who had a demon in disguise for 11 fantastic years. The cuter the cat, the worse the demon possessing it.
Stuart T
2023-08-11 02:34:11 +0000 UTCEnjoy the new place and new kitten!
Smartjedi
2023-08-10 21:35:42 +0000 UTC"This would be so much easier if you faking it for attention" ... "were" missing.
Stephen Paynter
2023-08-09 23:28:46 +0000 UTCThanks Boss have a great day
Jeanie6754
2023-08-09 23:26:10 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! I love how well you write! It really brings me into the story with how you pepper the characters with depth and meaningful emotions. It is just so much fun to read. I can’t wait for more! Thanks for another great chapter and I hope your move is quick and easy!
Undead Writer
2023-08-09 22:37:21 +0000 UTCCute kitten! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Jennifer Foley
2023-08-09 21:54:53 +0000 UTCTabitha is a class act. She took the brunt of Nicole’s angst when she coulda thrown Elena under the bus to save herself. It woulda crushed Elena if Nicole started treating her like that. Probably still hurts.
Sgt. Tibs
2023-08-09 18:17:56 +0000 UTCZiggy does have the "I'm 16 and I hate the sun" vibe going on. Not a fun person to be around but a great character. The whole chapter is so great but I'm super excited to see the next arc too!
Sean
2023-08-09 17:06:24 +0000 UTCNicole is so unlikable, sheesh.
Deviant Ranger
2023-08-09 16:52:08 +0000 UTCThanks for the hard work boss!
WarStrider72
2023-08-09 16:06:21 +0000 UTC
