πEASE OFF - CHAPTER 1 (cis) π($3) + PDF
Added 2022-01-07 20:01:02 +0000 UTC2/1/2022: slight changes + PDF now available! π
Happy first Slut Zag Friday of 2022, here he is in chapter 1 πIt'll be posted publicly 2/4/2022, a month from now, to give myself some space to make any little changes. By then, hopefully a good progress of ch 2 + 3 will be made.
(if you see any errors, please let me know!)
Comments
Thank you!!!! I do feel fairly proud with the progress Iβve made and just with how fun itβs been ππ Iβm so glad to hear you enjoyed it!! Do you draw too? π
2022-02-05 01:01:58 +0000 UTCIt's so wonderful! What great work. I hope you are also pleased with the results <3 I feel inspired
2022-02-04 19:24:16 +0000 UTCππ ππthank you hanna!!! I really hope so, im revising as I go and just really really hope itβll pay off proportionally π€π€ weβll be fine!!! Weβll figure it out lol also happy belated birthday!!!
2022-01-22 16:31:38 +0000 UTCOmg ok despite this getting posted on my bday (happy bday to me omg) I FINALLY got a chance to read it all and holy shit mag this is so good I canβt believe how much tension there is!!! I know the payoff will be so worth it though cause this ch and every other comic you make is π©π ANYWAYS canβt wait for zagchilles to bang Iβm sure itβll be amazing!!!
2022-01-22 12:59:37 +0000 UTCUWEEEEH red ty ππππ that means so much coming from you, I canβt wait to keep going, letβs make him yearn hornily !!!!
2022-01-11 21:30:04 +0000 UTChahwuigehaHA;KSJHGDG OH IT'S SO GOOD AAAHHHH ;O; I mean I don't even know where to start!! the dialogue is so natural and charming and in-character, the faces are so expressive....THE SEXY BITS ARE SO SEXY,,,, him shoving his face in the pillow GOSH GOSH GOSH I can't wait for more! >u<
localbastard
2022-01-09 20:31:29 +0000 UTCAh thank you so much, im so glad youβre here, thank you and thank you for reading π₯Ίπ zag is a disaster but we need him to be to push the plot in this porn forward!!!!! Thank goodness for him ππ¦π¦π¦
2022-01-08 16:38:12 +0000 UTCSweats π¦π¦π¦π¦ππ
2022-01-08 16:34:23 +0000 UTCThank you shmegs π₯Ίπ₯Ίππ weβre just getting started omg
2022-01-08 16:33:15 +0000 UTCNo critique, just want to say I appreciate the work you put in this comic ππ also, zag is a fucking disaster jshsvasvgbs help him π
2022-01-08 12:49:52 +0000 UTCI have a detailed breakdown I want to write about this but I don't know Patreon's comment character limit lmao. It includes one small critique but the rest is *pinched fingers.* Coming soon....
McJamie
2022-01-08 04:06:22 +0000 UTC
