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Ancientt (Elaine Waters)
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Hi my loves! I've got HUGE news I need to run by you

1) I'm working on publishing The First She, HOWEVER, the original version will stay on Inkitt for future readers to enjoy. The new version will be drastically edited and will include new scenes.

2) Instead of writing Kyros an an entire novel, I will write him a short-story that explains where he has been after the attack. I will publish the completed story in one day. It will be about 5,000 words (5 chapters). I will publish it after Undercover is complete. Yes, we will see Kyros in The First Her in the future.

3) I'm interested in writing an office romance. What do you think of this story description:

Story title: The Fatsuit

Description (ish):

"I'm pregnant."

My best friend sprayed the room with orange juice. She coughed and spluttered, before finally managing, "you're what?"

"Pregnant."

"By my boss? Did you tell him yet?"

"Tell him? Are you crazy!"

"He's the father!"  "He's also a lawsuit-happy asshole. You know about my criminal teenage years and that my current situation is horrible, too. My credit is shit, I owe the IRS, I'm about to file for fucking bankruptcy! How do I know he won't fight me for full parental rights? If he does that, I won't win. You know that."

Tiff squirmed in her seat. "This is dangerous territory, girl..."

Raelynn's hands found her flat stomach. "I can't risk him taking my baby away." Her eyes flickered with nervousness. She knew exactly what it was like to be raised by a single parent that didn't love her. How could she allow the same fate for her child?

"So you're just not going to tell him?"

"I don't know yet. I need to be sure that he won't be cruel enough to use his money to separate us."

"And how in the world are you going to do that?"

"I need to borrow your identity."  

"My WHAT?"  

"You work close with him, Tiff. Please, it will only be for a few months. It's not like I can apply for a job. They'll never hire me. I don't qualify."

  "How are you going to hide your pregnancy? Don't you think he'll be suspicious if he sees that the chick he screwed shows up pregnant at the workplace?" 

 "I'll get a fat suit."

In summary: Raelynn will be working with her baby daddy, hiding her identity and pregnancy. Note that as I write this story, I'll be careful of fat-shaming, or portraying BBW in a negative light.

3) His Breeder: The story has reached a complicated spot. If I progress Ak and Nebula's relationship, I will be spoiling some events that will happen in The First Her. I need to write one more huge plot twist in  The First Her before progressing His Breeder. This means that His Breeder will not get updated until 2 more weeks. I will update The First Her 3 times instead of 2 during the upcoming weeks to reveal the plot twist as soon as possible.

4) Undercover is almost complete! The next update will be in a few hours. I will resume updating Alpha Adrian after it ends.

What do you think of the story "The Fatsuit"? What do you think about The First Her being self-published? Are you excited to find out what the next plot twist in The First Her will be? Comment!

Comments

So proud and excited to see the published version of The First She! I like parts of the concept for the new book, but – like another patron mentioned – as a plus-size woman I really don't like the idea of a fatsuit. I know that you said you'll be careful of fat-shaming, but to me, someone wearing a fatsuit really just feels like someone is imitating my own trauma. I don't have the words to explain it all, but the idea of anyone wearing a fatsuit doesn't sit well. There is a lot of societal oppression and bullying of plus men/ women/non-binaries, so please just be careful of how you approach this story. I love your work and am excited for any new work you put out, all I ask is that you take time to learn about all the things plus-people actually have to deal with in their day-to-day lives. @ yrfatfriend on instagram is a great resource if straight-sized people want to learn more. I think it has potential to be a really good story, especially if the main character is straight-sized and ends up having a wake-up call to how plus-people are treated.

Taylor Romano

I see what you mean as per usual my eyes to read, my fingers to scroll

Ndalamo Tharage

I'm definitely waiting for the next plot twist

Ree1209

THERES ANOTHER PLOT TWIST ?!

Sofs Mi

CANNOT WAIT FOR FAT SUIT 💜

Violet

I’m hype for it all do your thang girl 😊

Quayshanna Blount

Man. That would be new for you. I will definitely be looking forward to something more ‘human’

Lilliz

Hell yeah! Definitely excited. Can't wait to read the plot twist in the First Her and ur new novel.

