His Breeder - AND BEYOND
Added 2020-10-12 10:23:56 +0000 UTCMonths multiplied. Terra started walking, running, talking, and Ran followed in her sister’s footsteps.
Three years later, and life at The Ruins was booming. Their population was immense, and their story reached every corner of the planet. New Terran women were found in the wilderness, but Vrox’s brothers still went out for long trips in search of the missing ones.
Using Xulor’s spaceship, Ezron made contact with a foreign planet. It took a lot of debating to get there. Some Ezronians didn’t want to risk communicating with outsiders. Ultimately, everyone voted on it, and the choice pointed to the stars.
No one truly healed from Ak’s passing, but they got better at talking about it. Sometimes, they shared stories over the campfire to honor his memory. Everyone knew that Nebula kept Ak’s journal, but no one commented on it.
“Mama.”
She gently placed the journal aside and smiled at her baby.
“Hi.”
Neil smiled toothlessly. He was eleven months and was already using small words. He was the cutest thing– with his dark skin, bold dimples and baby hair that she hoped would transform into an awesome afro.
“Want to come out of the crib?” she offered.
He sat back down and started to play with a toy. Nebula stroked his hair gently and then picked up the journal once more.
“You are reading Ak’s words again.”
She blinked. Hercu was standing at the entrance, his face blank.
“Huh?”
He pointed to the journal. “Akdronis’ words.”
The mere mention of his name made her stomach clench.
Yes, she still read the entries he wrote about her. They were beautiful, and they made her see him in a new light. They allowed her to create a connection with him even in his passing.
“Oh, um. Yes. Does this bother you?”
She doubted it would. Their relationship was as platonic as day one. The night of Neil’s procreation had been awkward, but it ended quickly, and they hadn’t had sex since. She didn’t regret that night, though. She thanked the skies every day for her baby boy.
“No, it does not.”
Hercu was a good male. He was a distant father, but she knew he had wounds he was trying to heal.
“We should discuss something,” he swallowed.
She smiled, although she already knew what was coming. She had seen his packed bags under his bed. They slept on different beds, but shared the same room.
“Is it about Neil?” she asked, reaching to stroke their son’s hair again.
“How did…”
“I see the way you look at him.”
He fell to his knees and palmed his face. If he could cry, he would be bawling. “I feel like a horrible male. I am so, so, sorry. But every time I look at him, I see my daughter and it hurts, Nebula. I fear I will never love him.”
She pursed her lips. None of this was news to her. He hardly ever touched Neil.
“I will love him enough for both of us. I won’t force you into anything.”
“You are not angry?”
“No, but I’m sad. I can’t be angry, because we agreed this would be a loveless arrangement from day one.”
“I am sorry,” he repeated. “I thought I could warm up to fatherhood again, but I am weak. I am messed up in my head. Niel and you deserve better than me.”
She turned her head, feeling her eyes swell with tears.
“I will always value our friendship. Thank you for the days of exploration and for making my days brighter. I will never forget you. Please forgive my weakness.”
“You won’t do that, right?” she asked, clenching her fists. “You won’t…” She couldn’t even say it. The topic of suicide tore a hole in her chest.
“No. I will only leave The Ruins. Do not worry. I am not considering dark thoughts.”
Silence took over.
“So this is it, then?”
“Yes. Please… please tell Neil I died in a hunting accident. Do not let him know that his father abandoned him.” She heard shuffling as he picked up his bags. “You will find happiness one day.”
She didn’t believe him.
The door shut behind him, and she shoved her face into her pillow. She turned away from Niel to hide her misery and rocked with violent sobs. She hated being alone. Hated seeing her friends glow with happiness while she could only see the ghost of a dead man.
She forgave Ak for his attempts against her, but she was still heartbroken that he didn’t let her have a final word. He should have come clean about his illness earlier, so she could say goodbye.
“Mama.”
She wiped her tears and took strong breaths. Then, she forced a smile onto her face.
“Hi, handsome. Want to give mama a hug?”
After making sure her face was clear of tears, she picked Neil up and carried him to the common room.
“Nebula!” Ran laughed.
