Rider King part 11
Added 2021-03-20 04:57:59 +0000 UTCThis chapter might be triggering, so please read with caution.
My hands hurt from how hard I’m gripping Treysa’s scaled back. I’m barely hanging onto her, but I don’t want to stop; Not until I’m far away from Dramon’s lands.
I’m going to the capital to annul my marriage. King Centres will just have to understand that my days as a Rider Queen are over. I’m better off as a drifter. There’s no place for me in the human settlements. I can’t live in one place for months because it would drive me insane.
I stop to give Treysa a break. We rest on a sandy spot, and I watch the infamous clouds of Rehyr wreak havoc in the distance. The clouds constantly change. They’ll produce rain, snow, hail under minutes in a manic cycle. The plants below it adapted to change with the same speed, so they’ll be flowers one second and poisonous the next.
Every Rider knows to avoid those clouds, but I can’t seem to look away from them.
I fall asleep beside my trusted friend. She wraps her body around me, more protective than usual, and huffs with fatigue.
I make sure she’s fed and hydrated, although I’m not hungry myself. We rest for four hours, and then we’re back on the move. I notice that my limp is more enhanced. I’ve abused my strength.
As we ride through the breath of morning, the clouds are still chaotic in the distance. Although the rain is far away, my heart is drenched. I’m sad. I miss the sounds of chatter and clattering as I led my Clan around the planet. I miss planning for my people. I miss the battles that ensued whenever we came across enemies.
If I hadn’t fallen, I would still have all of that. If I had defeated the man that challenged me for my title, I would still be someone. But I lost. After five years of glory, he sliced me down and took my Clan and knee with him. I celebrate him for being a better warrior, but I hate him for reducing me to nothing.
I find myself stopping Treysa. I can’t breathe.
A powerful sob makes me lower my head, and soon, I’m trembling and wailing in the middle of nowhere. The sun is above me, lighting the world for me and a million other creatures, but I’ve never felt more alone.
I’m no leader. No wife. No mother. No woman. I’m barely human with this useless body.
Treysa purrs to try and comfort me, and I hug her tight until her scales break my nails.
“It’s just you and I, old girl.”
We ride for two days. I hunt small animals, but barely have an appetite. Whenever I stop to let Treysa rest, she nudges my thigh and tries to get me to play with her. I don’t have the energy, so I pet the war beast. Although she tries to seem ferocious, but she’s really a softie.
She can tell that I don’t feel well today. A fever has broken out, and my stomach is cramping. I can barely ride Treysa without sliding off her back. I must have eaten something bad— or maybe not since I’ve barely had an appetite.
When I double over in pain, I stop Treysa. I close my eyes and breathe my pain through my chapped lips. The hot air catches fire, and now I’m screaming. There’s lava, thunder, and poison in my abdomen. The pain is so consuming that I forget who I am and where I’m at. I can’t see or think straight. All there is, is pain.
When something warm trickles out of me, I look down. A dark liquid covers Treysa’s scales. I touch it and lift my hand.
Death trickles down my fingerprints, down my palm, down my forearm, until my arm is bloody. I’m bleeding. I’m spilling life out of me.
I scream for a different reason now, and my song is heard across all of Xelor. Can he hear me? Can Dramon hear how he has cracked my soul and life is whistling out of it?
Physical pain braids with my emotional one, and I black out. When I regain a fraction of consciousness, I find Treysa dragging me across the lands.
“Go,” I whisper to her.
There’s no saving me. I’ll die with my child.
— —
Two days ago: Dramon POV
Dinner ends, and I rise to my feet. My stomach is full, but my shoulders feel the heaviest. I am tired.
I stand tall for the Clan as I walk through them in search of my tent. I can already tell it’s empty. No light comes from it.
I’m proven right when I enter and find my wife missing. Did she go get dinner after all? I lay down and wait for her. After a few hours, I realize that she’s not coming back. She must still be angry with me.
I rise and look for her. She’s not with Treysa. I can tell because the beast is missing too. She’s not eating with the camp, either. Maybe she’s with Jema. The two females are good friends, and Jema is a great advisor since she used to be a Rider Queen herself.
“Jema?” I call from outside of the elder’s tent.
She peeks out, and I can immediately tell something is wrong. Her expression is cold.
“Have you seen Venus? Where is she?”
Jema crosses her arms over her chest and says nothing.
“Jema…”
“I will not speak.”
Dread pools inside me when I realize what has happened. Venus left.
