Web of Knowledge - Chapter 44: Any Means Necessary
Added 2023-04-29 18:49:56 +0000 UTCKalden emerged in a massive chamber, as big as a warehouse. Steel beams supported the high ceilings, and crowds of students bustled all around him on the smooth concrete floors.
“Step forward,” a young woman said from the crowd. Her tone sounded bored, as if she’d been saying this same phrase all day.
Kalden stepped off the platform and down a short metal staircase. His stomach churned as he walked, and his vision blurred around the edges. This was even worse than Akari’s portals. Her portals made bridges in spacetime, letting you step seamlessly from one spot to another. Meanwhile, this technique did some sort of displacement.
He reached the bottom of the stairs and spotted Camila, one of Raizen’s teaching assistants. Arturo stepped down from the platform on his right, and Zukan appeared on his left a few seconds later. Kalden looked farther down the line and saw dozens of other students appear all at once.
“What happened?” he asked his teammates.
“Dunno, shoko.” Arturo rubbed at his neck. “If only we knew a backstabbing Dream Artist . . .”
“Point taken,” Kalden muttered. He’d seen this coming, but he’d still been helpless to stop it. He really should have stuck a blade through her heart when he had the chance.
“Dawnfire took her out,” Zukan said. “She handed me the remote before I faded.”
“So the bomb worked?”
The dragon gave a stoic nod.
Well, that was something, at least. If Zukan had pressed the remote, then he’d get the points for the kills. By extension, Kalden and Arturo would get assists for building the bomb, and Relia would probably get points for helping Zukan in the end.
“What about Akari?” Kalden asked.
“Moonfire got her,” Zukan rumbled.
Kalden did another quick sweep of the chamber, but she was nowhere in sight. Strange. Zukan and Arturo had appeared right next to him. Why wouldn’t she?
“Off the platforms,” Camila said to another group of students. “You can see your scores in the next room.”
“Excuse me,” Kalden said as he approached the young woman. “Miss Warder?”
“Mr. Trengsen.” She glanced up from her tablet. “If you’re here to complain, then—”
“No.” He shook his head quickly. “But can you tell me where Akari Zeller is?”
Camila glanced down at her tablet and scrolled through a list of names. “She came out the same time as you. No record of where.”
“They’ve got other rooms like this one,” Arturo spoke up. “They separate us to give us time to cool off.”
That made sense, he supposed. The Artegium had clear rules about fighting outside the arena, especially after a game like this. Still, why tempt the students?
Kalden thanked Camila, then stepped through a pair of double doors into another chamber. This one had the same high ceilings as the fight, but with brighter lights and white linoleum floors instead of concrete. Rows of desks sat along two of the walls, and dozens of students waited to sign out and retrieve their belongings.
Kalden had barely taken two steps before a nearby payphone rang. He ignored it at first, but then three more phones rang in unison.
Arturo walked over and picked one up as if this were an everyday occurrence.
“Hello?” he said into the receiver. His eyes widened a heartbeat later, and he held the phone out to Kalden. “It’s for you.”
Kalden stepped forward and brought the phone to his own ear. “This is Kalden.”
“Kalden? This is Irina Darklight.” Her voice sounded urgent from the other end, causing the hairs on Kalden's neck to stand up. “Listen closely. Akari’s in trouble.”
“What?” He squeezed the phone in his hand, pressing it closer to his ear. “Where is she?”
“That’s what you need to find out. Elend thinks someone tampered with her device.”
Kalden drew in a sharp breath. Elend had already warned him about Dansin Roth and the Sons of Talek, so there was no need to ask who’d done this.
Just then, a group of Artisan-level security guards ran through the chamber.
“Ignore them,” Irina’s voice said from the phone. “They don’t know anything yet.”
“Okay.” Kalden cycled his battle mana, heightening his focus. “Tell me what to do.”
“Send Arturo to work with the building’s security,” she replied. “I’ve already told them he’s coming. I want you and Zukan to search the premises for clues. Use any means necessary.”
~~~
Elise quickened her pace when she heard the faint echo of footsteps behind her. It was Kalden Trengsen, of course. He probably wanted to get in her face and call her a liar. Well, she’d been dealing with that nonsense her whole life, and she was in no mood for it today. Elise didn’t complain when people beat her with martial prowess; they had no right to whine about her tricks.
