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Chapter 649: That's Why

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Yeah. I was trying for a scenario where he got used to being big fish in small pond type, then running into real resistance. Looks like it went okay. Don’t want him to lose too much faith in himself, but also wanted him to realize that he’s not the be all end all yet. Based on this comment, without having to nerf him (which I hate) it looks like I did okay. Thanks for reading and the feedback!

SunriseCV

Okay, I reread the last few chapters starting from chapter 599, the start of book 9 I think. And I had to wait until now to post this cause I didn’t wanna give any spoilers, but oh my God, cringing at all the bragging Derek did just before his fight, and then got his clock cleaned. How embarrassing. Now can Derek remember why he needed to hide his level and get stronger when he first landed in the Davinresh system? Because he’s gonna need to be a little more circumspect now that there are people of such higher levels than him. He’s just a regular fish now.

Josh Kubo

Thanks for the chapter.

Makix217

Thanks for the chapter!

Arieh Sochaczevski

Tftc 🍻

JW Saxby

Thank you for the chapter

joel southard

Very mundane typo: 'Herring guy... I went through his things[ ], and' Extra space

Chewbacchus

Thanks for the chapter.

Raymond Mouton

Excited for the main plot, introducing the people of the Origin system should be entertaining!

Jordan

Final plot does not mean short plot. Necessarily

sjmcc13

Ttfc!

Vilastromoz

That would make it a really short book. Go ahead and take a break, but don’t end it that soon And thanks for the chapter

Josh Kubo


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