“Where did she go?” I boom, surprising myself when I take a step forward.
“I will not tell you. Us Rider Queens must stick together.”
I’ve heard enough.
“I’m riding out!” I roar to the camp as I jog to my beast. It’s the dead of night. She must have covered a lot of ground by now, but I’ll find her.
I don’t have time to pack. I only swing on top of my beast and shoot into the sky.
“Venus!” I shout, fighting the winds.
I don’t hear her or see her, but I know that I’ll be feeling her in my arms if it’s the last thing I do.
a/n: Treysa is a real one for dragging her unconscious body away. Who will come to Venus' help?
Alpha Adrian updates again this week
Comments
Ohh now you want to feel her in your arms. Seriously man you made your choice.
Patricia Hughes
2022-05-05 20:00:33 +0000 UTChow dare you look for her? after choosing salina over her????
Dianne Loraine
2022-03-05 11:57:32 +0000 UTCWill he repent on his actions and how the clan spoke behind her back? There's no point in trying to get her back if he doesn't realize his ex lover and clan played a part. I hope she's able to annul the marriage though.
BT21
2021-03-22 18:54:03 +0000 UTCThis has me hooked
Lia
2021-03-22 12:17:09 +0000 UTCNow he cares when she’s left was it so hard to be this concerned when she was there but ovi struggling
Laura
2021-03-21 21:53:23 +0000 UTCI hope he doesn’t find her... I want to see how she’ll survive and get stronger before she comes back
lishiya
2021-03-21 21:49:03 +0000 UTCThat was my first thought
Stepho
2021-03-21 20:13:22 +0000 UTC💯
RainbowRenee
2021-03-21 18:13:55 +0000 UTCSame. I felt the seed didn’t bloom because she’s human. Also that she might be miscarrying because of high stress/ lack of food. ☹️ She COULD still be pregnant, but I honestly think this is good for the story too. She’s experiencing a miscarriage from the stress from being shunned by her people and ignored by her “husband” during such a difficult time. Making this all the more heartbreaking, especially for Dramon if he ever realizes how he f$cked up essentially leaving his wife to experience a miscarriage on her own while he was with Salami. Our Venus is a QUEEN! 😍🥺
RainbowRenee
2021-03-21 18:12:19 +0000 UTCI hope someone else finds her, someone good for her
CassyRae
2021-03-21 14:45:13 +0000 UTCI hope the baby is not dead because she does not deserve that much suffering
Sonia Musunu
2021-03-21 13:49:49 +0000 UTCSaline solution 🤣🤣🤣👍🏾👍🏾
jeniene
2021-03-21 05:05:08 +0000 UTCIn this case I feel like it was just the stress of the journey
Lia
2021-03-21 05:00:11 +0000 UTCI feel like someone poisoned her
Clarissa Oquendo
2021-03-21 04:22:29 +0000 UTCTotally understand if there is a second lead BUT I am a sucker for redemption. Hear me out: he brings her back and then like punishes himself for disrespecting The Queen in front of like the whole village and is all like “you’ll pay the ultimate price if you disrespect the queen” and because I love someone who leads by example, he gets punished. And then starts treating her like the mother-effing Queen she is!
Angie
2021-03-21 02:58:43 +0000 UTC🤣🤣🤣😭😭😭 @ Salami & Saline Solution! 💀⚰
Danielle Henry
2021-03-21 02:30:51 +0000 UTCHow heartbreaking to hear how her knee was damaged 😞 she lost a challenge for her position. Her pride is just as damaged, i bet she feels so helpless
RainbowRenee
2021-03-20 19:32:55 +0000 UTCI swear I don’t want it to be Dramon saving her.. Jema is my HERO!!! Standing up to her king telling him how it is, because she knows. She knows the disrespect he’s given Venus. I actually hope Venus makes it to the capital to get the annulment and drive Dramon CRAZY with guilt. GREAT CHAPTER! ❤️
RainbowRenee
2021-03-20 19:26:14 +0000 UTCChapers tend to be 1,100 word but rarely I make them like 1500
Ancientt
2021-03-20 18:54:07 +0000 UTCThats what I was thinking to. That the seed just didn't work because she was different from them
L.M .S
2021-03-20 12:18:44 +0000 UTCWhy didnt jema tell her she use to be a rider queen. That probably would have helped venus alot if she knew
L.M .S
2021-03-20 12:15:10 +0000 UTCThis hurts my heart for Venus. Ugh, and all this stress Dramon put her through.