She rounded a corner and slipped into a single bathroom. This room had a lock, so he couldn’t follow her without—
The footsteps ran faster. Elise slid into the bathroom and forced the door shut behind her. Kalden closed the distance and shoved his boot into the door.
Damnit. Elise cycled her mana, but Kalden was quicker. His muscles shone with pale blue light, and he hurled the door open. Elise formed a shield, but Kalden conjured a blade of blood-red mana, cutting through it like paper.
Elise staggered into the wall and a cage of red blades formed around her body.
“What the hell are you doing?” she demanded. “This isn’t a game!”
“Do I look like I’m playing?” Kalden stepped forward, forming another blade in his right hand. His muscles shone with the same color, and even his eyes glowed with crimson light. She’d seen this aspect during the qualifying rounds, but she’d never understood it.
Elise flared her Cloak and sent a cloud of dream mana around her body. She forced a rush of emotions into her attacker. Fear, disgust, a willingness to listen. Anything to make him go away.
“That won’t work on me,” Kalden said. No explanation beyond that. Perhaps he’d trained to resist dream mana this year, the same way Akari Zeller had. Then again, she’d also heard rumors about his new aspect. Some people said he focused only on victory, shoving aside all other emotions.
“Where’s Akari?” he demanded.
Elise scoffed. “Why are you asking me?”
“I know about your plan with Dansin Roth.”
Bullshit. If Kalden had known that, then he would have called her out sooner.
“Roth took her somewhere,” Kalden said. “Tell me where.”
Elise took a few deep breaths. “Think this through, Trengsen. You know who my parents are.”
“I’ll give you till the count of three.” Kalden brought his blade closer. “Then I’m taking your left eye.”
“You’re insane!” she said. “There were cameras in the hall. People will know it was you!”
Elise had joined the Combat Arts program for fame, recognition, and a chance to advance her Mana Arts. She’d never asked for real danger. But Kalden Trengsen saw the world through a different lens. He’d fought in real wars and faced real consequences. While Elise had ignored her parents’ plan, Kalden saw it for the threat it was.
And he wasn’t bluffing, either. He really would cut out her eyes if it meant saving the girl he loved. She saw that on his face, clear as a written promise.
“I don’t know anything. I swear!” Elise shook as the blade drew closer. Despite her years of training, she’d never truly been threatened before.
“One.” Kalden’s voice was as steady as his weapons.
“I’d tell you if I knew!” Tears of frustration formed in the corners of her eyes. “Why would I lie now?”
“Two.” The blade drew closer until its crimson glow filled the world.
“Roth messed with her displacer,” Elise blurted out. “He made it look like a malfunction. That’s why I took her out. She couldn’t be the last person standing.”
“I know that part,” Kalden said. “Where is she now?”
“In the maintenance tunnels below the arena.” Elise’s words poured out in a rush. She was only guessing at this point, but it was the only answer that made sense. “Probably somewhere private. A supply closet or a control room.”
Kalden nodded once. His blades vanished in clouds of crimson mist, and he left the room in a rush.
~~~
Akari stumbled forward, barely catching herself on the rounded glass wall. She brought a hand to her windpipe and felt the phantom pain of a dagger wound.
Elise Moonfire.
Not only had the Dream Artist survived their fight, but she’d snuck downstairs and tried to hijack their victory plan. Bitch. They’d all seen this coming—even Relia hadn’t denied it—and she’d still surprised them one last time.
But what about the others? Did they win? No way Elise killed her entire team.
Akari glanced left and right, taking in her more immediate surroundings. She stood inside a glass cylinder, roughly eight feet tall and half as wide. She ran her fingers along the inside but found no openings.
The room beyond had concrete floors and brick walls—probably some kind of maintenance tunnel beneath the arena. A few dim lightbulbs flickered from the ceiling above, and a pair of dark-clad figures rounded on her as she appeared.
One figure muttered something, but she couldn’t make out his voice from here. The other got up from his chair and strode forward.
Akari banged her fists on the glass wall. “What the hell is this?”
“It’s alright, Miss Zeller.” The man made a placating gesture. “You died in the arena.”
“Obviously. Why am I here?” They’d already been informed about the death process in Raizen’s class. Supposedly, the arena would teleport them back to the building with the changing rooms, where they would sign out and gather their things. This wasn’t right.
