Seasick
Added 2021-03-21 19:16:03 +0000 UTCIt does not take much to set me off, and in the note to this story I have recorded the message I got which triggered this story. Feedback please!
Comments
I really enjoy this story, It’s great. I guess I would have liked to hear more about that very first transformation and how he felt being out as a girl for the first time but otherwise it was really great!! I also think the ending is very good, Simones friends get to see her and realize it’s their friend but she decides to stick with the girls
2021-03-29 18:17:46 +0000 UTCIt would have been interesting had another member of the “Felonious Five” also suffered from sea-sickness and witnessed Simone’s metamorphosis as well. Perhaps two people’s lives could have been irrevocably changed. Anyway, that’s my 2 cents. Nice story!
John Chu
2021-03-22 00:03:01 +0000 UTC