ALICIA HEIGHTCHEW
2021-03-20 12:03:12 +0000 UTCI actually hope the baby does not die and Dramon gets to see his wife and his child with another men. Other rider king wanted Venus. She was no second best. He needs to be reminded that for a while...
Sonia Musunu
2021-03-20 11:45:23 +0000 UTCIndeed. I hope that this time around he is really heartbroken..
Sonia Musunu
2021-03-20 11:41:09 +0000 UTCShe did not lie about the seed. It didn't bloom. I wonder if it doesn't work on her because she's a human? Yes, she's miscarried. The amount of pain & blood indicated so.
Ins0mniaxXx
2021-03-20 11:38:06 +0000 UTCYes! She was totally humiliated by him in front of the entire tribe. I would have left too.
Ins0mniaxXx
2021-03-20 11:34:33 +0000 UTCI know I might go away and then come back. It will be heart breaking if the baby is really not present. Venus has been through so much that she deserves everything....
Sonia Musunu
2021-03-20 11:30:59 +0000 UTCShe left because Dramon refused to stop checking on Salina and was ignoring her, the tribe was mad at her for confronting Salina and suggesting she go to the Capital, and she felt like an over all failure as a Ryder Queen.
Ins0mniaxXx
2021-03-20 11:30:13 +0000 UTCYes, she's miscarried. But she didn't know she was pregnant. The seed test said she wasn't.
Ins0mniaxXx
2021-03-20 11:19:44 +0000 UTCVenus, I’m feeling your pain 😭 Treysa is queen, how protective of my girl. Jema is the true Rider Queen, coming through for my girl Venus. Dramon, smh, Dramon. At this point I really don’t know how he can redeem himself. I know there’s still a lot of his story that we don’t know about, but still... he’s an ass!!!! He says: I guess she’s still angry at me... clueless dumbass. I don’t even know if I want him to be redeemed. To upset with him rn
Stepho
2021-03-20 11:11:57 +0000 UTC🥺🥺🥺
Ree
2021-03-20 11:04:20 +0000 UTCUhnt uhnt 😭😭 please end up letting the baby be alive. Fuck dramon & salami
Donna
2021-03-20 09:56:01 +0000 UTC😭😭😭😭
Amya Cahaya
2021-03-20 09:16:54 +0000 UTCI REALLY REALLY don’t want Dramon to swoop in and save/help her. Please don’t let that happen. She’s been through enough, let this be her rock bottom to rise again like the Queen she is!!
Heather Ore
2021-03-20 08:13:20 +0000 UTCmake up your fucking mind, don’t disrespect Venus like that
Violet
2021-03-20 07:38:00 +0000 UTCI swear if she loses the baby too 😭 it better just be from all the stress
Sarah
2021-03-20 07:36:58 +0000 UTCOH MY GUSH. I... Was not expecting that. But MAN. Venus is being put through the wringer 😢. First her knee and everything that happened after that, then her marriage with a side of salami, suicidal thoughts, and NOW a MiScArRiAgE? What did my girl do wrong??!!! And honestly, I HOPE a fine second lead pops in and shows her what it means to be loved and cared for. Or maybe treysa be dragging her to a place she can be healed 👀👀👀👀 imagine if she can walk again or ride 😢😢😢❤️❤️❤️. Screw the romance let my Venus ride again.
Sofs Mi
2021-03-20 07:26:32 +0000 UTCMaybe she lied about the seed as a test for Dramon 🤔 which btw he failed miserably. Either way it was very reckless of you Venus, the baby wasn't at fault 😭 hope it's just a scare 🤞
Sandra
2021-03-20 07:07:54 +0000 UTCI’m just wondering where the male the king said he was in the begging has gone uk
Daisy.B
2021-03-20 07:03:09 +0000 UTCGod - I really hope she’s still pregnant. The poor woman has been through enough. Fuck Dramon. Fuck Saline Solution. Also: we Stan ms Jena❤️
Mita
2021-03-20 06:47:24 +0000 UTCCan we get another update plz
letitia sneed
2021-03-20 06:08:45 +0000 UTCHmm this miscarriage scar is gonna play into things a lot now. Since this is also what happened with Selina. Dramon's POV might shed some light on it. I kinda want some mystery person to find her, preferebly a hot guy 😂 Side note: Jema is a real trooper for sticking by her and understanding her situation when no one else in the village cared. This wasn't just about Dramon, she left cuz of the whole village. She is a leader andn to have what was now her own people let her down was too much 🥺
Lia
2021-03-20 06:08:13 +0000 UTCI'm soo ready for the second lead male 🍿
Sandra
2021-03-20 05:56:37 +0000 UTCLOVING THIS BOOK!! Side note, not complaining at all I’m just wondering, are the chapters about the same length as the other books chapters? No worries if not! I’m just curious, they seem a tiny bit shorter!💓
rose
2021-03-20 05:50:44 +0000 UTCI really want confirmation. Did she lie about the seed? Was it a false negative? Did she miscarry? Was she or is she still pregnant because you can still bleed when pregnant?