“We had an equipment malfunction,” the man said. “A lot of contestants died at once, so we had to take the overflow down here.”
“Oh.” Her team had planned to take out several dozen students with Kalden’s bombs, so that might make sense. Then again, a few dozen deaths shouldn’t be enough to cause this. Even if it were, wouldn’t they delay the teleporters and move the students in smaller batches? Why send her to some shady room in the basement?
“Where’s Jalon?” the guy on the left asked.
“He went to the bathroom,” the other one said.
“Maybe I should go get him,” the first guy replied. Akari couldn't see his face, but his tone sounded rushed and anxious.
“It’s alright.” The guy on the right held up his phone. “I just texted him. He’s on his way.”
“Who’s Jalon?” Akari asked.
“He’s a Space Artist. We need him to get you out of there.”
Akari narrowed her eyes, but she couldn’t make out much through his goggles. “Why are you wearing masks?”
“They’re not masks.” The guy on the right grabbed the edges of his helmet and yanked it off. He raised his goggles a second later, and Akari recognized his face. It was Kalden’s brother, Sozen Trengsen.
This should have been reassuring. Sozen worked for the Artegium, so it made perfect sense for him to be here. But in that moment, all her fears from the beginning of the game rose back to the surface.
Sozen’s appearance this year had been far too convenient. He’d been living in Cadria before now, and he just happened to get a job here when she and Kalden became students? Then he just happened to run into Kalden on the first day of classes?
Elend and Irina found this strange, too. They never said so out loud, but it was obvious in the questions they asked, and how they’d insisted that all meetings happened on their estate.
If Elend didn’t trust Sozen, neither should she.
Then there was Elise Moonfire. She’d been obsessed with killing Akari during the whole game. What if they’d always planned to teleport her down here?
Talek. If this Space Artist hadn’t stepped out, then she might already be in Creta.
Akari relaxed her vision, seeing the world through her Silver Sight. The second guy was an Artisan, just like Sozen. Great. She also spotted strands of mana running through the walls of her glass prison. It looked tough, but not unbreakable.
Slowly, she cycled pure mana, gathering a Missile in her palm.
“Hey!” The masked guy reached for a steel weapon on his belt. It looked like an S-39 Stun Rod, the same weapon Sozen had used on her before the game. “What are you doing?”
Akari looked up, letting her Missile fade to mist. No Artegium staff member would react that way. They’d all signed contracts earlier in the year, agreeing to be stunned before the qualifying rounds, but that game was over. This was something else. Something far more dangerous.
“It’s alright, Akari.” Sozen held up his hands in a placating gesture. “We’ll have you out in a second, okay?”
She forced herself to nod, even as her thoughts raced. Even if she broke the glass, she stood no chance against two Artisans. Especially if they had a third friend on the way. But she didn’t need to beat them. She just had to escape.
Akari stopped cycling pure mana and felt the spacetime part of her soul. There, she found a mana bond stretching off to some unseen place. That’s right. She still had a Construct waiting in the water tower. The arena negated most techniques, replacing them with dream versions for the students’ safety. But spatial mana was an exception to this rule. Even Grandmaster Dream Artists couldn’t fake teleportation. That meant she’d left a real portal behind.
Just then, someone knocked on the room’s outer door.
The masked guy spun around as if to unlock it, and Sozen reached for his own Missile rod.
Akari didn’t wait to see what happened next. She formed a portal on the floor, and her body dropped through.
Comments
I feel that the chapter flows much better now. There was no need to have Akari's pov first since it was already heavily foreshadowed that she'd be sent somewhere else. So, this order works better.
giom
2023-04-30 15:09:15 +0000 UTCThat all makes a lot of sense. I don’t think I considered just how unwieldy Spacetime would first be, especially since there is zero reference points at all. I think I just seen spacetime mana and went , well cue the Doom music, she should be able to rip & tear. Thanks for taking the time to write a long reply, especially since it was started by a not particularly helpful comment from me.
