Side Dishes: Chapter 2: Page 18
Added 2015-06-22 06:50:23 +0000 UTCI can't remember who first suggested the idea that Bianca showers regularly in cum, but I figured it would be a fun detail to add to this scene. I didn't really have any particular characters in mind with the women showering her... I kind of deliberately laid out this page with them obscured so I wouldn't have to worry about it, so it came down to CGI to decide on their skin tones. I had initially planned to have Bianca on a throne made of bamboo, but then I thought that it would be another good detail to help differentiate the Foo-tah from the Nah-Ri, since the Foo-Tah live on the cliffside in stone homes, it makes sense that Bianca's throne would also be made of stone.
Figuring out the speech pattern for the island women was actually a little tricky... I don't want to just have them speaking in broken English, because I think that would be a little annoying to have to read (and write) for an entire culture. So my idea was that they have a few of their own words, lack other words, and didn't speak with any contractions. I added Lily's line about considering her crew like family partly to help show that she cares about her crewmates, but also because I feel like the Foo-tah might not understand the word "crew", so she would have to clarify it. As for the gold... I think there might be gold on the island, but the women there simply don't call it that, and they likely don't value it nearly as much as a pirate would.
Also, the other day while the comments system on Patreon wasn't working right, patron John Doe had some ideas for Side Dishes he wanted to present, but couldn't post them publicly I told him I would repost his ideas once the page went up so they could be added to the discussion as well without him having to retype everything he thought up:
"This is about what you asked on June 15th, about which direction the story should take. Just to recap, because I've been away for a while (fucking job) and I don't want to get too lost: the Foo-tah worship penises and the Nah-ri are big fans of vaginers (as Louis C.K. would put it). The 3 girls (Daphne, Brunhilde and Liang) know that the leader of the Nah-ri, Kat's mom, is the only one allowed to use her dick to cum and breed. Right now, Lily finally arrived to the Foo-tah village, located on a cliff. We also discovered that Anastasia is the chief of the Nah-ri tribe (who live in trees, probably, like Ewoks), and that Lily stole a gem that kept some monster-girls prisoners. So, now we need to link all that together. So, how about this: Bianca and Anastasia were both explorers (and lovers) and their ship capsized near the island many centuries ago (do we have a name for the island, by the way?). At the time, it was only inhabited by horny pheromone-spewing monster-girls. They studied them and even befriended them. In time, the monster-girls slowly infected the two women in order to turn them into monster-girls as well (because it's their only means of reproduction), which made them grow a penis (as the first step is to turn the host into a versatile sex-junkie). This also made them as immortal as the monster-girls, which consequently means that they'd gradually forget who they are with each passing decade (because their brain can't possibly remember so much stuff, according to one specific character in the "Powers" comic-book series).
For a while, they lived and enjoyed the monster-girls' companionship but once new explorers came to the island, the two futas mated with them and gave them dicks (as a result of the monster-girls infecting them) and futa children. Slowly, the new futa tribe started to grow and its members prefered having sex with each other rather than with the monster-girls. This ultimately angered the latter, who became incredibly jealous and attacked the humans. As a result, the two original futas snapped out of their sex-crazed trance and emprisoned the monster-girls. Their bitter victory led Anastasia to reject the "gift" she was given; so she raised her children to not use their dicks because it only brings jealousy and problems (which is why she took upon herself the burden of impregnating her children, to keep the tribe alive and "pure"). As for Bianca, she misses the monster-girls (but knows that they had to go) and still sees the penis as a tool of power, because she thinks that they would've never been able to start a new tribe and have kids without it. This could be the starting point for the creation of two tribes: Anastasia left Bianca to start her own anti-ding dong religion (inspired as well by some religious pilgrims who came to the island and became part of her tribe in the very early days) and the latter decided to still worship the cock. What dou you think? Did I miss anything? Would this fit the story?"
Comments
well i could elaborate mine a little. Bianca could say like first demon straight on my assistant.. ...oh she fucking her now so maybe shes already on the verge of blowing her load. i guess cock could get tied off...a bit...samey...oh what if instead urethra insertion theres gota be some tribal thing she can use to plug it up. and she start riding her. this will leave the next page open for Bianca to see how much pleasure there both in and get in herself somehow. hope thats a little better.
Quinn Adlard
2015-06-22 19:47:00 +0000 UTCWow we've got a lot of great ideas to help build the world of the comic, but we also need a few more suggestions on what, specifically, should happen in the next page
Transmorpher D.D.S.