“No, Ran! No running!” Vrox scolded the little one. Ran ignored him, as usual, and hugged Nebula’s legs.
“Hi princess. Do you want to play with Neil?”
Terra appeared by her side, and the twins played with the baby.
“You okay?” Kira frowned, noticing her bloodshot eyes.
Nebula only smiled.
“Mommy, look!”
The mothers sat down and gave their undivided attention to their yapping babies. Nebula’s fake smile became a real one, because she genuinely loved these people. She was going to be alright.
– • –
She spent the afternoons organizing the library with Kira. As they worked, Nebula shared her worries, and Kira reminded her a thousand times that she was priceless. She was infuriated with Hercu for abandoning his son, but Nebula managed to calm her down. She never loved Hercu, although they were good friends. She wished she could have done enough to make him move on from his painful past, but he chose his own path and she had to live with it.
Why waste energy hating him when she could use it to love Neil instead?
The books they organized had been salvaged from The Ruins. Most were damaged, so many pages were lost. The library was divided into two sections: post Vanishing and past it. The post section was full of the old books– the ones written by Ezronians. The others were written after the Vanishing.
Kira wrote about their history and had a few engineering books where she listed important equations and facts. Vrox wrote about medicinal plants, and Nebula wrote about geology, pregnancies, and childbearing. She found plenty of patterns, like the gestation periods of women being around six months.
Everyone wanted to prepare for the future, but didn’t want to forget their past.
“Kira, please get off that ladder,” Nebula begged. “If Vrox sees you, he won’t shut the fuck up.”
Kira waved her off. “We need to re-write this book. The ink is getting smudged all over the pages.”
“I can do it.”
“Thanks.”
“Sure. I’ll write the Ezronian translation, too. Just let me change Niel’s diaper first. Can you hold him for a sec?”
“Sure.”
Jaxxon– their guard, laughed from the corner of the room. He had been around for three years and was second only to Vrox in combat. He was mostly like Kyros since he spent the day in mischief.
“Who wrote this nonsense?” he asked, raising up a book.
“What does it say?” Kira asked.
“Buna rocks can only be found in oceans,” he read. “What fool would think this?”
Kira looked nervously at Nebula, who shifted Niel to her hip and glared. “This fool would.”
Jaxxon crossed his arms over his chest. “Well, fix it. This is incorrect.”
Kira looked between the giant and the fuming mother. “Guys, it’s just a rock.”
They glared at her as if she just disrespected the Fates.
“Sorry. I take it back, alright? Rocks are very important.”
Satisfied with that answer, the two continued to glare at each other. Niel pushed against her chest, wanting to be put down. Nebula complied and placed him on the floor.
“Buna rocks can only be found near volcanoes,” Jaxxon argued.
“Bullshit,” Nebula spat.
“It is my planet. I know it better.”
“I know you didn’t just pull that card on me. I have been studying Ezron for three years, dude.”
“Clearly not very well.”
She opened her mouth to fire up another line when she finally noticed that Niel had wobbled away. She looked at the baby who was now standing beside Jaxxon and reaching for his–
“Niel, no!”
The surprised baby fell just as he gripped onto Jaxxon’s loincloth. The thing fell apart, and both women were flashed by Jaxxon’s package.
Nebula spent the next two months avoiding the man like a Vanishing. She kept working on the library, and this particular week she worked abnormal amounts of time. She always did this when Ak’s death anniversary was coming up; always buried herself in work to avoid her sadness.
It was year number four. This time of year was always gut-wrenching for her. She was in denial for the first three years. Neil made her a little less miserable, but her anger and guilt were still there.
After his family paid their respect that morning, she went to visit the gravesite. Vrox guarded her, but kept his distance.
She put her book and pen aside, and kneeled down.
“Hi,” she began, eyes already drowning. “I’ve been doing okay. Niel is walking all over the place, driving me crazy, and…” she sighed. “We all miss you. I know I say this every single time I come here, but I wish we could have said goodbye. I wanted to tell you that I forgive you. You should have never taken that poison. You were wrong, you know? We still need you here. It doesn’t matter that your brothers are adults now. You were important.”
