Bonus Short Video
Added 2024-05-30 14:35:46 +0000 UTCShort video example referenced in the poll this morning.
https://www.mediafire.com/file_premium/0m8s1dhpowoe4ls/The_Nanny.mp4/file
Comments
You basically nailed it in the first 3 minutes. She says no, he says yes, sex scene. Imagine if you kept it going a few more times. Him seducing the nanny again and again, only escalating into new locations/outfits/singular sex positions. You don't have a locked time-frame like your longer videos and can move around the setting without going too deep into details as to how they got there.
Melon
2024-05-30 16:40:28 +0000 UTCIt definitely lacks something, I think
Jason Purkiss
2024-05-30 16:14:42 +0000 UTCGreat opening, but it's a bit too minimal. For a shorter story there should be a bigger hook, like "stretching her out", where there is that danger of getting caught through out.
Melon
2024-05-30 14:57:17 +0000 UTC
