The Japanese Way

Sorry, I hit enter before I finish my thought. Involving the Mother in the action is always a great love of mine, it feels the submission is more profound when it's to the entire dominant family. I'd love to see maybe a neighbor family dominating the other poor or from a different race family. Keep up the Good Work and thank you for giving us the pleasure of reading what we love to read. Looking forward to your ideas for the next one :)

Another great addition to your ever-growing list Manloco. I love stories like this where the submissive is indoctrinated into believing that what they're doing is the right thing or good for them as in Respecting Mariam.

Thank you, as I said, it's difficult to find a balance. People prefer different things. I'm trying to vary the stories as I go along so that everyone is catered for. Some prefer as you do, whereas others prefer a more 'forced' situation.

Great one again! As usual. Regarding what the guys up here said, I also missed more toe sucking and feet licking action. And I prefer your stories when the enslavement is done through seduction, through true love of feet. When the goddess can detect and explore the weakness for feet and use them to enslave, when the slave girl is not forced to give in, but can not avoid it. The best ones in my opinion are Giving in to my Best Friend, Loosing myself to My Sister, Proving myself to my Sister and Swipe Right for Foot Wipe.

Huge fan of your stories! This one was very well-written, as always, but something about it didn't click for me as much as all of your earlier stories. I can't articulate exactly why. I probably could have gone for even more toe-sucking and footdom humiliation, but others here are saying it was too much. To each their own, but I like that stuff, and those parts of the stories. Anyway, definitely looking forward to what you have coming up next, you are still definitely the best in this genre. Thank you so much for the effort and great work you put in.

High standard as always, but this might have been the first time with one of your stories that I just didn't fully “buy it“. What makes you so great as a writer is your ability to create plausible paths into submission that feel organic and make sense in the context of the story. Something was off for me this time, but thanks nonetheless for your high quality output. While I'm at it, would love to read what Emilia is up to these days.

I could revisit it and flesh it out. I understand what people are saying, I certainly 'felt' it during my proofreading, that it jumped in a bit too quick. I had a whole plan set out and originally Akane was going to take her around Tokyo and seeing stuff in a fairly normal way, and then gradually it would begin, but that was gonna take about 5k words on its own and as it was a commission there was quite a lot of other necessary stuff that I needed to make sure was in there. The good thing about this patreon is that you guys are able to give me your feedback and opinions and I'm not against reworking stuff if necessary. As I said, I can see there's a definite gap between her arrival and then the foot stuff beginning. At some point, if I have a bit of free time, I might update it.

you have always been one of my favorite writers. Feel free to turn this into a novel one chapter at a time. I love where this is going.

I respect your feedback. There was a lot for me to fit into this story, and I struggled to go at my usual slow-paced style. It was originally supposed to be 20k words and was impossible, so got inflated to 43k words. To be honest, it could have easily gone on to novel length.

I do agree with some of the complaints that she submitted a little too early. The pillow thing felt way too early and her mentioning the stench that was keeping her up on her pillow felt kinda late. The later portion of the story felt a lot better when she was worshipping the other maids but also felt kinda weird since she was doing it in front of customers.

Feetanon

I liked this, and I was happy to receive such a long story; however, I can’t help but feel like a big chunk of Molly’s submission was presented in a rather hamfisted way, and a bit too quickly, too hard to believe and empathize with. To me, the most delicious part of these stories is often the suspense and the psychology of the relationship leading up to the submission. If this is done right, the subsequent humiliation feels much more organic to me. E.g. I think the Arpita story was amazing, because it dealt so much with Poppy’s feelings and the action was confined to a few powerful episodes, which were all unlike each other. With this one, at times it felt like you rushed into the footdom stuff and then just kinda went with the check marks: shoe worship - check, trampling - check, findom - check. I actually think the most powerful moment in this story was Saori’s initial treatment of Molly, particularly at the kitchen table. Episodes like this to me are the most effective way to build that feeling of suspense, and I believe you can do this stuff better, more intricately, than you did in this story. In any case, this is just my opinion, and I still enjoyed reading this - the meaty stuff was lovely.

Thank you all. It seems some prefer the more 'wanting it' submissive and others the 'reluctant'. I try to mix up the dynamics with each story so there's something for everyone.

I've read most of your stories and this one was BY FAR my favorite! The cultural submission was a great extra element rather than the usual boring "she was horny for feet" that most of these types of stories have. GREAT JOB!! I was a little disappointed with the poppy story so I cancelled sub last month but the teaser at themousepad got me interested and it was worth it to come back! Keep it up friend!

Well writen, but a bit implausible. Molly's submission is hard to understand. In the latest stories it seemed justified by an irresistible lust. Anyway, good story, as usual.

Once again, great story, thank you! Especially thank you for findom elements, awesome

I didn't start yet, but I just noticed that it's 43k words and wanted to say thanks.