The bucket she brought to water his plants tipped over, but she could swear that her eyes were spilling much more water.
“You should have said goodbye,” she kept on rambling.
“Nebula. It is time to go,” Vrox said. “Come, let us get you some tea.”
“Why didn’t he say goodbye?” she sobbed.
Vrox sighed, feeling as destroyed as her by the loss although four years had gone by. He fell to his knees and pulled her in for a hug. “He lives on in our memories. He would be happy to know that you have moved on and had Neil, and he would be proud to see all the contributions you have made to Ezron. I am certainly proud of you. You are a strong female. Instead of demanding Hercu’s head and cursing him, you got to work and took care of your son.”
“It’s my fault he died,” she cried into him.
“Stop this. Akdronis chose to punish himself. You did not make him. He is at peace now. You deserve peace, too.”
She clung to him, feeling like she was melting. She cried until her head hurt, rambling about her regrets and wishes.
“Come,” Vrox urged.
She stood on shaky legs and followed him home. Neil needed her.
– • –
Long after they left, the water that was spilled continued to trickle down. In the dead of night, the earth trembled.
“Damn it, Kyros, I told you to patch the holes in the ceiling. Look at this, I am all wet.”
Akdronis looked down at his body, but it was too dark to see anything.
“Boys?” he called out to his brothers.
The pages of Nebula’s book flickered in the wind, flipping one after another until stopping on–
SECOND SCALING.
Definition: An unexplained phenomenon that happens rarely within Ezronian males, causing a change in physiology. Ezronians believe it is triggered by religious forces.
Changes include a growth of horns, change in scaling patterns, and boost of strength.
Only one male alive is known to have his condition, but others have been recorded through history.
Akdronis crawled out of the grave, wondering how he got thrown in a ditch. It was probably Kyros' doing. That idiot.
He looked around, not recognizing his location. When he scratched his head, he found two horns that hadn’t been there before.
What in the mothers is going on?
Wanting to find his brothers, he dove into the wilderness and walked all the way home. He avoided all the men he crossed, not interested in altercations. He just wanted to get home.
He couldn’t remember how he ventured so far away. He must have hit his head somewhere, although that didn’t explain the horns. It took him two full weeks to arrive back at his family’s camp.
The logs that made up the perimeter were destroyed from neglect. A small fire burned low in the middle of camp.
“Kyros?” he called out.
There was a gasp, and a small body scurried away.
Ak frowned. That was definitely not Kyros.
A/N: I hope you enjoyed this rollercoster of emotions.
THE STORY CONTINUES IN BOOK 2!!!! Akdronis also has his own short story
In summary: Ak was forgiven by the Fates. He died from suicide right around the time his second scaling was happening. This caused an unbalance in equilibrium, so he was tossed in some coma state. When he wakes up, he has no memory of meeting Kira or Nebula. All he remembers is living with his brothers after The Vanishing. Naturally, he goes home in search of his family, and finds a Terran woman there instead.
I know this story was messy in the sense that there were a lot of time skips. It was hard writing this story because it revolved around what happened in The First Her. I didn’t want to repeat scenes, and I didn’t want to spoil anything either. When I edit the story (in the faaarrrr future), I will make transitions more seamless and do more character build-up.
See you guys in BOOK 2! CLICK HERE TO READ IT
Comments
I will never understand why ppl wanted nebula to end up with ak, i loved both of their endings!!! their stories make me cry everytime
Randomreader
2024-12-04 00:00:09 +0000 UTCSHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP AURTHORRR THE LIVING WATEEEERRR
Alexis Young
2024-11-23 18:32:08 +0000 UTCNot her arguing with the native like GURL you JUST started going here😂🤣
Alexis Young
2024-11-23 18:27:25 +0000 UTCsee you in book 2!
