Now this is getting interesting! I always cringe whenever a character is a macrophile, but this is different, probably because it actually delves into the topic rather than simply throw it out there. The relationship between Sierra and Duval is interesting and I'm curious to see how it'll evolve. The descriptions of Duval as godly and mountain-like paint a clear picture, helping sell the fact that she could snuff the life out of her tiny subjects with ease. This contrasting with the kind of person she is helps her gentle/maternal nature stand out. Wish I could leave better "reviews" but I already feel like I'm sinning with these 100 word comments.
