Side Dishes: Chapter 2: Page 23
Added 2015-07-27 02:15:57 +0000 UTCThe voting on this chapter was very close. I didn't check the vote before I went to bed last night, but when I got up this option was the winning vote. However, before he got started on the flats, CGI checked the poll and saw that the other option had taken the lead since then. However, I had already gotten going on the page, but what we realized was that I need to start setting a hard deadline on polls to avoid confusion like this. For now hopefully everyone is happy with the story as it stands and everyone's suggestions can only help to make the story better.
To make this idea work I had to take a lot of liberties with what was initially proposed. I felt like Bianca wouldn't really have any reason to tell Lily about the monster girls, so the best reason I could think of was to reveal the jewel, which Bianca knows was used to seal them away. I know that I presented a fairly grim attitude at the end of this page, but whether or not we actually keep that tone for the next page could be entirely up to the readers... this could be retconned to being misdirection, or we could go with it straight and have Bianca angry to see the jewel stolen.
The initial suggestion said that Bianca takes Lily to another room to explain the monster girls, and I would like to keep that as part of the next page, but are there any specifics you would like to see for the room she takes her to? This is also the last chance we have, I think to really put to a vote the specifics of how the monster girls work... whether they're all one type of monster, or if it's just a grab bag of different monster girls. There have been a lot of different suggestions and I'm partial to one particular idea, but I don't want to skew the vote by putting too much support behind one specific thing.
Comments
As someone noticed, this 2nd SD comic is already much longer than the previous one (I'm not complaining about that because it's really good ^___^) and someone else wrote he was also ready for a change of scenery. Well..this is just a generic idea about the real nature of the monster girls, which would exactly lead to such a change (even if not immediately ^^). The monster girls are alien dickgirls who crashed on the island in the past, while Anastasia and Bianca are 2 women they "kidnapped" to run some experiments on them, so that's why they developed dicks too....different experiments, different cocks). Moreover, when the spaceship crashed, a huge radiation wave erupted from the damaged machineries, so turning all the members of the local tribe(s) into futas. Eventually Bianca and Anastasia (who both lost almost all their past memories, because of the experiments) became chiefs...the monster girls pretended to be worshipped as gods...and...etc. etc. After being released by Lily, the alien dickgirls go back the their ship, planning a revenge on Bianca and Anastasia. In the meantime, Bianca is in the "historical room" with Lily and Jenna, while Anastasia is having sex with Kat and the crew girls, so when the aliens teleport the 2 chiefs to the ship, also all main characters gets teleported too (because they're close to each other ^^). From now on we might have zero suits, weird/interesting tools, sex under hypnosis, plans to escape (Lily might trick the alien girls in some way when everything seems to be lost ^^), etc and also a "fast" way to give Lily and/or the other girls a cock (via the alien machineries ofc). Anyway, as I said at the beginning, this is just a way to turn the cards while still being inside Side Dishes 2. Sorry for the long post ^^
Alinoris
2015-07-28 03:54:55 +0000 UTCHmm I really like the early parts of it, I would did to where Anastasia and Bianca got there futa cocks from the monster girls. There cum or by them fucking them turn the other human tribe into futa and they lock the monster girls away then those two have a feud with each other and went there own ways. Yeah I can see having Bianca like one of the monster girls but her greed broke there relationship apart. Maybe have that monster character appearing in the futa gladiator games fighting against Kat when she reveal herself.
Shotred
2015-07-27 09:56:55 +0000 UTCOK here is some idea's.. I like the idea that the two chieftains have encountered then before, are ageless and have cocks thanks to the monstergirls. Bianca should of had a closer relationship to them as her cock is closer to a monstergirls then Anastasia's maybe she actually liked one of them in a affectionate way, not as lust driven. I think we can use this to get Lily back to her crew and negate the need for scene shifting sooo... Bianca leads her into a room under the hut like a basement with torches on the staircase etc. when they get to the bottom she sees a giant hall with carved statues of monstergirls and painted walls documenting the past. Bianca explains about the monstergirls, her past ( the fact that neither her or Anastasia come from the island but it was so long ago they can't remember much due to the extended lives they have thanks to the monstergirls, she could say this with vague longing ) and that she needs Lily to take the sacred relic with her to the Nahri village to ask for their relic as it requires both to seal the monstergirls she leaves escorted by HaNa and Jenna. Finish with a silhouette panel of the monstergirls finally free of their prison if I need to go into my specifics for the monster girls I could find my old ideas and repost ;p
CGI
2015-07-27 08:33:35 +0000 UTCOne thing I'd like to see expanded on that you mention is the idea that Lily is tasked to fix it. Like maybe there's a ceremony or something they need her to do in order to seal the monsters back.
Transmorpher D.D.S.
2015-07-27 03:35:58 +0000 UTCi like the other room idea with a mural of how they encountered and defeated the monster girls. i like the idea of like the 3 leaders being sealed away. the most powerful that they couldn't destroy just weaken and trap. but before that are we showing how the tribe started or i think this should just be talking about the monster girls and the battle. maybe the 2 leaders don't like talking about the early days. and we can get back to that later. also bianca should be mad but lets not go right to off with her head mad. more like what have you done you need to help fix this kind of mad. as for the girls i like the demon one. and a woody elf nymph one. and slime maybe. if you wanted suggestions for looks i picture the demon one with purple skin black hair wings tail horn basic demon stuff. maybe black markings here and there piercings. the elfy one i picture as a red head with more of an autum theme we see green elfs all the time. like kind of wood nymph meets elf....and idk about slime girl. green hopefully someone else will know what to do with a slime girl...just suggestions though.
Quinn Adlard
2015-07-27 03:33:07 +0000 UTCYeah this was a really really close race even thou the one I was going for had taken the lead and you had to make a choice I not tripping for your decision its all good, maybe I can use this idea later on in the story. As far as any details in the room they go to maybe something like a futa trophy room or library that has all the previous chiefs that rule the tribe or special paintings or statues of the there tribe fighting against the other tribe or monsters. As for the monster girls I think it's best to make them as different types, it fits well for such a big island they are in. Like for example you can do monster girls that are Succubus (demons), Elves, Slime girls, Fairy or creature with wings, and Cat or Wolf girl monsters. I really like the demon, elves, and wolf girls more but all those are still good to :)
Shotred
2015-07-27 02:52:50 +0000 UTC
