UPDATES
Added 2020-08-10 02:11:51 +0000 UTCHi my loves! I've got HUGE news I need to run by you
1) I'm working on publishing The First She, HOWEVER, the original version will stay on Inkitt for future readers to enjoy. The new version will be drastically edited and will include new scenes.
2) Instead of writing Kyros an an entire novel, I will write him a short-story that explains where he has been after the attack. I will publish the completed story in one day. It will be about 5,000 words (5 chapters). I will publish it after Undercover is complete. Yes, we will see Kyros in The First Her in the future.
3) I'm interested in writing an office romance. What do you think of this story description:
Story title: The Fatsuit
Description (ish):
"I'm pregnant."
My best friend sprayed the room with orange juice. She coughed and spluttered, before finally managing, "you're what?"
"Pregnant."
"By my boss? Did you tell him yet?"
"Tell him? Are you crazy!"
"He's the father!" "He's also a lawsuit-happy asshole. You know about my criminal teenage years and that my current situation is horrible, too. My credit is shit, I owe the IRS, I'm about to file for fucking bankruptcy! How do I know he won't fight me for full parental rights? If he does that, I won't win. You know that."
Tiff squirmed in her seat. "This is dangerous territory, girl..."
Raelynn's hands found her flat stomach. "I can't risk him taking my baby away." Her eyes flickered with nervousness. She knew exactly what it was like to be raised by a single parent that didn't love her. How could she allow the same fate for her child?
"So you're just not going to tell him?"
"I don't know yet. I need to be sure that he won't be cruel enough to use his money to separate us."
"And how in the world are you going to do that?"
"I need to borrow your identity."
"My WHAT?"
"You work close with him, Tiff. Please, it will only be for a few months. It's not like I can apply for a job. They'll never hire me. I don't qualify."
"How are you going to hide your pregnancy? Don't you think he'll be suspicious if he sees that the chick he screwed shows up pregnant at the workplace?"
"I'll get a fat suit."
In summary: Raelynn will be working with her baby daddy, hiding her identity and pregnancy. Note that as I write this story, I'll be careful of fat-shaming, or portraying BBW in a negative light.
3) His Breeder: The story has reached a complicated spot. If I progress Ak and Nebula's relationship, I will be spoiling some events that will happen in The First Her. I need to write one more huge plot twist in The First Her before progressing His Breeder. This means that His Breeder will not get updated until 2 more weeks. I will update The First Her 3 times instead of 2 during the upcoming weeks to reveal the plot twist as soon as possible.
4) Undercover is almost complete! The next update will be in a few hours. I will resume updating Alpha Adrian after it ends.
What do you think of the story "The Fatsuit"? What do you think about The First Her being self-published? Are you excited to find out what the next plot twist in The First Her will be? Comment!
Comments
So proud and excited to see the published version of The First She! I like parts of the concept for the new book, but – like another patron mentioned – as a plus-size woman I really don't like the idea of a fatsuit. I know that you said you'll be careful of fat-shaming, but to me, someone wearing a fatsuit really just feels like someone is imitating my own trauma. I don't have the words to explain it all, but the idea of anyone wearing a fatsuit doesn't sit well. There is a lot of societal oppression and bullying of plus men/ women/non-binaries, so please just be careful of how you approach this story. I love your work and am excited for any new work you put out, all I ask is that you take time to learn about all the things plus-people actually have to deal with in their day-to-day lives. @ yrfatfriend on instagram is a great resource if straight-sized people want to learn more. I think it has potential to be a really good story, especially if the main character is straight-sized and ends up having a wake-up call to how plus-people are treated.
Taylor Romano
2020-08-11 18:50:54 +0000 UTCI see what you mean as per usual my eyes to read, my fingers to scroll
Ndalamo Tharage
2020-08-11 17:27:15 +0000 UTCI'm definitely waiting for the next plot twist
Ree1209
2020-08-10 17:27:15 +0000 UTCTHERES ANOTHER PLOT TWIST ?!
Sofs Mi
2020-08-10 06:58:49 +0000 UTCCANNOT WAIT FOR FAT SUIT 💜
Violet
2020-08-10 06:11:36 +0000 UTCI’m hype for it all do your thang girl 😊
Quayshanna Blount
2020-08-10 05:26:35 +0000 UTCMan. That would be new for you. I will definitely be looking forward to something more ‘human’
Lilliz
2020-08-10 04:52:47 +0000 UTCHell yeah! Definitely excited. Can't wait to read the plot twist in the First Her and ur new novel.
Andrea Lambrou
2020-08-10 04:43:10 +0000 UTCI occasionally come back on this app to scroll because I am SO EXCITED
Kat
2020-08-10 04:33:20 +0000 UTCI hope it will be accessible for Lithuania country too ;)
Puikute
2020-08-10 04:28:15 +0000 UTCI am down for the office book not so sure about the name though. Or her wearing a fat suit. As a Plus size girl, I feel a bit uncomfortable but I guess it all depends on how you write it. I support whatever you decide. So excited for the progress with all your books!
Clarissa Oquendo
2020-08-10 04:24:05 +0000 UTCOmg congrats on so much!!!!!!!!!!!!
