Butchered Tech Ch. 2 (Unedited)
Added 2023-04-09 03:15:17 +0000 UTCButchered Tech
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Oh god, I just signed up today to get a fix for this wonderful car crash, and it was WORTH IT. The goons just kidnap-recruiting Greg, Lisa's Shard, giving up on having to read a literal squad of main protagonists. Rachel, her blunt self just calling Lisa out on the horny while also being in on the horny. Greg's seduction field. The running joke about the pearls. Just wow. Two chapters and I am hooked, good writer.
Israel Perez-Rolo
2023-04-11 01:08:58 +0000 UTCLove how the empire minions are so racist that they just assumed Greg had to be one of them and won't take no for an answer. Also, John's power fits really well as a hitman. Loved the interaction with Lisa and Rachel and looking forward to more.
SomeFox
2023-04-09 06:27:39 +0000 UTC
