Dolly Wolly Pg 5
Added 2017-06-07 02:50:12 +0000 UTCHeres the Final Draft you guys get a peek before I put it up later tommorrow~ Enjoy a peek in Laurems room
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Thanks for the heads up
Kobi-Tfs
2017-06-07 04:22:24 +0000 UTCI think it should say "Oh~ Yeah I want you to move my dresser to the other wall, away from the door" Her room looks awesome though. Nice job!!
Sandiramon
2017-06-07 02:59:46 +0000 UTCYou should give the sister's first lines a second readthru, Kobi. I believe there are some words missing~.
Masao
2017-06-07 02:53:39 +0000 UTC