Clarissa Oquendo
2020-08-10 04:22:43 +0000 UTCI think I will publish it in as many sources as possible like Amazon, Barnes and Nobles, etc. I will try to be as accessible as possible
Ancientt
2020-08-10 04:20:14 +0000 UTCNew published version will be available only in certain countries to buy? What about those who will not be able yo read it? Fatsuit - I love your writting, go girl with office book! Can't wait to read about Kyros, Nebula and Ak progress too.
Puikute
2020-08-10 04:13:26 +0000 UTCThe problem is that she cant apply for a job because she would be denied because of the background check. She has a criminal past, and that's why tbe guy will likely fight for full custody
Ancientt
2020-08-10 03:21:13 +0000 UTCYou know I'm still gonna read and would give my honest thoughts
L.M .S
2020-08-10 03:21:02 +0000 UTCBefore the first she, I was known as a werewolf writer. Now, I've conquered fantasy/scifi as well. I really want to try an office romance because I've never done it before. I'm sure I can give you a story you have never seen before
Ancientt
2020-08-10 03:17:46 +0000 UTCDefinitely!
Kiarah Johansen
2020-08-10 03:17:06 +0000 UTCIm thinking paperback publishing
Ancientt
2020-08-10 03:15:48 +0000 UTCI'll figure out those small details, dont worry
Ancientt
2020-08-10 03:14:41 +0000 UTCAll those questions will be addressed 😉
Ancientt
2020-08-10 03:13:45 +0000 UTCDid the first she sound like your cup of tea? 🤣
Ancientt
2020-08-10 03:12:47 +0000 UTCOffice romance!!!! Yesss
Lindsey Gansen
2020-08-10 03:11:18 +0000 UTCI think Fat Suit shows intriguing! It would be nice for him to like her in her fat suit too!
Sharon
2020-08-10 03:10:11 +0000 UTCWhere will the new version be if the original version will stay on inkitt? I remember you were talking about that other website
L.M .S
2020-08-10 03:08:07 +0000 UTCAs far as publishing and changing on inkitt how did u know I just deleted inkitt off my phone today lol
L.M .S
2020-08-10 03:04:35 +0000 UTCOffice romance. No that's not you. I see nothing wrong with the office romance story. It's just there are plenty of romance stories like that. Boss knocks up employee. Employee and boss 1st hate each other. Now boss and employee love each other. Have cute baby. The end
L.M .S
2020-08-10 03:03:08 +0000 UTCI'm happy that you will be able to publish your book hope I'll be able to read published version. Looking forward to reading the fatsuit seems interesting.
jeniene
2020-08-10 02:45:31 +0000 UTCPlot twist? My heart can’t take it. Bring it on though lol
Danie L.
2020-08-10 02:44:45 +0000 UTCI dint really like the idea of the office romance . I just don’t think it will go well
Crystal W
2020-08-10 02:42:10 +0000 UTCI’m excited about the fat suit and I’m eager to see how you go about it. My initial reaction was to be nervous BUT I trust and love your work. I’ll definitely give it a try and support it and try to keep my oversensitive-plus-size-self in check lol. Can’t wait! 💙
Karina
2020-08-10 02:42:07 +0000 UTCWouldn't it be better if a job opening came about at the law firm and he needed an urgent hire and asked her friend to find someone on short notice is that not more plausible?
Ndalamo Tharage
2020-08-10 02:29:40 +0000 UTCYay, Kyros! I'm ready 🤗
Sasha Johnson
2020-08-10 02:19:38 +0000 UTCThe fatsuit has a good idea to it but doesnt make full sense. She can't take her friends job if he knows what the friend and her both look like. a fat suit will not cover a pregnancy also no one will know who she is seeing as no one has met her but him which will be a problem. what will the friend do for months without a way to pay her bills?I have too many questions.
Marie Thompson
2020-08-10 02:18:51 +0000 UTCThe fatsuit seems like an interesting idea! & I’m excited to hear The First She will be published and I’ll have to reread 😅 I’m excited for your success! Can’t wait to read The First Her and plot twists to come!!
Cassandra
2020-08-10 02:18:07 +0000 UTCThis sounds great! You know I will read whatever you put out for us. And as for Kyros story I can’t wait! Also ready for the First her-real nervous tho. You’ve been hurting my heart in TFH these last couple of chapters so I’m really excited to see what’s next!
Bonnie Posey
2020-08-10 02:18:04 +0000 UTCI'm not so sure about the fatsuit story. I'd give it a try but it doesn't sound like my cup of tea
Kiarah Johansen
2020-08-10 02:17:43 +0000 UTCI'm excited for everything!!! Yay! I'm so happy for you! Congrats! I'll buy the book! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
PassionCinnamon 25
2020-08-10 02:17:22 +0000 UTCThe fatsuit sounds interesting, I'll definitely read it
perfection 04223
2020-08-10 02:16:24 +0000 UTCOooh The Fat Suit sounds super good! I can’t wait for this plot twist you speak of as well! But I am also nervous 😥
Sarah
2020-08-10 02:15:20 +0000 UTCYay! So many exciting things happening! The new story sounds great!
Julianna
2020-08-10 02:14:08 +0000 UTC