Ancientt
2024-03-27 18:26:01 +0000 UTCHOLD UP PUMP THE BRAKES I GOT EYE WATER
Alexandra Harris
2024-01-10 15:06:45 +0000 UTCA very very beautiful story. I cried so hard with Nebula and I hoped Ak somehow would come back alive; so my wish came true! I can’t wait to read the second book, thank you for this book it’s so beautiful like every other book. A true fan❤️✌🏻
SheenTheAuthor
2022-09-03 18:28:42 +0000 UTCI cried 💔💔💔 I really really really hope he and nebula are together in the future
Ellen Trainer
2021-12-05 21:14:59 +0000 UTCI’m literally crying in joy after just crying in sadness reading nebulas part
Joharajaana Faith
2021-09-28 04:32:30 +0000 UTCI was srly question life and existance in general
Stepho
2021-02-25 22:33:16 +0000 UTCOMG OMG OMG so glad to hear Ak was forgiven by the fates, im crying
Stepho
2021-02-25 22:32:49 +0000 UTCI have been crying for like 10 min straight!! 😭
purplishsunflower
2021-01-21 13:33:10 +0000 UTCI can't believe how much crying you made me do!!!.... 😭😭😭😭😡
Gladys Wandia
2020-12-03 15:16:32 +0000 UTCWill Ak have a continuation of his story?
Kavya
2020-10-26 04:45:45 +0000 UTCI must agree with every single line you wrote!
Tatiana Souza Alves
2020-10-26 04:05:43 +0000 UTCTheir story will stay like this, but Nebula has a continuation of her story
Ancientt
2020-10-15 20:56:46 +0000 UTCI’m glad I’m not the only one very dissatisfied with this book and the way she left the characters
Nicole
2020-10-15 20:44:37 +0000 UTCI still don’t understand why you are not having nebula and all be together.
Nicole
2020-10-15 20:43:26 +0000 UTCYou really had me crying
Fran Brown
2020-10-15 15:19:47 +0000 UTCOn a side note: dips on Ak's female being a werewolf. 😂 My wild imagination keeps requesting the last surviving wolf who was mateless all her life and finds an alien with horns as a mate. It'll totally go with Ak telling his mum saw a female turning into an animal with a snout and he was the only one who believed her.
Venessa Lobo
2020-10-14 11:23:11 +0000 UTCikr 😔
Eronheart
2020-10-13 15:03:26 +0000 UTCi couldn't agree with you more.. the end doesn't actually make sense. all through out the story there are very few interaction of the two leads, but there was a path of redemption or so i thought . they didn't even got the chance to talk , for Ak to finally ask forgiveness.. He died alone which is so tragic.. then Ak resurrects and forget all about it.. another thing, in the end, the title doesn't make sense anymore 😔
Eronheart
2020-10-13 14:49:42 +0000 UTCThis is true. That was his most redeeming moment as a character!
JessSparkle
2020-10-13 07:53:52 +0000 UTCReally feel the story was rushed and not really thought through, now the name of the book "His Breeder" don't even make sense. Think it needs to be redone.😔
Evelyn King
2020-10-13 04:23:03 +0000 UTCLater down the line can we have an alternate ending?? Ik many of us read stories to feel happy and get away from the real life we have . It’s ur story at the end of the day so u get to do what you want with it.
Alexandra
2020-10-13 04:05:09 +0000 UTCI was so confused! I loved you but wish the authors note was another chapter to finish it. Of course I wish they ended up together but understand not everyone gets happy endings. Just wish the authors note was the chapter to end it. Love your work still !
Jessica
2020-10-13 02:19:31 +0000 UTCThank god he’s not dead anymore. It would be awesome to read a story about Ak and how he found his happy ending.
Cynthia Dao
2020-10-13 00:26:02 +0000 UTCWOW
Ree1209
2020-10-13 00:14:38 +0000 UTCHer work, her choice! But everybody is entitled to an opinion.
Ree1209
2020-10-13 00:14:34 +0000 UTCWooooooow 🤯
Quiana Meggs
2020-10-12 22:20:55 +0000 UTCI don't want a three part arc for Ak. I am not interested in one. This ending just doesn't fit the plot or the story. I know it's your choice and thank you for all the wonderful stories you have given us. This one is just disappointing.
