DayZ Critique - Part 9 draft finished (still working on part 8)
Added 2017-09-27 19:12:05 +0000 UTCI'm nearly done with these two chapters. But it appears that I was able to finish part 9 before part 8. And part 9 is available here in early-access for you. As always, thank you very much for your patronage during my pet-project.
So this is the chapter wedged between part 8/10 - Tone and Atmosphere. And part 10/10 - Development. And it talks about the role that Vehicles have in a survival game like DayZ.
Please let me know what you think. All feedback is useful. Not just errors, but any parts of the argument you find unconvincing. It'll let me go back and assess which parts of the script are weak and might need rewording.
I'm hoping to have part 8 ready for you by the end of tomorrow. Fingers crossed.
Comments
Heya Tarn. Had a bit of a problem recently. Somebody is leaking the unlisted content, and appears to have made a subreddit to do just that. Took them down for a bit until it blows over.
SovietWomble
2017-11-05 19:10:06 +0000 UTCSir, what happened to your video essays? 😧 I cannot find them, any of them 😔 Ooh, unless you have them down for, *gasp*, release?!? 😃 So exciting! I can’t wait 😄
Tango Alpha Roma Nova
2017-11-05 18:01:29 +0000 UTCI agree with the green text, it doesnt quite work with it. In regards to the content of the voiceover, you make solid points and arguements, without talking around the point you are trying to make. The way you sumarised it to vehicles are loot and not loot is absolutely spot on. Will be good to see the whole series together when they are ready.
MrVengeance141
2017-09-30 01:23:54 +0000 UTC
