Little Tiny Things p.16
Added 2021-08-18 13:24:15 +0000 UTCYAY we get to see the CHARMING NEIGHBOR, I'm so excited<3
btw, I've edited last page because I had forgotten that I wanted this moment to be when night time's just around the corner, so I added some darker gray in last week's update to show that!
This also allowed me to make Pia more visible and stand out from the background, so it's a win-win!
This comic is wonderful for me to practice many things. Movement and character expressions, but also things I'm less at ease with, like lighting, contrasts and vegetation and houses... I love it! :D
27/08/21 edit:
->changed the french wording in last panel, also tweaked some of the neighbor's text dialogue to make the letters more wonky less straight.
->also added dark gray to Pia's hair! (for p.15 as well) looks way better, I think.
-> Next page
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Comments
Ooo a new character
CYR
2021-09-09 23:45:46 +0000 UTCWhat an optimist she is.
Michael Gaffney
2021-09-09 11:32:25 +0000 UTCLol... not going to lie. The single highlight in the hair makes me think of this as a much older, grumpier Arin from Game Grumps
Starspangledkiwi
2021-09-01 15:44:24 +0000 UTCAh, who's this now? And who did they think was at the door? Interesting.
Yajoovya
2021-08-21 12:41:40 +0000 UTCThe expressive hair is like eye candy.
Hailey S
2021-08-19 18:03:23 +0000 UTCI was looking at that too. The French seems more Pia-esque. 'Seems great' looks better... 'He looks like a great neighbour'?
Jan Thie
2021-08-18 22:20:17 +0000 UTCMight be something I'll change later, thanks for the feedback!
clover
2021-08-18 19:59:22 +0000 UTCI agree with Stephen, I can basically smell that person's image. π
Ramona Wanders
2021-08-18 15:00:45 +0000 UTCI wonder what other readers think, but i feel like "what a great looking neighbor" really sounds like Pia's commenting on his appearance? the french version is "mais il a l'air SUPER comme voisin dis donc" which i would translate to "Wow, my neighbour seems GREAT"
milΓΉ
2021-08-18 13:48:38 +0000 UTCI lost my sense of smell years ago, but the neighbour just made me smell cigarette smoke. So, well done on the imagery :p
Stephen Jeffrey
2021-08-18 13:28:34 +0000 UTC