Sharon
2020-10-12 22:20:38 +0000 UTC*honestly
Sharon
2020-10-12 22:06:39 +0000 UTCI’ve been here since Alpha Adrian and I am a huge fan of yours but this is disappointing. I’m going to pretend I never read this. The characters deserve an ending that is actually a part of the story and not an authors note. I appreciate you having the courage the write so many amazing stories and sharing them with the world, I really do. This story however feels like a slap in the face. Maybe next time if you don’t have the time to write a story that the characters and readers deserve, don’t write it.
Tristen Lehigh
2020-10-12 20:22:18 +0000 UTCI agree with alot of the people thinking this story was rushed. If you can't give a story the attention it needs, then I'd rather you not write it or just write it when your main project is finished. You know how much heartache you could have saved us if you woke him up a week after he died? And then nebula was the one who had to earn HIS love? With the roles reversed?
Sofs Mi
2020-10-12 18:51:51 +0000 UTCI’m sorry but I’m really really disappointed in how this story turned out. This whole book was about Nebula/Ak’s relationship yet we get very few interactions between the both of them and it’s called “his breeder” which kind of makes it seem like it’s a book about a relationship between the two of them, but there wasn’t even one. Also, unlike everyone else, I could see them together. Obviously, not right after what happened and if he was the same person he was. But he wasn’t. He changes and significant time went by where he never approaches or even talks to nebula, which gave them both the time to heal. This story was really good at the beginning but really rushed at the end. I don’t understand why we were shown the relationship between the two if this was how it’s gonna end. I love your other books, but Nebula and Ak not being together doesn’t bring any justice to this story. And especially only for it to end with nebula settling down with some random guy we don’t even know and for Ak to go through all that character development only to forget everything what happened before.
Kavya
2020-10-12 18:33:06 +0000 UTCAgree. I think she’s an amazing writer but didn’t give this the attention it needed. Granted, she’s been busy so we understand. I think I’ll just keep my fingers crossed that she re does this story when she has more time ❤️
Clarissa Oquendo
2020-10-12 18:08:19 +0000 UTCI totally agree with this! I loved that Ak loved her natural hair. It made me warm up to him more. I thought this book had waaaay more chapters to it and that they were going to be together, not for it to end with suicide and new people. All of that dating stuff with nebula for us to compare them to ak for him to just die? Idk, didn’t sit right with me how the black woman was the only one with a rough ending.
Brooklynn Emahizer
2020-10-12 17:11:59 +0000 UTCI don't mind this ending but Ak story was kind of built in the earlier chapters so it's easier to swallow his death. Nebulas was also built but the way her story ended was shit. All the other women find happy endings in their story and Nebula did too, but you put her happy ending in an Authors note rather than in her story, I would have rather waited for you to do more chapters then to have you rush the part of her story line. I don't mind that they didn't end up together, it's more realistic that way. But you can't rush and then say hey she ended up happy with someone else years down the line and you've only seen 1 interaction with this character, and they argued the entire time. Love your work and your a great author , but I've been following you since Alpha Zena and in my opinion this is worst finish to a story I've seen from you. Love you lots but I'm not feeling it
Alyvia Brown
2020-10-12 17:09:19 +0000 UTCI liked the concept of this, but maybe it should have been left for after you were finished with kira and vrox’s story! Sometimes we bite off more than we can chew, and that’s okay!! You are an amazing writer, but I don’t think this story did you justice. I look forward to rereading it someday when it’s edited 💖
Brooklynn Emahizer
2020-10-12 17:08:58 +0000 UTC....
Isabel
2020-10-12 17:04:15 +0000 UTCNot a fan with how this turned out. Needs a re-do. 😒😖
Clarissa Oquendo
2020-10-12 16:59:44 +0000 UTCI swear. I just feel so bad for her
S.O.J
2020-10-12 16:54:57 +0000 UTCFr tho
S.O.J
2020-10-12 16:48:29 +0000 UTCI love it!!
Kim Scott
2020-10-12 16:36:32 +0000 UTCAlso, why was Ak going through a second scaling? I thought only commanders go through them. And will he ever regain all of his memories? I'm a bit bummed that he doesn't remember when he saved Terra because that was pretty heroic.
