Movie Production Diary #47
Added 2022-03-09 14:01:03 +0000 UTCAs we recently announced, we're making a movie and a true crime podcast, and we're making them in full view of you, our Patrons. Today, we worked on the movie and it’s audio this time! We’re still in our new draft pass. We address some of the outstanding notes from the community and fandom.
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Comments
Love the background arc that Ed has now, wondering if it could stand one more step. I liked the idea of Ed talking about Black Sad to Hank in the closing scene, and with the addition of him reading the comic on the couch now I kind of want to see him and Hank REALLY getting into analysis of the events and themes. Like, weirdly bonding over mutual appreciation of this story. Also, thought for the temp mask head that Trey wears at the end. I agree that it shouldn't be a wolf, so that it doesn't feel too meaningful to Wolf Mask. But what if it's a horse? I'm not sure if that would be an interesting accidental parallel with Arturo, but I leave that to you.
BWJhimself
2022-03-12 06:31:32 +0000 UTCHey guys, I posted this in the discord just now, but thought to include it here. Had a thought about the "mask" conversation. What if the mask was off the shelf puppy-play mask? It's in the tangent to the fur community. Also that puppy aspect is also adjacent to a wolf, and could relate to Troy's character as the son of furry, wants to be included, but differentiate from the scene?
Seth Saxon
2022-03-09 19:44:49 +0000 UTCWhen Ed is reading Black Sad, he could be a bit more distracted in the way I think you’re going for if he doesn’t even look up from the comic when he says “Everything alright up there?”
Kyle Oddson
2022-03-09 18:05:30 +0000 UTCSo stoked for this movie! I know you guys just wrapped up the "Ahmed tells his truth" scene, but... What if there was one more beat as the person collects the empty suit, Ahmed is looking the other way and doesn't see it leave. He says something like, "Man, it feels really good to finally get that off my chest." then turns back to see the suit is gone and says, "Hey, where'd you go?" It's just another joke and not necessary. But would be maybe a little funny if he never knows the suit was empty.
Cody Franks
2022-03-09 15:49:40 +0000 UTC
