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Added 2024-05-20 05:51:07 +0000 UTCTo protect against scrapers, chapters of this story has been merged into a PDF. Find the complete story on The Master Doc
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Ok thanks.
toni stephenson
2024-05-30 07:21:45 +0000 UTChey babe, I originally planned on extending her teenage years and writing more about how she couldn't get the truth out of her mom, sabotage her doctor, and struggle with her friendships. But I decided to accelerate a bit and skip to when they are adults. I will also not beat around the bush as much and allow Octavius to discover her identity a bit faster. This is what I mean by "cutting it short" :) getting to the dramatic pieces a bit faster instead of dragging it on
Ancientt
2024-05-30 00:26:52 +0000 UTCWhy once you get past the boring start other people mite like it more. You’re rushing another story it’s getting frustrating. If everyone hated it then maybe but not everyone does.
toni stephenson
2024-05-24 06:56:02 +0000 UTCYeah iv only just got caught up on beast and i skipped some chapters to get to where it started getting good but i like the point it got to
toni stephenson
2024-05-22 06:12:16 +0000 UTCI’m annoyed ANOTHER one is getting cut short because 6 chapters that come out slow haven’t gotten enough attention. People are still butt hurt about the last one that was cut short. Please can we not have to much back story if this is getting cut short and more story about them getting together. Thanks.
toni stephenson
2024-05-22 06:10:22 +0000 UTCNo! please, just because a few people don’t like it right now, doesn’t mean it won’t gain traction later on!
Ruthie Gardner
2024-05-22 02:24:03 +0000 UTCI keep thing the chapters don’t come out fast enough for this one, then you say your cutting this one short. Just makes me sad and I had to ask you to not do that? , please!!!
Ruthie Gardner
2024-05-22 02:21:40 +0000 UTCAnd I thought it took alot of alcohol before it affected wolves. Definitely more than two shots. I recall reading that in one of your books i believe
L.M .S
2024-05-21 04:08:28 +0000 UTCWhy wouldn't the alpha or the principle just go straight to her house. It days 4 days later. So for 4 days the alpha and the principle didn't go to her house or inform her mom of what was going on. That doesn't seem like something a alpha would do
L.M .S
2024-05-21 04:07:09 +0000 UTCWouldn’t her mating with the alpha stop all the running?
Abril Moctezuma
2024-05-20 23:36:34 +0000 UTCI have mommy issues so her mother really pisses me off 😂
Noirranneskap
2024-05-20 18:51:56 +0000 UTCIt seems you voiced my thoughts when I read the chapter...
Lina S.
2024-05-20 17:38:11 +0000 UTCI think it’s kind of a good that your writing like this though! Because I feel like we’re feel the same as Helena… frustrated, in the dark, she’s been lied to her whole life and now she’s super f*cking stressed with keeping her mate a secret … sometimes things start slow but you as the author know what’s to come and it’ll alllllll make sense as the chapters roll on! I think people just get impatient! Me included 🫢
Noirranneskap
2024-05-20 16:48:19 +0000 UTCI'm interested to see what happens and what's going on with her mother. I don't remember reading it, but is her mother still in the pack...
Debra Page
2024-05-20 16:22:51 +0000 UTCOk, I’ll shrink it to a few more chapters instead of a whole story 👍
Ancientt
2024-05-20 16:01:06 +0000 UTCSame boat
Noirranneskap
2024-05-20 15:38:25 +0000 UTCI have a really hard time liking this story... And Helenas reasons so far, no not buying it...and let's not talk about her mother...
Tonje Lereng
2024-05-20 07:07:59 +0000 UTC