Luz C
2020-10-12 15:50:54 +0000 UTCI honestly thought Nebula was going to end up with Ak🤡 I didn't really ship them in the beginning but if I'm going to be honest, I was starting to warm up to him towards the end. I didn't think they were going to end up with different people. Thank you for writing this story. I'm really going to miss Nebula😭❤️
Luz C
2020-10-12 15:46:15 +0000 UTClol you did say sike😂😭
Luz C
2020-10-12 15:41:25 +0000 UTCYou’re an amazing writer though, thanks for the ride
JessSparkle
2020-10-12 15:26:54 +0000 UTCHey @ancientt I know you don’t want people to see what happened to nebula as “racial” but as a black reader (even if we only make up like 5% of your audience) we get really excited to see black characters we that aren’t “urbanized”. That’s why we are very attached to nebula’s story/ending. I’m sure you didn’t intend it to be that way, but you’ve ended up recreating a lot of the troubles educated black women face. Single mother, can’t find love etc. it’s a little disheartening. Overall
JessSparkle
2020-10-12 15:26:20 +0000 UTCI need to take a nap. I’m so exhausted from this emotional roller coaster😔 i really did wish Ak and Nebula could’ve had each other
Movee
2020-10-12 15:12:38 +0000 UTCI really wouldn't male this racial. Spoiler, but Nebs isnt the only girl who ends as a single mom
Ancientt
2020-10-12 15:08:37 +0000 UTCI’m disappointed... 😔 Instead of having the ending she deserved Neb was stuck with the stereotypical Black single mom. It might not seem like it but ... I mean why did she get the short end of the stick... everyone else had their merry happy ending. But she still had basically carry the world on her back to have a mediocre ending. It’s tiring... but it’s nothing new. 😔
Riquca Reynolds
2020-10-12 14:54:39 +0000 UTCI love your writing but honesy not this ending.
Sharon
2020-10-12 14:26:42 +0000 UTCExactly!!!!
Hser Hsa
2020-10-12 14:13:46 +0000 UTCBut.. 😭 why is it called his breeder?!
Fabi
2020-10-12 14:11:26 +0000 UTCYeah no I’m just gonna pretend that he and nebula got together after years of healing and have Niel and live happily ever after.
Gabby
2020-10-12 14:06:11 +0000 UTCMan I always stay away from books with sad endings because they really affect me , I know it’s kinda lame but I get rlly emotionally attached to the characters, and though both of them still find happiness which I’m super happy about I guess it’s just the fact I went into this book expecting them to be tgt?? Idk now I’m gonna be sad for awhile but it’s okay I guess it’s a good sign to the author cause it means u wrote so well it’s gonna stick to me for awhile. ANYWAYS this was an emotional roller coaster and I can’t wait for the next stories!!
Faith Dominguez
2020-10-12 13:31:13 +0000 UTCElaine, so I love reading your books and I know you are writing a lot of other stories as well but this book felt rushed. 😕 Hopefully you can flesh it out a little more sometime in the future.
Erin Krakow
2020-10-12 13:30:38 +0000 UTCOk so i took my time and convinced myself that Ak never really loved Nebula, he was feeling guilty towards her and somehow when she forgave him he was given another chance to love and be the good person he is again. So when they meet again Nebula wont feel sad that he is with another woman and he wont remember Nebula so everyone is happy 👏🏼👏🏼
Hala
2020-10-12 13:14:35 +0000 UTCI really truly hope you give jaxxon and Nebula a chapter or two of their love story. All we’ve seen for her is hurt, heartbreak and courage and as a strong black woman myself I just want to her (romantically) loved and being cared for - even if it’s only for a few chapters.
