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The First Flame part 15

After assuring a thousand times to her sisters and mother that she was fine, Ran got to shower and rest. Oddly, she hadn’t seen much of her twin, so she went searching for her.

Ran ignored the guards that followed. Neither her nor her sisters could escape the watch system Vrox placed on them.

“Do you need something, Princess?”

She bit her tongue to hold herself from replying, “it’s Ran, not Princess.” She almost confused this Ezronian with Eon. She missed him that much.

“No, thanks.”

She walked to Terra’s bedroom, which was only a few doors down. After a quick knock, she waited for the other princess to open.

“Ran?”

“Uh, yeah. Did you not miss me?”

Terra sighed. “Of course I did. Come in.” She opened the door wide.

Ran sat on her bed and examined her room. It was messier than usual.

“Mom was really worried.”

Ran shrugged. “Now she’s really pissed, curtesy of dad.”

“Yeah.” Terra sat next to her and stared at a wall.

“So? What’s with you? Are you on your period or something?”

Terra winced. “No. I… you can’t tell anyone, okay?”

Ran raised an eyebrow. “What did you do, woman? I don’t think mom can handle any more drama.”

“I…”

Ran tossed an arm over her shoulders. “Relax. You’ll be fine. I’m usually the troublemaker and I’ve been fine until now, so nothing you say will–

“I’m pregnant.”

Ran choked on her own spit. She coughed so violently that a cringing Terra had to pat her back.

“What? How? I mean, you’ve never really shown interest in… oh, shit. Does mom know?”

“No, she doesn’t. This is bad, isn’t it?” Terra wrung her hands with a devastated look on her face.

“No. No, it’s not bad.” Ran grabbed her hands and squeezed. “This is great! You’ll do just fine. I was just surprised. I mean… who’s the daddy?”

Terra burst into tears. “Dad’s going to kill me!”

Ran hugged her. “No, he’s not. He might kill your baby daddy, but not you. Come on, stop crying. This is good news! You’ve started the second generation post-Vanishing.” Ran kissed the top of her head. “I’m so happy for you.”

“It was a one-night stand. Last month, at the festival. We just… clicked, and, I mean…” She trembled with sobs. “This is too much.”

“Relax. Who is he?”

“Um… the better question is what is he.”

“Uh, an Ezronian hybrid male? Unless you somehow found a way to get knocked up by a girl.”

“No, Ran. He’s not a hybrid. He’s a full-fledged Ezronian.”

Ran scratched her hair. All full-fledged Ezronians, the ones that weren’t hybrid products of Terrans and Ezronians combining, were older men. Her father and uncles, for instance, were in their forties.

“You lost me. You slept with an older dude?”

Oh, yeah, Vrox would definitely kill the baby’s father. He would see this as some sort of pedophile violation. Terra was twenty, and he would’ve wanted her to settle with someone around her age.

“He’s sixteen years older. He was months old when the Vanishing happened. I saw him, and he was hot and mysterious, so we snuck out and… I’m so dumb!”

“Oh, that’s not too bad,” Ran said. “At least he’s not fifty. Relax, girl.”

“Dad will hate him,” Terra cried.

“Dad will hate every dude that fucks his daughters. Look at what he did to Eon, and he only got to kiss me.”

“I’m such an asshole,” Terra said, wiping her tears. “You’re going through something worse and I’m here crying.”

“I’m going to be fine too.”

It didn’t matter whether she has to slave away to The Federation to get the fuel to fly to Earth. She would do it, because there was no way she wouldn’t abandon Eon.

The sisters hugged in silence. Ran spent the new two days by Terra and her other sister’s side, who also received the news. Although they were twins, they didn’t prefer each other over the rest of their sisters.

They all swore to keep Terra’s secret and did their best to distract Ran. It wasn’t really helping. Ran remained on edge, worried about Eon.

The word of Eon’s banishment spread through The Ruins fast, and men were more jumpy around Vrox than usual. Ran noticed that they were making an extra effort to avoid eye-contact with her, as if afraid that Vrox would maul them.

Ran’s irritation boiled over when she found Akane, the only human woman that could never have kids, gossiping.

“I mean, one of them is a rapist, and the other is a dictator that abandons his own people. That family is…”

“You mean the so-called rapist you fought Lizza over?”

Akane turned, her eyes widening. The Ezronian male she had been talking with scrambled.

Ran reached for her necklace to untie it and pushed her hair into a bun. She was ready to take the busybody bitch down.

“Down, Ran.” Kira and Lizza, Ak’s wife, showed up and held her back.

Ran lashed out. “Not so tough now, bitch? Come on. You want to trash-talk my dad and uncle?”

Kira and Lizza dragged her away, although they needed help from Neil.

“Akane is just hurting,” Lizza tried to reason.

