ONWARD_Page-107_Ch-5 (Sketch)
Added 2016-04-29 15:47:53 +0000 UTCNone of the dialogue was changed, so everything is the same there! :)
Okay so, in the first panel, you can see Lankie (on the top) and Tacoro (on the bottom).
In the second panel, you can see a "bird-view" shot of the scene. Rubigo (top right), Umbra (top left), Lankie & Tacoro (bottom left) and Zarhe & Meya (bottom right).
The panels in the middle however, were changed from scratch. Instead of there being 3 panels, there are now 2. In the first of those, there will be a close-up on Zarhe's eyes, looking rather furious. And in the second one, there will be another close-up, this time featuring Zarhe's bared fangs.
The last panel is just the same, with Zarhe being a little twat. :)
I changed the middle-scenes since I thought there were too many headshots... A closer close-up was refreshing. ^^