2015-06-22 19:01:00 +0000 UTCi think in the next page bianaca should bea little wary of a stranger doing new sex thing to her. so lily does them on hannah first to show them. off. then the nest page bianca could get involved somehow. if voters what that then, as for joes idea...i like them cumming to the island and i like them befriending the monster girls. it all sounds good, but there is one thing i don't like. how they get there dicks. not the immortality just the dick. so the leaders get there meet the girls and get mutated to be immortal from them after lots of sex. the dicks i think should come from something else. a sacred fruit or water source. that the monster girls gave them. this water ever it is could have a second effect if eaten twice enlargement increased sex drive. whatever. so the other woman come to the island get the what ever, and the monster girls rebel cause they didn't get enough action. but the rest of the girls lack immortality because they never really got with the monster girls much. then the tribes split as he said. the whatever could also do something else for the monster girls. maybe make them more powerful. the site of the whatever would be a sacred neutral ground for the 2 leader. Anastasia would see it as a reminder of the pain it can cause and Bianca would see it as a gift. but both could see it as a reminder of the fun times they originally had on the island and there former friends ship. any way this would also give the monster girls a place to go. both tribes would have guard posted there nice big gate that takes both leader to open keys or whatever. but the monster girls could bust in and then later the battered guards report to the leaders and they would have to reunite to defeat them reforging there friendship. and the girls show them that all kinds of sex are great, then they get the whatever back every body gets dicks. also theirs some sexy bits with the monster girls. they beat them with sex. also i like the cock fighting thing still maybe they could do that at the end a tradition to reforge there friendship friendly sexy combat. though thats just my thought. the originalle idea is still really good. i've just had the fruit idea in my head for awhile and i thought now be a time to really say something.
Quinn Adlard
2015-06-22 17:25:34 +0000 UTCThanks for the kind words. Welp, since I went with the idea that Bianca and Anastasia became infected by the slimy monster-girls, it'd be logical for them to be able to morph their bodies to some extent (ribbed dick, horse dick, double dick, the works).
John Doe
2015-06-22 12:51:34 +0000 UTCSperm shower, eh? Niiice. Reminds me of the cumbath from Rebis' "Twin Dungeon Princesses 3", with two giant futas used as faucets for the princess' bathtub. Thanks a lot for posting my suggestion up there, much appreciated. I should've waited one more day before submitting it, since everything seems to work fine since yesterday. Fingers crossed. I tried to tie everything together as best I could, dunno if it will work for everyone though. Nick's idea of a cursed fruit could be a nice replacement for the monster-girls' virus, as well.
John Doe
2015-06-22 12:44:40 +0000 UTCJohn Doe's Idea's are damn good to be honest, they all make sense and mesh with everything so far :), just to elaborate on a couple of things. I think the monster girls should be the ones telling this part of the story in the future, if only because the two chiefs most likely forgot most of it over centuries of their new role. Second, it gives us a reason to do multiple things, for instance we have a method of making our pirates futa's, we also have a reason to turn some characters into monster girls down the road. On top of all this, a thought for the future.... the tribes and the pirates don't have to win in the end ;p. Ok, as far as where we go from here well, I kind of like the idea that Hannah is the Chiefs personal "assistant" and for generations the "bloodline" of Hannah, have been responsible for serving Bianca's needs (mainly screwing her madly all her waking hours, it will be an interesting contrast, the Nah-ri chief is from an outsider's perspective a orgy fueled sex machine, while the Foo-tah chief is taking just one partner, most of the time, and is a sex machine with her xP, basically the opposite of their respective tribes). So Hannah is jealous but also very interested as she can use what is being shown to fulfill her only goal in life making Bianca orgasm (not just ejaculate, that is easy ;) ) so while she does not like the idea of the sea woman taking her place temporally she feels the need to.... I hope I am making sense. As far as the sex goes, I think we should give Bianca's cock something special ( Anastasia's is her massive size ) so we could have one or two panels of Hannah slowly taking herself off of Bianca's dick revealing that it is heavily ribbed cumming as each bump comes out of her vagina. when it is fully removed we could have cum gush out of Hannah to. Lily should show a "concerned lust" and then the chief could try and do exactly what Jenna did at the start xD ( because why not? it is what they know after all ) to which Lily has to react and stop her, then a blowjob could commence playing to the Penis's ribbed nature ;p Edit: corrections, formatting.
CGI
2015-06-22 10:42:27 +0000 UTCHey I really do like Bianca's design compare to her original one. As far as John Doe idea, I really like the beginning parts of his idea of Bianca and Anastasia arriving the Island of as explorers long ago which I thought it was heading that route and I wonder what timeline that would take place in ? I would did it to where they both got along of the native monster girls ate the " curse fruit " (idea I keep throwing) which change the bodies from the ground up ;) I would make to where Bianca, Anastasia or both had a relationship with one of the monster girl tribe but there greed consumed them which caused the monster girl tribe being trapped. Where for example Bianca and Anastasia have there own ideas and agendas which cause them split there own group. Where you got Anastasia a woman that is greedy and wants control of her people since she is the only one that can have sex. Then you have Bianca I person who embrace her sexual drive which is why you see her tribe can enjoy sex openly on the streets. During further on the series maybe after the sex arena games LOL I would have one or two of the pirate girls getting captured then changed into a monster girl like a succubus, elf, cowgirl, or ect. Then learn the ways of the monster tribe and end up fighting for them which would be really interesting. I really want to see more characters involving in this story especially interacting some of the main ones we see here. :)
Shotred
2015-06-22 08:06:22 +0000 UTC