Ree
2020-10-12 13:10:06 +0000 UTCLol I'm so confused
L.M .S
2020-10-12 13:07:03 +0000 UTCWHOA
Ree
2020-10-12 13:06:39 +0000 UTCI am so emotional right now
Hala
2020-10-12 13:05:49 +0000 UTCPlease, please give Ak a lot of love..
lishiya
2020-10-12 12:15:48 +0000 UTCHow dare you!! I'm just glad that hubby is out for errands while I'm crying my heart out 😭😭😭😭😭😭
Gladz Kojongian-Ratuliu
2020-10-12 12:12:09 +0000 UTCThank god 😂 So happy about this ending phew. I like that they do not become a couple since I somehow wouldnt find that realistic with the kind of relationship he and Nebula had througout the story. Thank you dear author for giving such an awesome book! 😍😊
Smile
2020-10-12 12:06:34 +0000 UTCThank you for getting him back, I am just glad (tottaly fictional character I know, I know 🙄😝) he is alive and well and will be happy. Will you write a bit more about Nabula and how she end up with Jaxxon, she so needs some loving ❤️❤️❤️
Maja Birks
2020-10-12 11:59:55 +0000 UTCWOW😮 even in the SCI-FI genre a black women becomes a single mother and goes through those kind of struggles😂😂
Teeo
2020-10-12 11:43:32 +0000 UTCAt the end of the last post I’m just “No! Not Ak! Un-break my heaaaaaaart! “🎶 The emotions, man. The emotions. I’m so glad that he’s alive, but heartbroken still. Those two went through SO much together, and it really was lack of communication in the end. Not verbally forgiving him, not telling anyone of the illness or how lonely he was without Nebula...Ak was the one for her, if he wasn’t such a shithead in the beginning... Nebula has gone through enough BS now! I know she’s got Neil, but I’m selfish and wanted Ak’s zombie to return to her. How hard would that be to see him with another woman, happy..and alive? 😔😱 It was still beautifully written and I loved it, even the VERY bittersweet ending! ❤️At least he was forgiven.
RainbowRenee
2020-10-12 11:38:32 +0000 UTCThis ending just seems wrong to me :( I really rooted for them because with each chapter they were making small steps to each other... I am just sad from this.
Iva
2020-10-12 11:38:19 +0000 UTCYou really gotta give us a new part of Ak
Libertad Silva
2020-10-12 11:38:17 +0000 UTCReally really disappointed with the ending 💔 I shipped them to the moon and back 🙁 I’ll just pretend Ak woke up and made it work with Nebula because this is THEIR story. I’ve been following this story expecting them to get together because it’s His Breeder. Love your work but I can’t accept the ending
Hser Hsa
2020-10-12 11:28:20 +0000 UTC😍socks
Ancientt
2020-10-12 11:02:30 +0000 UTCOMG...we love to see it
Mary Adesanya
2020-10-12 11:01:58 +0000 UTCI liked that transition from nebulas pages to Ak being like bOys?? Good job Elaine. Sending my virtual hugs + socks to you
Kat
2020-10-12 10:58:05 +0000 UTCI think she will and i hope she does
S.O.J
2020-10-12 10:57:31 +0000 UTCMaybe 😭
Ancientt
2020-10-12 10:57:26 +0000 UTCScifiiiiii
Ancientt
2020-10-12 10:57:12 +0000 UTCYup I agree it was rushed. Ive been guilty of this before. Will edit in the future!
Ancientt
2020-10-12 10:56:46 +0000 UTCThat is the problem. It is rushed and sloppy. It could've been better love story than Vrox and Kira, because he loved Nebula completely for what she was.
Violeta Pesic
2020-10-12 10:55:11 +0000 UTC@Ancientt can u pls throw in a bonus chapter about Jaxxon loving up Nebula and Niel cos Lord knows she needs it after all the shit she has been thru
S.O.J
2020-10-12 10:55:05 +0000 UTCAk was in coma for 4 years? What?
