ONWARD_Page-119_Ch-5
Added 2016-10-14 10:51:20 +0000 UTCOkay so this page had a complete makeover. The first panel's perspective was the only thing I changed about it, but the others gave the scene an all-new meaning.
The second panel did feature Zarhe, but instead of being upset, she just gazed back at Zewiac with despise in her eyes without uttering a word. And in the third panel, we saw Zewiac looking up at her with tear-filled eyes, crouching in fear.
And in the fourth panel we saw Rubigo talking to Zewiac, asking him if he was certain of his decition. That will be featured on the next page, so this is kind of an extra sneak-peek!
I changed this, since it originally made Zarhe come out as really heartless and cold (and rather unrealistic). She is to an extent, but I don't want to take it too far, since she does have feelings too. And as she sees Umbra snarl at her with a furious gaze (which she never does usually), she realizes that her actions weren't justified and suddenly feels a sting of remorse and guilt.
And let's be real, Zarhe has been acting really cruel so someone needed to put her on place.
COMIC TIP!If you want a nice effect on your pages, try making the lineart in a different color than black (I'd recommend dark brown or dark purple)! It's easy and looks great!
Question! > What's your favorite cartoon(s)?At the moment, I'm really into" Adventure Time" and "Steven Universe"! 'v' "Avatar The Last Airbender" is awesome too, but I know it's really controversial to categorize it. ´v`
Comments
She was born mute, Hunter. ^v^ Maw... I'm really happy to hear that! <3 In fact, Umbra wasn't mute at first when I created her, but then I came to the conclusion that she'd be a more memorable and deep character if she had this disability, but worked through it, showing that disabilities doesn't make you weak. ^v^ PLUS! Since I love experimenting with and exaggerating emotions in my comics, she basically forces me to do it properly. :'D
2016-10-20 12:00:58 +0000 UTCWhy can't umbra talk, Sally? And I really love her expressions it tells so much more then If she could talk. :D
Hunterwolf93
2016-10-14 21:50:26 +0000 UTC
