Spike comic
Added 2019-12-04 12:32:32 +0000 UTCi wanna get better at making comics, so i scribbled out a few dramatic pages of spike finding out and telling adam he's pregnant! i think the middle page is a little too confusing tho π€ ive still gotta work on my layouts better!
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Thank you!!! I'm glad to hear, and honestly id always planned out Adam and Spike's story like it was a comic because I'd really like to make it one one day, but writing a long term comic is a big task so I'm just trying to work my way up to it! Hopefully one day I can make it happen!
ohmyguts
2019-12-04 20:09:29 +0000 UTCOooo!!! I'm so hype for you practicing comics this is rad as hell!!! Also the emotions get across really well and I feel like these two would be prime material for good comics
Chibimasta
2019-12-04 15:04:54 +0000 UTCAhhhhhh thank you!!!! ππππ I've always wanted to make like a proper comic, but i wanna get better at story telling through images first, so I'm happy to hear the second page isn't too confusing!! And thank you!!! I'm glad all the emotions come across!! Spike was going through all kinds of thoughts and feelings when he found out, and I wanted to try be a bit more meaningful with my panels!! Hopefully i can keep working to making a whole comic one day!
ohmyguts
2019-12-04 13:05:33 +0000 UTCOMG I love thissssssssss all the pregnancy tests in the first panel!!! And just ahhh the last panel ont he first page of him holding himself a moment of weakness for a tough guy conveys so much emotion!!! Also to me the second page looks good to me I understand it from what I can tell tbh! Also I love that last page Spike's emotion and then Adam's confusion OMG I love these pages A LOT !!!!! <3 And the last panel those words with the black text ahhhhhhhhh!!!!! :D This is good I think you did amazing OMG!!!! :D
SweetShrimpyBoi
2019-12-04 12:43:20 +0000 UTC