“She’s been hurting for twenty years because she couldn’t have kids? That might have excused her first year of bitchiness, but she’s tested her luck for too long.”

Neil elbowed her and gestured toward Kira, who was rubbing her temples and looking stressed.

Ran forced a “Sorry,” through her teeth. “I lost my temper.”

Kira’s shoulders relaxed. “It’s alright, honey. Just get some rest.”

Ran wanted to give her the same advice. Apparently, she hadn’t so much as looked at Vrox in days.

“I’ll make sure she behaves,” Niel offered. “You guys can go.”

“Thanks baby.” Kira kissed Neil’s cheek, and then Ran’s. She left with Lizza on her heels.

Ran sat on the ground and crossed her legs like a child.

“Stop pouting,” Neil said, sitting next to her.

“I feel like a caged animal. I want to get out of here, to go look for him.”

“Then go.”

“Are you serious? I’ve got two guards tailing me at all times. Dad won’t let me leave this place.”

Neil sighed. “Why didn’t you fall for someone that’s not your kidnapper? Why did it have to be this dude?”

Ran stared at Neil and then grinned. “I think I found out how to get out of here and check out the warship.”

“How? By poisoning Vrox?”

“No. You and I are going on a date.”

“Excuse me?”

Ran tossed an arm over his shoulders. “You heard me. We’re ‘dating’ now. Dad will love the sound of this, and will let me go out with you.”

“We’ll be pretending, right? Because… you’re like a sister to me.”

“Yes, pretending. Another hybrid already snatched me up.”


There will be 1 more update this week!

The First Flame part 15

Comments

I’m late to the party but so glad I found you! I love your stories… diversity and all. Rep for women of color who came for the smut but stayed for the depths of your artistry!😘😘😘

DCC

I love your diversity it makes sense to be that way. All people can relate to the characters and it's about time someone writes for people and not just one culture. Your doing a great job keep it up. I am afro-american and my family is big I have half white nieces and nephews half Japanese cousins and of course native Americans and we embrace each other no matter what outsiders say . We all of different skin tone and we still love each other as a family. F*** what the ignorance say.

Fran Brown

Do we have an update today ? It's cool if we don't tho ♥️

Lia

Omg I never thought of that

Shelley Brown

I couldn’t have said it better!!! I’m black, white & Indian, I have 2 aunts & 1 uncle that are half black & half Puerto Rican (and they speak fluent Spanish) & an aunt that’s half black & half Vietnamese & my husband has a son that’s half German ( so my husband speaks pretty good German ). So, needless to say, family functions are very entertaining and interesting. I LOVE that your books are diverse because so is the world & a book with no diversity is unrealistic so, THANK YOU FOR BEING YOU!!!

Quiana Meggs

Who was the previous crown prince ? I forgot HAHAH but could he have been Terra’s baby daddy?? cause she said he was mysterious and all that EEEEEKWNISNWISIW

Faith Dominguez

And that's why I love books like yours.

Lia

I always thought Kira was Indian or south asian but honestly middle Eastern is fine too. I'm getting tired of this whole trope with a seemingly normal girl with mousey brown hair who finds her beauty through the handsome badboy. The portrayal isn't fair for either party. Wish the high school star wasn't a brooding dark haired guy with blue eyes and that the girl wasn't always portrayed to be wearing the same flannel, and tee shirt combo to show off how "ordinary" and "relatable" she is. Mousey haired girls also deserve better!!

Lia

So I didn’t know that Kira is middle eastern and honestly that made me love your books even more. Representation does matter and I don’t encounter my race in books very often and it makes me very happy when I do

Sara

When I read books or stories I always imagine the characters the way I want with a little help from the writter :) I always though that zena and her man is white. But the truth I found out today in your rant didn't change my liking of that story :) I'm thinking that maybe it's time to read it again

Puikute

I agree

Shelley Brown

That means if Terra is 25 then her baby daddy is 41! 🤖

Ritupon Hira

Aww and I some how think poor Neil was trying to say he liked her and had to make something up like she was a sister to make it not weird 🤔

Sarah Wignall

And Neil to the rescue, yasssss this is Ezronian mission impossible.... let's get EON back

Ree1209

First of all, how boring would that be to read. Keep doing you boo! As someone already said ths knives are out and we'll be ready! 💞

Ree1209

Amen Sista!

Ree1209

Yass Queen!!! 👑❤️❤️ 🙌🏾🙌🏾

Riquca Reynolds

I like characters that are different races.

Sharon

Why does it matter what color you are when writing stories? The world is diversified. I enjoy your writing.