Kiarah Johansen
2021-03-20 05:43:35 +0000 UTCWait, did she lie about the seed?
Jennifer
2021-03-20 05:35:50 +0000 UTCi really wanna smack Dramon in the head, i mean real HARD! awww Queen don't give up, help will come! but not the dumbass i hope 😡
Eronheart
2021-03-20 05:34:19 +0000 UTCEspecially when she told him that seeing him with selina is hurting her and he still did nothing to reassure her or even comfort her he still went to selina 🤬
jeniene
2021-03-20 05:31:55 +0000 UTCIt seems that one of our commentators guessed right in the previous chapter that because venus is human the flower might not bloom and she'll get a false negative
jeniene
2021-03-20 05:26:25 +0000 UTCI'm so confused 😕 😐
Ree1209
2021-03-20 05:25:58 +0000 UTCTears filled my eyes 😭😭😭she lost her baby all because of those idiots...🤬🤬...I wish he never finds her that 🤬🤬
jeniene
2021-03-20 05:24:20 +0000 UTCI hope so. Dramon is upsetting
Lilliz
2021-03-20 05:17:13 +0000 UTCSo she is having a miscarriage😲😢
Argyro Eleftheriou
2021-03-20 05:15:54 +0000 UTCno fr!!!!!! he cant lead both parties on
Brooke Bryant
2021-03-20 05:15:50 +0000 UTCTRUST THE PROCESS 😂❤❤
Ancientt
2021-03-20 05:15:32 +0000 UTCRight, when she was by your side needing your atention, you were with that Salina bitch. Now that she's gone you love and need her all of the sudden? 🤬🤬🤬
Tatiana Souza Alves
2021-03-20 05:14:03 +0000 UTCwhy does dramon want venus in his arms , when second back he had his ex mistress in them , does he not understand how humiliating it is for venus , like she us the second choice and a leftover , I am happy she left with her dignity and pride and dramon can go to helll
sukanya saha
2021-03-20 05:12:20 +0000 UTCI’m sad to know that she miscarried but at the same time I’m glad she’s not tied to Dramon. Plus, now he wants Venus in his arms after she left. But when she was there with him, he kept having Salina in his arms checking to make sure she was fine instead. He probably only trying to find her so he won’t bring shame onto his failed marriage. I hope someone else finds her before he does.
Sieal
2021-03-20 05:08:18 +0000 UTComg!! now it makes sense why she left
shaniqua johnson
2021-03-20 05:07:56 +0000 UTCI hope the person who comes to save her is a second lead , I love the angst of love triangles, and is venus having a miscarriage?
sukanya saha
2021-03-20 05:07:42 +0000 UTCNooo! She was pregnant and his stupid ass hasn't even realize everything that his done.. Ugh i can't even with right now, tho I do hope venus can get help form someone.. He needs to suffer for bit he
Alejandra Sagre
2021-03-20 05:07:24 +0000 UTCWait what? Die with her child? She means Treysa?
Argyro Eleftheriou
2021-03-20 05:06:11 +0000 UTCDefinitely not Dramon. I sense a SECOND LEAD SYNDROME already 😂
Zainab M.
2021-03-20 05:05:32 +0000 UTCStupid ass, what? NOW she’s a priority? I am remaining unimpressed with this indecisive bitch. He needs to decide who he wants and who means more to him and stick with it.
Han
2021-03-20 05:03:45 +0000 UTCHopefully not his dumbass self
Crystal W
2021-03-20 05:03:23 +0000 UTCBut I thought she wasn’t prego😭
Movee
2021-03-20 05:02:50 +0000 UTCSo scared to read this story.... dont wanna get my heart brokennnn 😭😭
travelinthefazlane
2021-03-20 05:02:07 +0000 UTCso now he cares about her whereabouts 🙄 he couldn’t be bothered with her before but nowwwwww shes essential to him
Brooke Bryant
2021-03-20 05:00:17 +0000 UTC