Mary Adesanya
2020-10-12 10:54:25 +0000 UTCI wonder if Nebula will ever show Ak his journal or tell him of their past. Maybe she keeps it from him bc she doesn’t want to cause him more grief 😭
Cremebrumay
2020-10-12 10:53:35 +0000 UTCI’m really happy Ak is alive and well. I’m sad we didn’t get a longer story with these two even if they didn’t end up together. I think Ak and Nebula are such an interesting Dynamic/People. It would be interesting to see them fall in love traditionally even if it’s not with each other 🥺
Cremebrumay
2020-10-12 10:52:39 +0000 UTCWe all need some joy berries right now
Ancientt
2020-10-12 10:52:16 +0000 UTCSending you a virtual hug and some joy berries
Ancientt
2020-10-12 10:52:02 +0000 UTC❤❤❤ after 10 stories, I needed to add something more gut wretching. The good news is that I don't plan on doing this again anytime soon
Ancientt
2020-10-12 10:51:33 +0000 UTCJaxxon will fight you for this. Niel is his, and nobody will tell him otherwise 😂
Ancientt
2020-10-12 10:49:26 +0000 UTCI still cried damn it
Melissa turner
2020-10-12 10:49:21 +0000 UTCWhat the heck just happened. I am lost😱😱😱
Argyro Eleftheriou
2020-10-12 10:49:03 +0000 UTCOmg didn't see that coming at all. I mean i've been miserable all day thinking he was dead but thank god he is alive. I am so happy they find love even though they don't end up together. They deserve it after the hell they've been through. Incredible. Thank u.
Andrea Lambrou
2020-10-12 10:48:02 +0000 UTCNo I lied, I want them together 😭😭 he called her hair beautiful clouds, CLOUDS 🥺
_kingnana
2020-10-12 10:47:24 +0000 UTCOk, so you made him a really bad guy first, than you made us all like him, than you could't manage to erase the bad stuff, so you killed him. Than you resurected him, but he and Nebula still do not get to be together. I am sorry but I hate it. For example, I read your books because they have happy ending with the characters we all fall in love with, not some unknown Jaxxon.
Violeta Pesic
2020-10-12 10:46:21 +0000 UTCSecond that!
Venessa Lobo
2020-10-12 10:46:01 +0000 UTCI’m gonna pretend nebula made it back to earth or something. This black queen👸🏾 deserved a king. 😫 Even in an epic sci fi fantasy on another planet she was unappreciated by the men and ended up a single mother. ☹️ Yeah... nebula somehow made it back to earth and married Prince Harry. that’s how it ended in my head and Nobody can tell me any different 😂😂 Elaine you’ve ruined me. I’m crying 😢 But you write so beautifully. Can’t wait for first flame and your future books.
Vintage Hummingbird
2020-10-12 10:43:24 +0000 UTCS.O.J
2020-10-12 10:42:16 +0000 UTCYh... no ❤.... it didn't make sense to me
Jo-anna Mc Dowald
2020-10-12 10:41:03 +0000 UTCHercu aint shit
Ancientt
2020-10-12 10:37:30 +0000 UTCOmg. I wasn’t gonna read it. Didn’t expect a notification. Wait so nebula is the only single mum. 😒 no. Even on ezron a female deprived planet she somehow had this outcome? It wasn’t a happy ending. Just... an ending. I feel like crying. 🥺🥺🥺
Vintage Hummingbird
2020-10-12 10:36:47 +0000 UTCBittersweetness alright, my romantic heart wanted them to end up together in the end! 💔😭 but I guess a living Akdronis - who isn’t with Nebula, is still better than a dead Akdronis - who isn’t with Nebula 😭😭😭
_kingnana
2020-10-12 10:35:50 +0000 UTCI know it’s your story to tell, I just can’t help what I’m feeling with your books because I’ve loved them since day 1 it was all happy, I’m just disappointed because I shouldn’t have expected my own plot in my head and now I feel betrayed 😂
Patricia Kate Mackay
2020-10-12 10:35:48 +0000 UTCA heart attack is good here and there 🙂
Ancientt
2020-10-12 10:35:38 +0000 UTCMy day is better btw.
Venessa Lobo
2020-10-12 10:34:51 +0000 UTCI’m just glad they ended up happy 💕
Sponge Noodle
2020-10-12 10:33:13 +0000 UTCOmgg... at least he didn’t die
Kat
2020-10-12 10:31:56 +0000 UTCbittersweetness. They were all happy
Ancientt
2020-10-12 10:30:10 +0000 UTCOmygod stop notifying I couldn’t help it I read the ending. Now Ak didn’t end up with Nebula
Patricia Kate Mackay
2020-10-12 10:26:24 +0000 UTC
