And here it is! Sorry about the wait... :'(
But anyhow! Since you've already seen the sketch for this page, you've probably read what I changed on this page and now see what I meant. :) Although, I didn't mention the changes I did personality-wise! I mentioned that Rubigo's expression was changed from angry to worried. I actually drew the sketch and came up with the plot before I changed his personality. The reason for the change, was simply because I thought that he wasn't that special or interesting as a brutal, cold-hearted warrior. (The original idea was actually that Rubigo was meant to want to kill Zewiac for... some reason. Honestly, I was so clueless. ) So instead, he became a tough-looking softie that just wants everyone to be in peace.
Umbra is basically the same character as she started off as. Although, for this page, I made her look more worried, since I thought that she may come out as less caring if she had a pokerface in this situation.
COMIC TIP!
Plan your comic well before you start it, otherwise you'll have to re-do a lot.
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