Off to College Part 1
Added 2024-07-05 18:30:01 +0000 UTCLet me know how you guys like it.
Do the speech bubbles work?
Are the spelled out sounds effects too much, or do they add value?
Willing to make adjustments
Comments
It's a comic strip, not a video, unfortunately. Let me see if there's another way to present it so mobile users can still access it.
Jason Purkiss
2024-07-06 15:04:16 +0000 UTCDamn why the .rar files? Cant download the video on iPhones 🥲 any chance you can upload the mp4 on mediafire like the rest?
PoppaDiddz
2024-07-06 14:46:44 +0000 UTCYeah...I agree, orgasm was over the top. Was trying to give it a comic book feel, but went too far with it. Noted.
Jason Purkiss
2024-07-05 20:07:28 +0000 UTCLighthearted and quickly gets to the point. First time seeing a driver giving the handjob to the passenger, but her orgasm was a bit much though. A little bit unusual to not have the actual white circular bubbles, but I got used to it pretty quickly. Sound effects definitely add value, you can even use different colors/shapes depending on intensity. Overall a good start.
Melon
2024-07-05 20:05:28 +0000 UTC
