ONWARD_Page-114_Ch-5 (Sketch)
Added 2016-07-01 19:34:03 +0000 UTC(This, too, is a photo... I am sorry but I didn’t get the opportunity to scan any pages at home... But the scanned pages will be here as soon as I get home!!)
About the page!
The first panel was changed a bunch. First off, Zewiac was meant to protect Meya by jumping between her and Zarhe, which is why he is positioned like that. I placed Meya between Zewiac and Zarhe, removed Lankie and Tacoro (in the right top corner) and zoomed out the scene a bit.
The last panels weren’t changed at all. On this page (and in this scene overall), the biggest change is the plot and character of Zewiac.
Canon dialogue:
Zarhe: She’s a trespasser. She’s a threat to us and deserves death. So for the last time, step aside and then come home with us.
Zewiac: No.
Zarhe: WHAT?! It’s Miesenca’s orders you little shit!
Zewiac: So be it. I have something I must do. You’ll have to leave without me.
