Side Dishes: Chapter 2: Page 7
Added 2015-04-06 03:00:08 +0000 UTCAnother week, another Side Dishes page! A combination facesitting/cock abuse page. It's tricky working on a weekly series like this, because there's so little that can happen in each page. I try to get as much as possible, but this page has basically just ended up as setup for a more complete scene. Th question is, though... do we want to continue watching Lily and Jenna next week as they play, or check in on the other girls for a bit? And if we do continue with Jenna and Lily, how long do you think Lily should wait before untying Jenna?
Comments
I concur with Quinn and John! Perhaps a mix of both? I definitely dig the idea of some ball swelling. And seeing it happen excites Lily to tease Jenna some more (maybe some ball slapping? or maybe she kneads Jeena's growing balls with her feet?) Then I would gander that after another couple pages of the Jenna x Lily fun. Lily still doesn't let Jenna cum with Jenna having a total 'ahegao face' from the pleasure and then we do a "meanwhile" cut and have a few page where we pick up on the other girls. I do also kinda like the idea of Jenna becoming a sex-pet. With Jenna herself, willingly becoming subservient to Lily and her sea-woman sex ways.
Kenneth
2015-04-06 14:24:50 +0000 UTCSome foot action, even if just for one panel, is always awesome. Thanks for that, guys. As for the scene, I think you could have a succession of pages with two intertwined stories (Jenna x Lily & The Trio x Other Futas); like a "Meanwhile, in another part of the island" kind of thing, which could help moving the story forward. So, that'd mean starting a new scene next page, then coming back to Jenna getting teased, then back to the girls, and so on every 1-2 pages. Though, if you're afraid of the possible sequential clusterfuck, you could end this scene altogether with one more page of teasing and then show what the girls are up to. I also wanted to add something I just thought about. What do you think of Lily taking Jenna as a sex-pet afterwards? She could stop teasing Jenna without letting her cum and then tie a leash around her cock and bring her to a Foo-Tah outpost. There, she'd finally allow her "prisoner" to empty her balls in front of the guards. This could lead to Jenna telling some other tribals how enjoyable it was to be teased and played with, thus Lily could have some fun with a few futas aching to be taught by the "sea woman". That could also be the trigger for Lily wanting to have a dick herself, after having seen how much pleasure they can give to futas.
John Doe
2015-04-06 12:44:51 +0000 UTCmore of this. i want to get to more story but this is getting hot. she could start fucking her and her balls could start swelling and she could beg to cum. and lily could give her balls a slap. little domination stuff, you more you dont cum till i say. so probably not the next page.
Quinn Adlard
2015-04-06 04:00:27 +0000 UTC
