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Mia Jay and Laurel Boulton (On Hiatus)
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Prose Chapter 3 - DEPARTURE

Hello! Now that 'Departure' is all wrapped up, we can post the prose version! Fun little fact: the flirtation scene at the end was something that was original to the comic.

However, we saw in the Discord that people were looking forward to reading the prose version of that specifically, so we went ahead and novelized it! That's attached as a second, bonus document. Happy reading!

- Laurel

Prose Chapter 3 - DEPARTURE

Comments

I was so excited to see the prose for this chapter. Was not disappointed at all, except for not checking my mail sooner for the notification that this was posted! Anyway, loved reading more of their thoughts that were not shown this chapter, mainly with Granny Guns and the whole alleyway scene (cough) also bonus part (cough). Didn't know that flirting scene part was comic original. Thank you for novelizing it and for the prose of this chapter. Love reading these!

TheMadTrickster

I don't think we find it too confusing because we each handle one part of the writing. The most difficult thing about it is knowing how much to backtrack, because sometimes it can be too much which bogs down the flow of the narrative. Not that RP writing is the most narratively-sound style of writing from a reader's perspective anyways 🤣 -L

Thursdayfictions

Also I LOVED the bonus scene haha

SanaBanana

I love how you guys split the perspectives so that we can read from both POVs. But it makes me wonder if it ever gets confusing when you write it?

SanaBanana


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