No Laughing Matter
Added 2021-08-02 05:32:29 +0000 UTCF/f - While high on laughing gas at the dental
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Hi themaneloco! enjoyed 'no laughing matter'! wondering what you're working on next and when you anticipate the next release? rock on!
2021-08-17 15:49:25 +0000 UTCThank you all for the comments. Regarding giantess/shrinking stories, this is not something I've ever written and likely never will. I prefer 'realistic' scenarios and not this type of fantasy elements. I'm not sure I could do such a story justice.
2021-08-15 02:55:08 +0000 UTCHey mate, i've been a fan for years. I'm glad i found your work again, and you have so many new stories. Have you ever considered digging in the Giantess/shrinking woman aspect of this fantasy?
sok06
2021-08-12 09:37:03 +0000 UTCOriginal stories are good because they focus on the enslavement and sequels are also good because the action is faster. You’re right to switch.
2021-08-11 22:08:37 +0000 UTCThis story had a LOT of build up, and you did a masterful job in that build up leading to what happened between our victim and Hind. I personally liked Fair Game in Her Eyes more since it goes into the action quicker and has a TON of foot content but this was a nice switch up and variety is a good thing. I also think you set yourself up for a sequel here and that sequel already has the build up and could really go into more action . And imagine if Hind's family also enslaves our victim, wow, the humiliation just goes up!! I do have to say I LOVED the financial and racial humiliation on this one!!! You really turned it on here and it was so enjoyable. This story really made me hope even more that you do a part 2 of 'Respecting Maryam Reaps the Rewards' since she is a fellow Muslim Goddess ;)
2021-08-10 15:31:13 +0000 UTCHey Themaneloco first off fantastic story here!!! I love how you are really building your collection of amazing stories here on your Patreon. I love the fact that Hind was actually based off a real character you knew in your life, it now even makes everything feel somewhat 'real.' And it was probably even more enjoyable for you to write due to that. Curious - are any of the other stories you write, based off people you know in real life? (Specifically curious about Cinta and Maryam).
2021-08-10 15:24:59 +0000 UTCI loved this one and can't wait for the sequel!
2021-08-09 13:28:47 +0000 UTCThank you for the comments. Hind is based on an international student I used to know and I tried to keep her dialogue accurate, it helped me write the story while imagining her speaking. There was a suspicion at the time that there had been some leeway during her application on her language test scores due to her appearance. She actually asked me to proofread her thesis and the English was atrocious!
2021-08-08 03:01:40 +0000 UTCLoved the story! Only thing I didn’t like was the accent, it was kinda tough to understand what she was saying sometimes. Can’t wait for what’s next
2021-08-07 14:56:35 +0000 UTCVery good! I liked it a lot! That's the way I like the development of the enslavement the most - through seduction, through total love and submission to the girl's feet. Thank you very much for this one to, Maneloco. Just missed one thing: more foot on mouth (or mouth on foot) action. You were a little economic on this great story...
2021-08-04 23:30:09 +0000 UTCNot a bad story. I liked the previous two better, but its cool that everyone has a diversity of tastes and styles.
2021-08-04 04:12:02 +0000 UTCBest story in a few months
Minding my business
2021-08-04 03:37:14 +0000 UTC