Sharon

I loved this update!!!! #TeamRan&NeilRescueRangers Also... YOU RANT AWAY! Some people haven’t experienced enough diversity, or hold racial resentment, to understand it’s healthy and positive! I’m casper white, red/blonde & green eyes... grew up in LA county California. Classrooms are like Fruity Pebbles cereal, with so many different ethnic backgrounds. Thats where I’m most comfortable. I’ve had my share growing up of people hating me because I’m white but that’s them holding their race hostage....besides, they are PAYING you to read YOUR stories. Your RIDICULOUSLY AMAZING AWESOME stories. Let that shit roll off you, because ignorance comes in all colors... Anyway! No reason to tolerate that, be the queen you are and hit “DELETE” 😂 *The rest of us are behind you with our knives out, ready as backup like the sluts we are.* “Stay back SLUT!” 😂

RainbowRenee

Oh Vrox is gonna have a major nervous breakdown if he finds out about Terra as well. I can just imagine his reaction....😂😂😂 now i know that people pay to read ur stories but it still doesn’t give them the right to be rude and insult u. I mean u work extra hard to please us all and of course there are gonna be those people who will just judge u no matter what. So who cares, they can just unsubscribe and be miserable and u can just go on and do ur magic and please the rest of us who just love ur stories. I think u r always fair and very considerate of ur readers. ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Andrea Lambrou

Noice

Kat

Ancientt

I’ve always loved your diversity and body positivity. Not that you ever have to listen to me, but would you be interested - or is it a thought - to include a Latin American lead in the future? I’m Puerto Rican and (although I’m hella whitewashed) I’m so proud of any Latinx heritage represented in stories or movies, etc. I love you and all your work 💙

Karina

I will patiently wait for a terra story.... whenever your ready lol I’ll be here. I love all the stories

Alexandra

That's not what I was saying. I was saying they felt that way but was paying to read your book. It just dont make sense why would you continue to pay for something if you didnt like it.

L.M .S

The thing is that money does not mean they are excused from being outrageous. I canceled their subscription and refunded them. Im not going to sit there and be told to write whiter characters, no matter what they pay

Ancientt

Let her blow some steam off, (because her male characters all HOT af), and added the "racial issue" let's just say she'll combust soon 😂😂😂 chill Elaine, we love you and your story 😘

Gladz Kojongian-Ratuliu

Lol well for the AN if they are on this app at least they are still paying you to read your story. That's the positive. Other than that let it roll off your back. I wouldnt have even addressed it.

L.M .S

Boricua? 👀

Danielle

On a positive note. Oh little Neil Neil all grown up!!!! 😍😍❤️ I hope that Terra and her baby daddy end up together!! 🖕🏾 Vox! I knew he wasn’t shit when he did that shit to Kira (i forgot and will prob reread🤣) You said give him a chance ppl make mistakes, rrighhtt I saw this shit coming a mile away and I stand on it 🖕🏾🖕🏾 Vox. His fine ass ain’t Shit! 🤣🤣🤣 😹 But I will lowkey be his mistress. But still 🖕🏾🖕🏾 him, this a love and hate relationship we so dont judge me!! 😭❤️❤️

Riquca Reynolds

So to address the ‘AN’😤😤. That person is an idiot, a dumbass, and a bitch. There I said it take offense IDGAF! Because first off how dare you tell an author who they can’t write about! That is THEIR choice not yours. That is insulting to the author and also their creativeness. Like Wtf, if you don’t like oh freaking well read Something else Elaine has like a million other readers👋🏾. I can’t believe someone actually said that!!! 🤬😡 Like I’m hot right now.

Riquca Reynolds

I truly appreciate the diversity of your characters. Those who want to talk crap or complain about the choices of race for your characters is missing the amazing stories you’re writing. They’re too busy knit-picking and they do not understand the hope this type of writing gives. People will always have something to complain about and I am so happy you write with such an expanded racial background in each character. Thank you.

Cassandra

No pressure just excited for the future novels haha

Shane Reyes

Omg i also think of terson ahahah for terra

Shane Reyes

Thank you for the AN, I love your diverse stories, everybody has an opinion, Elaine's writing is great no matter her ethnicity,👩👩🏾👩🏼👩🏻👩👩🏿 just love everyone, I do. Omg I wonder who is the father🤔🤔 I wonder what Vrox is going to do... I can't wait ❤💜❤💜

Shelley Brown

Elaine, I honestly do NOT understand this whole gatekeeping thing with race. I'm sorry, like whaat. "Only a person of a specific race can write about that race," what the heck!?? Honestly, till this very day I have never cared for what your identity is. Race has never been a focal point of any of your characters, it's a trait not their entire personality and anyone who can't get past that and see your characters and books for what they are have issues of their own to sort out.

Lia

ooh shit now

shaniqua johnson

I can already hear someone typing "WRITE TERRA A STORY" Let me stop you right there!!! Nooo I've got too much shit to write already 😭

Ancientt

Ooo is Terra's mysterious lover Terson? 💋 Would be great! I mean he was scared she'll be scared by his scar and stuff

Venessa Lobo


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