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Gurl what you mad at Jaxon for cuz he know more abt rocks on his planet than you???
Alexis Young
2024-11-23 18:40:21 +0000 UTCI am living for Jaxxon and Nebula π I think they will be great together. Now back to the whole Ak situation....honestly I donβt think he should have returned from his βcomaβ. His death was bitter and brought lots of tears, but it ended his story well. Him coming back with no memory and finding another girl...just a bit messy when he eventually comes back. Nebula is healing in her own ways. Honestly another brother could have returned to their camp and found the girl π€·π»ββοΈ but itβs your story and we will follow along βΊοΈ
purplishsunflower
2021-01-21 14:18:08 +0000 UTCI like her as a stand alone story with jaxxson already know her history....
Ree1209
2020-10-15 05:21:26 +0000 UTCOk this needs to be part of His Breeder! That way itβs Nebula growing past Ak and then I feel like the title would also make more sense as well!
Sarah
2020-10-14 17:24:40 +0000 UTCLove Jak...he calls Neil his grain n neb is pebble I'm loving it omg
letitia sneed
2020-10-14 16:03:37 +0000 UTCLove this...when is the next update
Ree1209
2020-10-14 15:29:02 +0000 UTCWow his transformation took so long.
Supreet
2020-10-14 05:43:04 +0000 UTCTrue and that's the point I think we have been missing yes the story does feel a little rushed however being with someone who tired to rape you no I think that goes against everything g that is ethical.....however the only thing I will say that she wanted to tell Ak that she has forgiven him and she was unable to do so...so I guess that us what hurt her the most there was no closure for her
jeniene
2020-10-14 03:16:18 +0000 UTCA lot of us were upset with the ending of his breeder but so far this has made up for that I'm really enjoying what I have read so far it might be short but everything is coming together nicely
jeniene
2020-10-14 03:11:54 +0000 UTCLikewise really love this
jeniene
2020-10-14 03:09:50 +0000 UTCOk. OK. OKKAAYYYYY. I was so upset I couldnβt comment with the whole AK thing BUT GOODNESS. GOOOD FUCKING NESS. JAXXX CAN FUUCKKINN GET IT. I love this. I looooove it.
Danie L.
2020-10-14 02:48:50 +0000 UTC- He chuckledβ fucking chuckled. His hand lifted to stroke her bottom lip, and he leaned in to whisper, βthese are pink. They remind me of amethyst. I wonder how they would look wrapped around my length. Please keep talking and give me a reason to find out.β - That was hot π₯΅π¦
Violet
2020-10-14 02:38:43 +0000 UTCSame lol
S.O.J
2020-10-14 02:06:11 +0000 UTCI hope there is more coming!!
Madison Gladney
2020-10-14 01:07:20 +0000 UTCLove this β€οΈ
Tegan
2020-10-14 00:01:36 +0000 UTCI love her with Jaxxon π
Quiana Meggs
2020-10-13 23:37:31 +0000 UTCI LOVE π THIS
Ree1209
2020-10-13 23:01:16 +0000 UTCI read this story 5 times π€¦πΎββοΈπ€¦πΎββοΈI'm obsessed lol
Shelley Brown
2020-10-13 22:23:44 +0000 UTCHe was burried for years until waking up. He crawled out about 4 months ago
Ancientt
2020-10-13 20:37:16 +0000 UTCShe talks about Ak crawling out of his grave in His Breeder- AND BEYOND. she also mentions writing a 3 part series for him
Chy
2020-10-13 20:36:12 +0000 UTCNow let's talk abt Jaxxon. Lord Jesus, that guy is hot af. When he said what he said about her lips and his dingaling, my heart skipped a beat. I had to put my phone down, close my eyes an take deep breaths lol. He is so intense and I love that he knows what he wants (Nebula and Niel) and he is not afraid to go after them. He is also funny, a tease, and Niel likes him, which is an added bonus I hope we get to see more them together. Also, i hope Ak gets a short story too. Now as for Brent and Janice, fuck both of them. I hope they get their karma.
