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Changelog: Chapter 6

Author's Note: Shortly after posting this I will be prepping a Bonus Chapter for release as a thank you! Stay posted! 


After making some revisions to Chapter 6, I decided it would be wise to post a small changelog to cover the changes for people who didn't want to go back and re-read it. I adjusted how Will interacted with a more traditional magical option which had some minor ripple effects, but no major plot points have changed. It resulted in maybe like an extra 1-200 words (total) across subsequent chapters. It was mainly the structure/prose that I adjusted to better convey what I wanted. 


RIPPLE EFFECTS/CHANGELOG

Comments

Good catch! I missed that one. Legend.

Christopher Silvestro

hello. i hope to find you well. if you adjust the timelimit of the choice from 10 to 3 minutes in chapter 6 you might consider to change the sentence: „At the very least, I have longer than 10 minutes“ in chapter 23.

Hynao

Any idea when he is going to give up on the whole "going home" thing since guard dogs aren't really conducive to super spacial travel.

Obran


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