Andrea Lambrou

I occasionally come back on this app to scroll because I am SO EXCITED

Kat

I hope it will be accessible for Lithuania country too ;)

Puikute

I am down for the office book not so sure about the name though. Or her wearing a fat suit. As a Plus size girl, I feel a bit uncomfortable but I guess it all depends on how you write it. I support whatever you decide. So excited for the progress with all your books!

Clarissa Oquendo

Omg congrats on so much!!!!!!!!!!!!

Clarissa Oquendo

I think I will publish it in as many sources as possible like Amazon, Barnes and Nobles, etc. I will try to be as accessible as possible

Ancientt

New published version will be available only in certain countries to buy? What about those who will not be able yo read it? Fatsuit - I love your writting, go girl with office book! Can't wait to read about Kyros, Nebula and Ak progress too.

Puikute

The problem is that she cant apply for a job because she would be denied because of the background check. She has a criminal past, and that's why tbe guy will likely fight for full custody

Ancientt

You know I'm still gonna read and would give my honest thoughts

L.M .S

Before the first she, I was known as a werewolf writer. Now, I've conquered fantasy/scifi as well. I really want to try an office romance because I've never done it before. I'm sure I can give you a story you have never seen before

Ancientt

Definitely!

Kiarah Johansen

Im thinking paperback publishing

Ancientt

I'll figure out those small details, dont worry

Ancientt

All those questions will be addressed 😉

Ancientt

Did the first she sound like your cup of tea? 🤣

Ancientt

Office romance!!!! Yesss

Lindsey Gansen

I think Fat Suit shows intriguing! It would be nice for him to like her in her fat suit too!

Sharon

Where will the new version be if the original version will stay on inkitt? I remember you were talking about that other website

L.M .S

As far as publishing and changing on inkitt how did u know I just deleted inkitt off my phone today lol

L.M .S

Office romance. No that's not you. I see nothing wrong with the office romance story. It's just there are plenty of romance stories like that. Boss knocks up employee. Employee and boss 1st hate each other. Now boss and employee love each other. Have cute baby. The end

L.M .S

I'm happy that you will be able to publish your book hope I'll be able to read published version. Looking forward to reading the fatsuit seems interesting.

jeniene

Plot twist? My heart can’t take it. Bring it on though lol

Danie L.

I dint really like the idea of the office romance . I just don’t think it will go well

Crystal W

I’m excited about the fat suit and I’m eager to see how you go about it. My initial reaction was to be nervous BUT I trust and love your work. I’ll definitely give it a try and support it and try to keep my oversensitive-plus-size-self in check lol. Can’t wait! 💙

Karina

Wouldn't it be better if a job opening came about at the law firm and he needed an urgent hire and asked her friend to find someone on short notice is that not more plausible?

Ndalamo Tharage

Yay, Kyros! I'm ready 🤗

Sasha Johnson

The fatsuit has a good idea to it but doesnt make full sense. She can't take her friends job if he knows what the friend and her both look like. a fat suit will not cover a pregnancy also no one will know who she is seeing as no one has met her but him which will be a problem. what will the friend do for months without a way to pay her bills?I have too many questions.

Marie Thompson

The fatsuit seems like an interesting idea! & I’m excited to hear The First She will be published and I’ll have to reread 😅 I’m excited for your success! Can’t wait to read The First Her and plot twists to come!!

Cassandra

This sounds great! You know I will read whatever you put out for us. And as for Kyros story I can’t wait! Also ready for the First her-real nervous tho. You’ve been hurting my heart in TFH these last couple of chapters so I’m really excited to see what’s next!

Bonnie Posey

I'm not so sure about the fatsuit story. I'd give it a try but it doesn't sound like my cup of tea

Kiarah Johansen

I'm excited for everything!!! Yay! I'm so happy for you! Congrats! I'll buy the book! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

PassionCinnamon 25

The fatsuit sounds interesting, I'll definitely read it

perfection 04223

Oooh The Fat Suit sounds super good! I can’t wait for this plot twist you speak of as well! But I am also nervous 😥

Sarah

Yay! So many exciting things happening! The new story sounds great!

Julianna


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