S.O.J
2020-10-13 18:26:49 +0000 UTCWow, this is amazing. I actually like that Nebula didn't end up with Ak. As much as he has changed for the better, a relationship between them wouldn't be ideal. I think if they got together he would constantly be walking on eggshells around her not bcos Nebula demands it but bcos he feels bad for what he did and is trying to make it up to her. He won't really feel like he has the right to be mad at her if she does something wrong. Also, imagine them trying to be a little rough in the bedroom and she gets flashbacks to the attempted rape. That would just make him feel guilty again for what he did and Nebula feel guilty for having the flashback. I personally wouldn't want a relationship like that. Another thing is even if they got back together after he lost his memory, he will eventually find out what he did and might even break up with her because of the guilt.
S.O.J
2020-10-13 18:16:50 +0000 UTCBy the way is it too much to ask for a picture of dear Jaxxon, pretty please ? ππ₯°
Argyro Eleftheriou
2020-10-13 17:44:10 +0000 UTCI have no words. This was just beautiful. A thousand thank you Elaine. With everything that happens in my country right now this feels like sunshine in a storm. Your stories are so appealing and help me escape my difficulties. Trully your work deserve to be published.
Argyro Eleftheriou
2020-10-13 17:40:25 +0000 UTCI love the nicknames! Everytime he refers to Neil as Grains it makes me smile! π
Kiarah Johansen
2020-10-13 15:38:31 +0000 UTCI'm so happy Nebula gets a happy endingπβ€οΈ Can we get more of Jaxxon and Nebula?? I loved this!!
Luz C
2020-10-13 15:23:34 +0000 UTCSo when everyone thought AK's grave was unsettled by nature it was actually him crawling out?? If that is so then how long was he buried forπ€π€ And would AK get his own story like Nubula?? Please say yesππ Would love to read about him crawling out and meeting a Terran and having his own happily ever after.
Supreet
2020-10-13 15:11:51 +0000 UTCThis is really nice. Thanku for writing this.. Just wanted to check, will there be more chapters in this?
Spriha
2020-10-13 15:11:31 +0000 UTCman! i cant even.. im sooo happy Nebula has this story, she sooo deserve a happy ending, so thus Akdronis.. maybe not together, but still π₯°... thank you Elaine π
Eronheart
2020-10-13 14:37:16 +0000 UTCOmg I love Jaxxon
Alex Robson
2020-10-13 14:31:01 +0000 UTCIt's midnight here and I haven't prepared for my tomorrow's classes. It's all because of you π π
Gladz Kojongian-Ratuliu
2020-10-13 14:30:05 +0000 UTCI'm on vacation and cannot put my phone down. This. Elaine, have I told you lately how much I love you, and how talented you are? Girl. I. Needed. This.
ALICIA HEIGHTCHEW
2020-10-13 14:21:58 +0000 UTCOmg definitely need more of this, so amazing. Might even say my favourite part of the ezronian stories so far.
Katrina
2020-10-13 14:17:56 +0000 UTCI am glad Nebula gets a happy ending.
Sharon
2020-10-13 14:01:51 +0000 UTCπ€―π€―π€― this story is π₯π₯π₯ can't wait for another update, I love Jaxx seems like he is a great fit for Nebula... @ancientt you have done it again you never cease to amaze me... thanks for all the wonderful storiesπβ€πβ€π
Shelley Brown
2020-10-13 14:00:23 +0000 UTCThanks for this! I know you are super busy but I appreciate that you were open to comments about it being rushed and came out with this. You are super talented! π₯°
Erin Krakow
2020-10-13 13:58:53 +0000 UTCIβm loving this Iβm really loving Jaxxon hope to see more of their story
Quayshanna Blount
2020-10-13 13:55:58 +0000 UTCTotally loved itβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ Waiting for more ππ
Supreet
2020-10-13 13:41:38 +0000 UTCI absolutely love this β€β€β€β€
Ashalee Mclean
2020-10-13 13:38:05 +0000 UTCI am actually placing myself in Nebula's shoes. I would never be able to get over and fall in love with a guy who attempted abusing me. Its just out of question. This is ending is so against stereotypes we read, thank you Elaine !β€
Venessa Lobo
2020-10-13 13:19:52 +0000 UTCI am able to read it. Try logging out and back in to your account.