Stuart Anderson
2023-04-30 02:01:44 +0000 UTCYeah, like I mentioned in my comment above, I wasn’t really happy with the way this particular chapter turned out either, so no worries about the complaints. In hindsight, I probably should have at least started with Kalden’s scene, cut the bit about the scoreboard since it slowed down the pacing, and then ended it in Akari’s POV with a better ending. I actually have more content written for Akari’s POV, but I moved it to Chapter 45 because the additional content would have killed a lot of the tension. I guess it’s not too late to move things around and combine this with 45 before they both go public on RR. After all, those comment sections are certainly more ruthless than here. :P And yeah, Kalden definitely got the biggest character arc in this book. Akari had the biggest arcs in Books 1 and 2, but Book 3’s particular problem (finding a team) seemed better suited to Kalden. Akari basically learned the same things alongside him, but it was a bit more low key for her. Kalden’s aspect was also better suited to beating Elise, but that’s only because blade + knowledge is basically the perfect recipe to beat a Dream Artist. A few chapters ago, he struggled just to stay alive against Zukan. As for Akari, she has one of the most overpowered aspects in this world, but no idea how to use it yet. It's traditionally a support role, but she's trying to turn it into a serious combat role. Everyone else has an advantage over her, because they’re all using the same skills they learned at a young age. Even Kalden has his blade skills to draw on. I mostly decided not to give her any new techniques in this book to keep things realistic. If she learned something like a Spacetime Cloak technique, or pocket dimensions on top of her existing workload, I felt like that would have cheapened the accomplishment. Some of it is also setup for Book 4 and beyond. Before this series, I've only ever written a trilogy, so I'll admit that I'm intentionally trying not to let Akari get too strong too quick. Maybe I'm overcompensating sometimes—it's hard to say.
David
2023-04-30 01:25:51 +0000 UTCOn reflection, I’ve admittedly kinda popped off here. So apologies to the author. You’re right in that she can take a big role in saving herself in the future, and I hope that’s the way we go. But I’d like it to be not overshadowed by what Kalden is doing, as currently my feeling is that the writing greatly favours Kalden over Akari, and I view the two as equal protagonists.
Stuart Anderson
2023-04-29 23:32:48 +0000 UTCThat said I wouldn't be opposed to a single line at the end of akari's section about how 'she wasn't going to take this lying down' or similar - raises suspense about what she's going to do while making it clear she's not helpless
Reodude
2023-04-29 23:02:58 +0000 UTCPersonally, I'm fine with this chapter. For me the bit that's felt strange recently was the elise situation - there's almost nothing between her joining and betraying the group, even Relia has no interactions with her and the rest of the geoup take no steps to prevent an obvious betrayal (from their perspective, not even the readers'). Hard to articulate in just a few words but it felt artificial and maybe a chapter or two of them operating together with her under suspicion etc would be good
Reodude
2023-04-29 23:00:16 +0000 UTCCould be wrong but I feel like akari is going to have a fairly big role in her escape - she knows somethings wrong and is hardly a passive character generally. You mention she didnt have thoughts of escape but we cut away quickly, so give it at least another chapter before calling it out. I also hate damsel saving situations in writing but I'm not convinced we're there yet
Reodude
2023-04-29 22:56:00 +0000 UTCI gotta ask this straight up, are we really going female lead gets captured and male love interest needs to save her? One of my main points of contention with the story has been the constant depiction of Akari as far behind the others, it made total sense in the beginning, but the only thing we’ve seen and been told book after book is that she is behind the others and needs loads to catch up. She’s completely static as a character.As a showcase, this chapter just had, Akari is captured, she has no thoughts of escape just realisation she’s helpless. Then confirmation that everyone on the team qualified, expect Akari of course, she’s not good enough, but she’ll get in via a loophole as she always does. Then Kalden gets a badass moment where he effortlessly defeats someone Akari just struggled against, and an internal monologue about how Kalden is a ruthless badass, sees things differently and has fought in wars etc. Then Kalden is off to try to save the day
Stuart Anderson
2023-04-29 20:34:25 +0000 UTC98% chance they get separated before that date
Addicted_Reader
2023-04-29 19:15:56 +0000 UTCI wasn't entirely happy with how this chapter turned out. I don't know why, but I think it had to do with the pacing. Maybe it felt strange to go straight from the end of the qualifying rounds to this. Or maybe I should have kept it in Akari's POV and cut the scenes with Kalden and the others. Either way, I decided to just post what I have since it was already written.
David
2023-04-29 18:52:00 +0000 UTC