S.O.J
2020-10-13 13:04:52 +0000 UTCHey guys, just wondering if anyone else is having trouble viewing these chapters? I canβt seem to see anything when I click on this story. Thanks π
Kylie Gray
2020-10-13 13:02:24 +0000 UTCI can breathe now. That was beautifully written, given us some closure from the grief. Thank you so much for sharing this! The Ak and Neb story was so well written and built with so much suspense that it was a complete shocker to end it so quickly. It just made the loss of them not being together worse, I think. BUT this was great! I almost feel, and this is just my opinion, that His Breeder could be merged with the First Her as far as story and then give Neb and Jax a short story after (Like this). It just seems like Soooooo much work for you to write! Youβre spoiling us with the amazing stories like Neil getting spoiled by Nebu-love! β€οΈβ€οΈπΆ Jaxxon ...has ALL the game...fanning myself over here. Heβs like a naughty Vrox, talking dirty like that...π₯ And now I NEED vengeance against Brent for Sarah. Iβm willing to bet she can grab ANY 7ft adonis and still be happy and part of the group. Janice just digging her hole.. at least Nebula told him off!
RainbowRenee
2020-10-13 12:52:44 +0000 UTCDamn new favorite. Of course Vrox is always #1
Elizabeth
2020-10-13 12:48:28 +0000 UTCAnd Janice. Fuck Janice.
Mita
2020-10-13 12:25:12 +0000 UTCOkay I can deal. I can breathe now thank Jesus. Now I have a surge of hate towards Brent
Mita
2020-10-13 12:16:21 +0000 UTCFabulous as always
Charisse Anderson
2020-10-13 11:43:56 +0000 UTCAm I the only one wanting Sarahβs story now too? I want Brent and Janice to suffer. βΊοΈ
Rowna
2020-10-13 11:43:52 +0000 UTCππΌππΌππΌππΌ
Charisse Anderson
2020-10-13 11:43:47 +0000 UTCOh Jaxxon, heβs so intense! π
Debbie T.
2020-10-13 11:13:53 +0000 UTCOmg I absolutely love this πππ
Mahtika Daniell
2020-10-13 11:05:37 +0000 UTCPleaseeeee write more on them... I love jaxxon
Johnnie Renae LB
2020-10-13 10:56:48 +0000 UTCI like him π₯Ί
Cremebrumay
2020-10-13 10:54:12 +0000 UTCI love this! It is so realistically relatable.
Venessa Lobo
2020-10-13 10:50:18 +0000 UTCIncredible. Will we get to read more?
Andrea Lambrou
2020-10-13 10:49:35 +0000 UTCOh I really like this
Sarah Wignall
2020-10-13 10:46:59 +0000 UTCthere are more parts to this right?
sukanya saha
2020-10-13 10:28:53 +0000 UTCI hope we get more of nebula's story soon
sukanya saha
2020-10-13 10:28:33 +0000 UTCI personally LOVED it
Ree
2020-10-13 10:25:28 +0000 UTC...I weirdly dont hate it? Like I actually dont mind and want to know more? Jaxx said 2 years? Interesting, Interesting. He is definitely...very intense. Will prob make for some steamy scenes later
Sofs Mi
2020-10-13 10:08:45 +0000 UTCI like Jaxx
Refilwe Nkwe
2020-10-13 10:03:28 +0000 UTCjaxxon would kill me
Ancientt
2020-10-13 10:02:22 +0000 UTCLoving thisπ..
Shuba
2020-10-13 10:00:37 +0000 UTCSad to say Jaxx is growing on me... loved it β€
Jo-anna Mc Dowald
2020-10-13 09:54:03 +0000 UTCThis is so much better! The last book ended so abruptly that we never saw Nebula's character development
Sasha Johnson
2020-10-13 09:42:49 +0000 UTCI feel so much better. Farting to get closure. I will feel happiest when I read Akβs story and follow his journey towards healing and happiness
Cynthia Dao
2020-10-13 09:39:09 +0000 UTCStill Hurting.. but surviving ππ... can i hope for ur erotic one shot.. maybe in an alternative universe for ak & nebula... ππ
travelinthefazlane
2020-10-13 09:33:07 +0000 UTC
